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Hi i have written this SS on Tiana's prompt it was suppose to be one shot but after hearing the news made it a SS just to remember how we would have liked to see Neira.
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Nachiket and Ragini had been married for a while now they had four kids Ranbir who was 5 Nishi who was 4 and twins Aagham and Aarav who were 6 months old. Nachiket was head of cardio at a private hospital and ragini at the minute was a full time mum.

Evening 7pm
Ragini had put the kids to sleep nachiket had promised he would be home earlier then the usual time of 9pm 10pm he had been coming home at lately. Ragini had made his favourite dish and his favourite dessert she wanted this to be special it was the first time in weeks they would have dinner together and spend some time together just them two.

Hospital
Nachiket looked at the time 7pm he had promised ragini he would be home early today he was looking forward to spending time with just her he had missed her. He grabbed his blazer when his PA came in "sir they need you to look at one of Dr Amans patients he is really unwell" "no they will have to get Dr Aman to come in i am going home" "they can't get hold of him" just then dr devika came in "dr khanna we are losing him come quickly" nachiket threw his blazer on the chair and looked at his PA "keep trying Dr Aman get him here now" he went to see the patient he was bleeding internal he needed a operation. "Did we get hold of Dr Aman" "he will be here in a few hours he was away at a party u will have to do the operation Dr Khanna" Dr Devika said. He went back to the office and punched the chair in frustation.

Home 8pm
Ragini was still waiting for him to come these last few months had been hard for both of them they were getting used to being parents of four kids and still trying to keep the spark and passion in their marriage like in the early days. Ragini had noticed a change in the way nachiket looked at her since the twins were born that passion for her had seemed to disappear from his eyes or was she just thinking too much. The phone rang jolting her out of her thoughts she picked it up "hi ragini" "hi nachiket" "look ragini before he could finish "you have to work late again" he did not say anything "i am really sorry ragini" "its fine" she put the phone down. He slammed the reciever down he was angry he let ragini down again. She sat down at the table and looked at candles and everything she had done for him she blew the candles out and went to bed she was not hungry anymore. She checked on the kids before going in their room.

Bedroom
She got changed and got into bed her mind drifted back to before the twins had come they way nachiket would look at her flirt with her suprise her with romantic breaks even if it was only for a day and his eyes would always be full of passion for her but lately she did not see that passion in his eyes. He loved her she knew that but did he only see the mother of children now and not his lover when he looked at her. She cried herself to sleep that night thinking of nachiket and thinking they had lost that passion in their marriage.

Home 12am
Nachiket was home the house was so quiet he put his jacket and bag down he walked into the kitchen what he saw broke his heart the table was all nicely laid out with candles and it was all his favourite food but nothing had been touched she had not eaten he was even more angry at himself now. He walked into the kids rooms they were alseep he kissed them and then went into their room.

Bedroom
Ragini was asleep the light was still on she would only switch it off if he was there. He went and got changed and came back and got in bed he went to kiss her goodnight and he stopped he saw the tear streaks on her cheeks he leaned back she had cried herself to sleep this broke his heart he had made his ragini cry. He leaned back and went to sleep.

Morning 7am
Nachiket woke up he could hear the kids ragini was already up he put a t-shirt on and went out.

Kitchen
Ragini was feeding nishi and ranbir nachiket walked in nishi jumped up and ran to him "papa" he gave her a hug and a kiss "morning princess u ok" she nodded "go finish your breakfast" she went back and sat down next to ragini he went round and kissed ranbir and said morning to him he looked at ragini "morning" "morning do you want coffee" she went to get up "its ok finish feeding the kids i will get the coffee do u want some" "no thanks i have had tea" he went to make coffee he noticed the food from last night this broke this heart again. "Nishi and Ranbir get ur school bags go" she walked upto him "what do you want for breakfast nachiket" "ragini about last night" "its fine u had to work" "ragini please let me explain" "nachiket you have to go to work and i have the kids to sort now so please not now" she walked away she was angry and she had every right to be. He went and got ready to go to work. "Nachiket can you get these things please" "yes anything else" "no thanks" he kissed her and the twins goodbye. He dropped nishi and ranbir off at school.

Evening 6pm
Ragini had just put the twins down to sleep and now she was getting dinner ready for nishi and ranbir when she heard nishi shout papa.

Living room
She went in the room and saw him standing there he was home early "papa what all these" ranbir asked "these are presents for everyone" he gave nishi and ranbir their presents and walked upto ragini "these are for aarav and aagham and this is for you" "thank you" "mama are you not opening your present" nishi asked "no i will open it later you and ranbir come have dinner"

Bedroom 9pm
Kids were asleep ragini came in and saw the box on the bed the present he had got her she had her back to the door she did not notice him standing there. She opened the box it was a piece of silk lingere she looked at it and put it back in the box "you don't like it" she turned around and saw him "its nice" "you know MY ragini would have at least tried it on" "well i am not your ragini anymore i am just your childrens mother right" she went to walk away he grabbed her arm "what do you mean ragini" "you know what i mean" she walked away he followed her "no i don't know ragini what u mean" just then the bell rang. It was dimpy and karan.

