Jan14: WriteUP: Maang kab Bharoge Sajanaa!!!!!

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Precap: Wednesday the 13th

For inseparable NiSha it was Wednesday the 13, but Friday the 13th, as court parted them.😭😭 Jeeju thinks it's easy for him to get Nihal now (you---😡). The two maassies and Nihall had very tearful send off ( us too) Maasi breaks down after demean Kekai takes her TROPHY ( read Nihaal), that she recently won by cheating.
Sexy Santa left behind thinking (kaash is car main Ayesha ki bidai hoti🤣)

Part 1: The Confrontation

Shattered Ayesha runs to temple ( yaya same one, where she could be possible bride🤣), breaks down questioning devi maa, why she did this to her??? Is she happy now?? what crime did she commit, that her support, her life was taken away, she was living for him, he was her support, when she was all alone( ooohhh A here you go🤗🤗). Till now she is only loosing, parents, sis family, now for whom should she live. A needs answer ( Arpita has answer devi maa does not: go kill Kamini Vardhan Singh , done, you will achieve nothing by crying in front of Devi maa). She cries her heart out, who will be my support ( help is on your way madam, your potential pati; aka Veer) haahaah he has come calling Ayesha, (OMG, unbelievable, even now they do not forget to stare each other🤣, boy way tooo strong magnetic force.) Finally he asks if she is okay,( okay veer you are so dead now🤢) Ayesha yells why you here, Sexy Santa says he was worried about her ( kaise kahu ayesha tum nahi samjhogi kuch kuch hota hai), so come to check on her if she is okay ( ya let Nihaal stay with mom, and we both should go to pre wedding honeymoon to fresh your mood🤣 I know me out of my mind)) Veer is still sir 😕( pakka A ko bhi kuch ho raha hai) she angrily says wow someone should learn from you how to spoil the life and then comfort them. ( oye do action talk less, slap him, so brain cells get activated😆 today is Thursday right Himani???😉 Veer says hear me out, A interrupts enough, now my turn ( sunte rahana hum bolenge, tum chup rehana hum bolenge😆)The verbal slapping session starts right here, she goes why did you come in my life, why? ( aree amma to become your husband yaar, can't you get it. vardhan bando ko shimal ki sharma kudiya hi pasand hai🤣) If you would n't be there then we were together ( yaa but love life nahi hoti na🤣)have you come to see if I'm alive?? what else do you want from me??( go girl go me waiting for physical slap)You have taken every thing. I'm alive, but you have my soul ( Veer thinks in his mind yup, when can I have your heart tooo honey??🤣There is a life but the spirit of life is your property, you took smile of face, by taking Nihaal away you have killed everything, my life, my wish, my ambition. all my happiness is gone. Why sir why?? ( sir???ohhh😲 Is pyaar ko main kya naam dooo) Now I have only sorrow and pain in my heart ( veer you have no place till now), that calling only Nihaal. You are responsible for my condition ( some one needs to make up big time😛), you were so right that you could go to any extent to get Nihaal. I can not believe that to get him you can make some one living dead. After routine check ( staring) ayesha storms off dumping cold water on my dream ( Oops maang nahi bhari sajna ne😭) Now veer's turn to devi maa, saying I did for mom's life ( oki now you are blind Shravan kumar, sxey Santa cancel), ayesha is misunderstanding me ( yaya tell her you love her so much that you have no regret to take nihaal away. HYPOCRATE😡😡), I never asked anything from you but asking now please take her pain away,only you can help her ( wow, first you take her life, soul and now running from responsibility asking devi maa to take care of her??? why?? you made a mess, why should devi maa clears it up. 😡😡oops ayesha needed to slap him😲)
Back to Terrorist mansion ( vardhan's house) Trophy ( readNihaal) gets a grand welcome.( flower, arti, you artificial people). Daadi says to his trophy you completed my family, come everything is yours ( ah ha some one did not like it no prize to guess: jeeju), but pretends to be happy. All nihaal does is give disgusted look to daadi.👏👏Should I assume beginning of Gandhigiri.

