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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: metoyou

Can someone please go hug that woman and tell her that she did NOT fail as a mother nor as a wife...


Damn it Shikha, why you make Ragini cry so much. HEARTBREAKING this is. No woman deserves to be treated like this, especially not Ragini. She has done every single thing for her kids to give them a peaceful life and here she is blaming herself for everything that happened to her good for nothing son Aarav.

Uppar se, she thinks she failed as a wife... so unfair!


Thanks for this deep emotional piece. Ragini's deepest emotions really came alive...


Narges, my dear! šŸ¤—

I know, she's a fantastic mother and a wonderful wife...if she could only accept her children's mistakes as theirs and not her own. I'm glad it resonated with you, though. Thanks for reading darling! ā¤ļø
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

Shikha this is beautiful

I felt like crying with her

Perfect

Loved it

I gotta go now

Remember my prompt


Awww thank you Tiana! I do remember your prompt, but there are a couple things I need to get out there first, so it might take a little bit of time. But I promise, I won't keep you waiting too long! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Vicky7

Ragini,is such a cute cuddly baby,can't see her cry.😭

Nachiket is a sober version of Arav,both dad and son are idiots.šŸ˜’

Very well written.thank ušŸ‘


Thanks Vicky for reading and liking it! 😊 Ragini doesn't deserve to be crying like this, and Nachiket definitely has lost his ability to read her. The woman that he once knew like the back of his palm is a complete stranger to him now...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm very late as usuall šŸ˜† but it's better late than never 🄱
Ok feedback time- Just one word Wow! The way you describe ragini's emotions shifts me to different world. šŸ‘ whatever you gonna write will be nothing less than fantastic. No doubts about that! You use such beautiful words to describe the emotions in your writing and i fall short of words all the time to tell you how excellent your writing is! Such amazing talent we have on this forum... Love it! Big thanks to each one of you! Will miss everything
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Shikha that was lovely how u described raginis emotions and how heartbroken she was thinking she failed as a mother and as a wife. Beautifully written.
Sorry comments are late
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Santosh99

I'm very late as usuall šŸ˜† but it's better late than never 🄱
Ok feedback time- Just one word Wow! The way you describe ragini's emotions shifts me to different world. šŸ‘ whatever you gonna write will be nothing less than fantastic. No doubts about that! You use such beautiful words to describe the emotions in your writing and i fall short of words all the time to tell you how excellent your writing is! Such amazing talent we have on this forum... Love it! Big thanks to each one of you! Will miss everything


No Santosh, you're not late at all! Thank you so much for reading and for your wonderful praise...I don't deserve even half of that, but your comment brought a smile onto my face. 😳 I'm just happy you liked it. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabz50

Wow Shikha that was lovely how u described raginis emotions and how heartbroken she was thinking she failed as a mother and as a wife. Beautifully written.

Sorry comments are late


Thank you so much Shabz! Don't worry, you're not late at all--thanks for reading dear! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShyNomad

😭

More later <3


No Nidhi, please don't cry! šŸ¤— Now you see why I didn't want to post it...

I'll be waiting for your detailed comments ā¤ļø
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: neiralove


Thanks for the lovely comment Janani! I would love to read your work too, if you don't mind 😳



My work?? no, im so poor at this!!! i dont write. hope u misunderstood me as sm1 else.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Janani.



My work?? no, im so poor at this!!! i dont write. hope u misunderstood me as sm1 else.


No, I meant that for you! Please try and write something dear, at least before the show wraps up 😳 I'm sure it will be fantastic! 😊

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