Kitchen
Dimpy and karan had come to share their news about buying a resturant and had brought food. Nachiket and karan were in the living room dimpy and ragini in the kitchen. "Ragini is everything ok" "its fine dimpy" "it does not seem it have u and nachiket had a fight" ragini sighed and sat down at the table "no fight nothing like that" "ragini" "its fine dimpy honestly" dimpy lets go please. Karan and dimpy went home.

Bedroom
Ragini was about to go into the bathroom when nachiket stopped her "ragini what did you mean before when you said you are not my ragini" "you know what i meant" "no i did not" "nachiket please i am tired i want to go to sleep" "no not till u tell me what u meant" "you look at me now and all you see is your childrens mother thats all nothing else" "ragini thats not true" "i can see it in your eyes especially after the twins i am not your ragini anymore just a wife and mother not your lover" she went into the bathroom nachiket watched her go he banged the dressing table he was angry he made ragini doubt herself her beauty everything he was going to put it right he was going make her his ragini again.

Morning
Ragini and the kids were up so was nachiket he had not slept last night after what ragini had said to him. He had to put this right she had cried herself to sleep again last night. He knew what he had to do he rung maa then dimpy and finally the hospital.

Kitchen
Ragini was going thru the morning rotiune feeding kids and getting breakfast ready. Nachiket walked in and sat down "nishi ranbir papa will drop you off today" she looked at him "do you not have work" "i will go after" he said looking at her. His ragini was hurting and doubting herself. Nachiket went into the kids room and packed nishi and ranbirs bags and told them that they were staying at their naanis for a few days but not to tell their mum it was a suprise. He took the kids to school and went to drop their things off at maas.

Maa's House
Nachiket came and dropped the kids things off "nachiket aarav or aagham" maa asked "they are staying with dimpy" "beta i want to ask you something it



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it might not be my place but" "ask maa anything" "is everything ok between u and ragini?" He looked at her "why do u ask" "just the other day ragini came with the kids and she seemed not herself" "everything is fine i promise" or it will be he thought.

Home
Nachiket drove back he had to drop the twins off at dimpy and karans he went in ragini was suprised to see him home "nachiket what you doing home" he did not answer he went straight to the twins room and started packing their clothes and things he then got their car seats and went to the car with the bags and carseats he went to the living room and picked aarav and aagham up "nachiket where are u taking them" "dimpys" saying this he left. Ragini sat down she had tears in her eyes what had just happened why did nachiket take the boys and she had noitced this morning the extra bags for nishi and ranbir was he mad at her for what she said last night but that was between them why the kids. Nachiket dropped the twins off and was on his way back home.

Home
Ragini was ringing nachiket he was not picking up suddenly she heard the car he was back. He walked in and saw her but did not say anything walked straight to their room and grabbed a suitcase and started packing "nachiket what u doing where are the kids whats happening" he did not say anything just packed his and her things and took the bag to the car he came back and grabbed her hand "lets go" "where are we going nachiket" "you will see" he took her to the car and opened the door she sat in.

Car
He was driving she was looking at him "nachiket where are we going" "why do u not trust me" "i do but the kids" "i might be a crappy husband but i think i am a ok father the kids are fine" she looked at him "you are not" she stopped he looked at her "yes i am" he stopped the car to get some water. She watched him go. He got back in and gave her the water "nachiket" he looked at her "we are going somewhere where i will show you what you mean to me" she just looked at him. As they were driving ragini started recongnising the place could it really be. He stopped the car in front of a resturant.

Resturant Evening
The italian resturant where had propsed and where they used to meet he got out she followed. They went in no-one else was there just a violn and piano players he pulled the chair out for her she sat down "where is everyone" "just us tonight"
He booked the whole place for her. They had dinner it was all her favourite dishes. He stood up and put his hand out "dance please" she took his hand they were in the middle of the dance floor. He had his left arm around her waist her right hand in his right hand she had left arm on his shoulder. They were dancing when he pullled her closer. He whispered in her ear "i am sorry for dinner the other day" "its ok nachiket" "its not ok you made all that effort and then u went to bed hungry and i was the reason you cried youself to sleep" she had her chin on his shoulder "nachiket" "don't think i don't notice everything you do for me when you send food to the hospital for me and then my PA rings you when i have had the food because you will not eat till i have eaten and how you fast every tues and thurs for my health and sucess and you never ask for anything in return" he broke the hug and looked at her "lets sit down" they sat down he held her hand "ragini u never ask for anything today ask me for anything you want please" "i don't need anything i just want to be your ragini again" "ragini" "i know having the kids has changed things i know i have put weight on and i am so busy with the kids that we do not get the time for each other but nachiket u have stopped looking at me the way u did before that passion in ur eyes is missing and i don't know how to get that back or if i can" he looked at her he could not believe that his ragini thought he did not have the same passion for her like before if only she knew how much passion he had for her. He got up and paid the bill ragini looked at him maybe they could not get it back. "Lets go ragini" she got up and followed him he was driving when his phone rang he answered it "hi maa are you ok and nishi aarav hi nishi you ok beta yes one min" he gave the phone to ragini she spoke to nishi and aarav and her mom. Where are we going now nachiket "to get answers to your questions that u have asked tonight and the ones that have been in ur mind for days" she looked at him.

