SS: Meeting after 15 years (Pt 14-Pg 58 - 13/2)

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@metoyou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

You did it again 👍🏼 thanks a lot! And you are really making us wait for that face off.

Good mixture of their emotions, well done.

Finally Dr. Neil K is here...looking forward to how beautiful this dance will be. Knowing him he might be rude to her...unless Nachiket takes over 😉

Edited by metoyou - 9 years ago

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@Tears90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Ah! This is an amazing story going on Imagine. Please update soon. I'm dying to read the face off...

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Santosh

@Santosh99

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Just love the entire update but you ended the update at the wrong moment

Now i'm jumping in excitement to see what will happen when they see each other! Please update sooon! 🥱

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sushmaArshi

@sushmaArshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Imagine... Awesome... . 👏 But you ended the update at the wrong moment u better update next part ASAP otherwise anjaam teek nahi hoga 😛

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imagine43

@imagine43

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: sushmaArshi
Imagine... Awesome... . 👏 But you ended the update at the wrong moment u better update next part ASAP otherwise anjaam teek nahi hoga 😛

Kya zabardast dhamki hai!!

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imagine43

@imagine43

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: sushmaArshi
Imagine... Awesome... . 👏 But you ended the update at the wrong moment u better update next part ASAP otherwise anjaam teek nahi hoga 😛

Kya Zabardaast dhamki hai!! 😲

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shabana

@shabz50

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Lovely update but u finished at the wrong time need to know what happens next please.

You write neil and raginis emotions so well beautiful writing just loved it and how both of them instantly recgonise each others writing and the pain they are going thru and they have not forgetten their memories loved it

Please update asap

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Aaah...talk about suspense!

Another great update delving deeper into their feelings without each other, thanks for this Imagine.

I can't wait until they dance again after so many years

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

This was lovely! She remembers his smileys; how adorable! 😳 😆

Nachiket sipping the coffee on his old Ragini's behest was brilliant! She's still in his every thought and every action. Also, I liked how Ragini couldn't work in the presence of that note, the constant reminder of the hope that maybe, just maybe, he's back. 😳 As much as she tries to deny it, he still holds her heart.

And Imagine dear, I think you picked the perfect place to stop! Your FF is like watching a show and I just felt that sudden stop and the boom at the end of an episode when I reached the end of this update. 😆 Now, that being said, I expect another update in a day's time (at most). 😉

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imagine43

@imagine43

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: neiralove
This was lovely! She remembers his smileys; how adorable! 😳 😆

Nachiket sipping the coffee on his old Ragini's behest was brilliant! She's still in his every thought and every action. Also, I liked how Ragini couldn't work in the presence of that note, the constant reminder of the hope that maybe, just maybe, he's back. 😳 As much as she tries to deny it, he still holds her heart.

And Imagine dear, I think you picked the perfect place to stop! Your FF is like watching a show and I just felt that sudden stop and the boom at the end of an episode when I reached the end of this update. 😆 Now, that being said, I expect another update in a day's time (at most). 😉

Thank you so much for this beautiful feedback. I am glad you liked it

I felt that the update was too long and too much in detail that would bore the reader..I had almost decided to not write again after finishing this one.

But your words have completely brought back the enthu.. Thanks for reviving me!!

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