Part 2: Judai ke difficult pal

Servant tries to take off Nihaal's shoes. he stops telling him that you are elder than me. Maasi taught me to respect elders, please do not do this or else if maassi comes to know she will feel very bad.👏( invisible slap one to daadi, so granny who's time has started yours to get slap or Ayesha's sanskar to win) hmmm does this mean Nihaal thinks he is guest there. All are shocked. ( noops I'm not kinda liking it) Shravan kumaar consoles mom saying give him some time, ( tere se jyada sexy kameena, I have not seen 😡) do not feel bad slowly he will come close to her ( we will see). Bunty aa gaya. Nandini introduces, kids shocked. ( I'm not. I was right. arnab is bigda bunty) Now it is fun to watch competition between money and sanskar.👏👏 Arnav says you??? Nihaal still in shock. Veer asks you know each other ( of course. maamu. me the bunty was the one who tortured nihaal, when his bacchi GF took him away😆)Bunty tells he is in my class( now my question is veer does not even know which school his nephew studies??? Ayesha pakka outranks him in this) Granny says good now you will be in same room ( nahiiiiiii, no bully bunty with nihaal please). by staying together your friendship will flourish more ( or rivalry, jeeju ka beta hai woh, how come snake's offspring will be cute bird ) Bunty bluntly turns down offer, jeeju yells, finally he agrees. Pizza comes for nihaal, veer feeds, nandini says we should go shopping you take 3-4 days off from school ( I thought school was closed for 5 days, what type of mom nandini is??? does not even know what is happening in school?? and what is the need to take off for shopping🤪. ooohhhh PB never missed you so much). Bunty promises himself dekhlonnga garibchand( means poor kid)
back to love hut (read ayesha's apt) Pammi tries to feed ayesha for nihaal's sake Ayesha agrees whatever happen is good for nihaal. then why is she feeling so bad, I should be happy. anyways, let's talk something else. She tells her doubt if nihaal will be happy there, answers herself how silly, he surly happy there, as he has everything, toys, family, love,( but no maassi) and breaks down ( me tooo😭😭) saying more I try to go away from him more he comes closer to me.( good for you na) I'm missing him tooo much. pammi says you made this part of your pain, try to come out of it. A tells she knows she is in delusion, but this pain will never reduced. Both look family painting nihaal made, when A tells he made life colourful. Pammi suggests her to think about his future. A goes tomorrow first time Nihall will be without me on his B'day ( interesting). I used to cook his favorite food on this day. ( hmmmm do I see like father like beta??? burning bunty )

Part 3: Mature Nihaal

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Chaachu reading story to nihaal, but he goes to flash back with maassi. Seeing tears, veer asks if he does not like the story ( you are one heck of brainless sexy tiger. he is missing maassi you idiot😡) is not robin hood your favorite ( yipeeee it's thursday, activation of brain cells) veer asks if he is missing maassi.( jerk veer to himself kaise batoo nihaal mujhe bhi uski yaad aa rahi hai)
nihaal nodes. veer emotionally black mails him saying you maasi will hurt if she knows this??? do you want to trouble her ( abhi main is ke head pe kya maaru). Veer asks him to wipe the tears ( see the difference, maasii would have not asked instead would have wiped tears herslef), Veer walks out of the room when he hears N's prayer, please god take care of maasi,chaachu is right I should not cry for sake of massi, but I miss her so much, tomorrow is my b'day, I was never without maasi on this day, please send a angel so I celebrate it with massi ,chhachu gets happy, overhearing this, smiles ( oye, you happy just with a thought to see a girl??? hmmm😛) he says I promise, I will bring back your smile ( and apna pyaar oki oki I'm saying this not him🤣), and smile ( I do not know what is the difference in hassi and muskaaan??? should not it be haasi and khushi??? dialogue writer or sidhaarth check please???) . I willl take you to meet your maassi ( wow sunday ke pahile hi date???what's the deal is there still chance of wedding today kya??🤣) I will celebrate your b'day, that you would not even imagine. ( stop bakvaas yaar, bring maassi enf for him)

Part 4: Chota Gandhi : Nihaal

In the morning Ayesha cooking ( guess nihaal ki dish), Shridhar calls to Pammi, she tells him, she will be in the hotel, as last night she did not want to leave ayesha so stayed back there ( is there another love story kya??? shridhar-pammi🤣) Pammi confused questions Ayesha, gets answer ki nihaal's b'day so she is cooking his favorite dishes ( ohhh ayesha🤗, do not make me cry please😭) Pammi gets back her in reality telling party will be at Vardhan's house. A says I have permission to meet once a week ( bravo, like the attitude, confidence👏. Chance for date too). Pammi plays cupid, giving her phone,and leaves saying she would let her know about party.
Terrorist mansion break fast time ( oh man yeh to sab normal ho gaya, Nihaal please do something😕) Nihaal having breakfast, bigda, bully bunty comes, nihaal says GM, bunty stumps him saying my morning become bad by seeing you, plus I'm not at all happy knowing you are my brother, by sharing room with you. He goes on how dare he drinking milk in his mug, Nihaal tells cook uncle gave. Nihaal gives him back. Bunty to bunty hai totally in war mood, puts tons of salt in it, bully him to drink it, warns him to stay away from his stuff. Nihaal scared, as he drinks the milk( oh I see where they going with these stomach upset with bad milk, resulting food poisoning on his B'day kya, do I smell way to get massi back kya??? 😕oops what do I do with my stupid optimism😛 nooooo again cold water on me.🤢 all terrorists have come there. granny asks not to drink milk, wishes him B'day. Bunty mad. Granny lie what do you think we do not know your b'day, how can I forget your B'day( chup jhoothi, shravan kumar ne bataaya, shravan kumar overhears, you people are very well trained how to take some one else credit😡😡) Shravan chaachu says we will have lot of fun ( hahaha he or you??? with your date)nandini says whatever you wish will happen ( nihaal mauka,get maassi) here comes the twister, granny asks bunty to drink nihaal's milk, gives nihaal strawberry shake( jeeju and bunty, both are perfect for each other. Plans back fire them.👏👏👏). adult terrorist ( read granny) forces to child terrorist ( bunty) to drink the milk ( arpita loving this, devi maa indeed answering prayers NiSha, chaachu) all force, nandini says you spoil your health by soft drinks ( ya now a days tax on soft drinks too, OOps what type of mother r u??? you realized now, sowii forget you were so focused to help mom in winning trophy) chotu gandhiji ( read Nihaal) stops him asking daadi to give bunty shake too ( Nihaal ke bacche😡😡 who asks you doosra gaal aage karne?????terrorists do not understand love ki bhasha, kill them) Trio terrorists plan for more torture ( read B'day party). while bunty warns chotu gandhiji, wait and watch ( ja ja bohat dekhe tere aur tere father jaise). terrorists decide to have party at home. Jeeju takes responsibility of party ( nooooo please or should I say yes so NiSha can reunite😕) Nihaal is sad. After Nihaal leaves, Shravan kumar asks permission to date maassi???🤣 means asks mom why not ayesha should also be invited( kya maang liya re???) Screen freezes on granny's shocked face.

Tomorrow: B'day party

Nihall at his b'day party. Ayesha standing away feeling inferior about her gift ( you are the gift for him
maassi). Pammi explains how priceless her gift for nihaal.( so budhiya maan gayi date ke liye kya??? well I guess so)

Tune in to watch what hungaama happens at party. ( I decided not to be optimistic for rest of the week🤢 my thinking back firing me like jeeju)

Enjoy
Arpita

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I love your updates Arpita! and all the names you gave to V...the best were Shravan Kumar and sexy Kameena...simply awesome!
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Today's episode was really good i especially enjoyed the Veesha mandir scene and Nihal scenes the shoe one and while sleeping...Veer our hotee with hair cut looked cool in white Kurta kash Ayesha bhee sath hoti
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Originally posted by: usa_virher_2464

I love your updates Arpita! and all the names you gave to V...the best were Shravan Kumar and sexy Kameena...simply awesome!



Yeh Aripta has quite unique dictionary ...i wonder what she is going to call her future hubby...Veer keh liye to line main kaafi log hain including me 😳 😆
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Arpita..Start the activation of brain. Thank goodness and really abt time. I like that Veer was concerned abt her... Though he rightfully got slapped. But alas I feel veer is gng to stand for her and get more involved with nihal.

Bunty.... Spoiled brat...But I foresee a rift in the family between sis and veer. Veer seemed to be attached to nihal and was displeased by buntys selfishness. Like father like son.... Yuck!!!

Demented A?& granny...did u see how displeased she was when was respecting his elders...she's crazy. I hope they have social services check in on this looney toon

Jiju and nanidni...I'm not gng to waste my breath.

Veer and nihal....Very cute...reading the story to him and putting him to sleep. Ladies our boy is wakeing up and thinking...o veer smile....so handsome.

Ayesha...poor girl. How much can she cry now? Veer give her a reason to smile. Nihal is in need of his chaachi now.

Nihal betA....please help chaacu out it he stops thinking again.

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Originally posted by: kiran_rd



Yeh Aripta has quite unique dictionary ...i wonder what she is going to call her future hubby...Veer keh liye to line main kaafi log hain including me 😳 😆


Kiran
who's husband you are talking about????😕Ayesha or arpita?????🤣
Very honest with you I'm running out of adjectives now for vardhan.😡😡
do not you even dare to think in your dream about my copy right🤣
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Hey Arpita........fabulous update. This is my 1st post here but i love reading yours & Anjana's updates. Despite the rona dhona eppy your update made me laugh.......its hilarious.........🤣

Veer= Shravan Kumar.......🤣

I guess its time for Ayesha to become Jhaansi ki Rani now.........😆



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Arpita.....u don't noe how much I love reading ur updates..even after watching the entire episode...ur update just makes me go through it all over again.....loveeee it....n ur title...almost cracked me up..🤣

Back to todays episode.....I liked it....The temple scene was too filmy.... Ayesha accusing the devi Maa loudly.....n Veer comes just at the point when she asks for her partner...her support n all....

Veer is nt brainless... 😳 He does use his heart more often than his mind....but not brainless.... 😛 Loved the way he said that he was concerend for her...so came to check her out.......n the way he addressed devi maa was also cute....he wanted Ayesha to be happy...(after snatching away Nihaal from her...Agreed....Indeed Brainless!!!!!! 😆 😆)


Sooooooooooooooooooooo......that invisible slap on dadima's face.....loved it...Nihaal...is such a cutie....Ayesha's sanaskar's r surely to win over money........n those innocent looks of Veer....his feelings for Ayesha will come to the high point...as soon as he starts spending his days with baby Ayesha...I mean her reflection Nihaal.....the more his love for Nihaal will get strong.....the more he will start loving Ayesha....

The bedtime...story scene..... 😭 Poor Nihaal remembering his maasi....but those cute expressions of Veer while telling him stories.....wowo.....he looked just like a baby himself... 😳

Ek..Avinash kya kaam tha...jouska baccha bhi aa gaya...humhare NIhaal ko tang kerne.....😡

How mean of nani to say that she remembered his b'day.....aabe...Nihaal ko bolte huye nahi sunta...to kisi ko pata bhi nahi chalta......bari ayyi nani banne 😡

Waiting 4 2mrw's episode.....I hope Veer comforts Ayesha telling her that she is the most imp gift for Nihaal.......Loved Ayesha n her strong statements.......I am just loving her character....n loved VeeHal too...... ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: swan20

Hey Arpita........fabulous update. This is my 1st post here but i love reading yours & Anjana's updates. Despite the rona dhona eppy your update made me laugh.......its hilarious.........🤣

Veer= Shravan Kumar.......🤣

I guess its time for Ayesha to become Jhaansi ki Rani now.........😆




Hey
welcome.to forum 🤗 ( what should I call you}
thanks for following anj's suggestion to take part in discussion👏
I am hoping some big step for a or N too. who knowa may be when promo will be out we will know😕
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@ Payal
your welcome. Thanks for your comments too.🤗

According to our psychologist Himani's brain cells activation theory:
Veer has brain cells, those are inactivated till Wednesday. Only some factors get secreted on later part Thursday to activate them.
The research for factors those will activate his brain cells 24 / 7 is in the progress yet.🤣

well to be very honest with you I liked veer coming to temple to look for ayesha, but not asking devi maa to take care of her. he has no realization what did he do by parting NiSha. Why she should listen to him. what ground he was asking her to hear him out. If he did care for her then he should have stood up in the court requesting for settlement. he indeed partner in crime. Ayesha has full right to yell at him.
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