Farmhouse
He pulled up in front of a massive house he got out and ragini followed he opened the door "go in ragini i will just bring the bag" she walked in it was beautiful she sat down on the sofa. Nachiket came in with the bag and he was on the phone "one min dimpy i will give it to ragini" he walked upto her "ragini its dimpy" she took the phone "hi dimpy are u ok how are the kids" nachiket put the bag upstairs he came back down. "Are the twins ok" "yes they are fine" "do u want a drink ragini" "no thank you" he came and sat down next to her he looked at her and moved closer to her he held her hand "ragini i am sorry u think that i don't have the same passion for u as before" he put her hand on his heart "this heart only beats for you ragini you are more then just my wife or my childrens mother you are my lover you are my everything the passion i had for u before we got married ragini that passion has just increased over these years" she got up and walked towards the window he looked at her and followed her he put his arms around her waist and kissed her neck she turned around and faced him "nachiket i " "ragini u have given me four beautiful children and u look more beautiful and sexy every day i only have eyes for you" she looked at him he kissed her she smiled "shall we go upstairs" he asked she looked at him "give me 5 mins" she went upstairs he followed her she went into the bathroom and him to their bedroom.

Bedroom
He was standing near the window waiting for his ragini when he heard the door open he turned and looked at her "nachiket where is the bag" "why" "i need to get changed" he walked upto her and took her hand and looked at her "no need to change" she moved back and he followed her until she hit the cupboard he was stood in front of her he placed a soft kiss on her jaw then her neck he grabbed her arms and pinned her against the cupboard and he kissed her more passiontly and then moved to her lips he kissed her more passiontly she opened her mouth and let his tongue in he was kissing her when he broke the kiss so they could catch their breath he looked at her "make me your ragini again" "with pleasure" he smiled at her he let her arms go and started kissing her again she put her arms around this neck he moved his hands down and grabbed her legs and lifted her up she wrapped her legs around him he moved back and walked to the bed and placed her down on the bed. He broke the kiss and looked at her and he kissed her in the crook of her neck and took her sari pin out and pulled her pallu down all the while kissing her he then put his hand behind her and undid her blouse and took it off and moved his hand down and took the rest of her sari off all the while kissing her everywhere she undid his shirt and he took it off. He was kissing her stomach she was moaning and her moans were getting louder each time he looked at her "sorry" he went upto her and stroked her face "its ok its only us here u can be loud as u want" he smiled at her and kissed her he was on top of her now and he took her in a hug and made love to her they both hugged each other tightly as they could reaching climax together. He rolled over she was on top of him now both sweaty and exhausted he stroked her back and kissed her forehead. She rolled over to her side he leaned over her kissed her and put the loose hair behind her ear "never say that you are not MY ragini ever again u are my ragini now and forever" saying this he kissed her again and took her in his arms and both went to sleep.

Morning 7am
Nachiket woke up and looked to his side she was asleep with her back to him he moved closer to her he put arm around her waist and kissed her neck "good morning jaan" "hmm morning" she was still half
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asleep he knew how to wake her up he smirked he moved her hair away from her bare back and started kissing her back he heard her moan and grab his hand that he had on her waist he contiuned his kisses moving down her back and to her waist she turned on to her back his lips touched her stomach he looked up at her "morning" he smirked she smiled at him "u are up early" "i want to make good use of our time without the kids" he smirked at her she just looked at him that spark was back in his eyes so was the passion. "Ragini" he raised his eyebrows "why did you stop then" he smiled and kissed her again and went on to make love to her again. She woke up he was not there she looked at the time it was 10am she sat up wraping the duvet around herself when she heard him coming up the stairs and he came in he had a tray with breakfast in "nachiket u should have woke me up" "why can't i make you breakfast" he sat down "its not as good as urs but still" they both had breakfast together when nachiket got up he was already dressed he grabbed the keys "nachiket where are you going" "i am going to get some food for lunch you stay here and relax" "nachiket did you" "yes i rung maa and dimpy the kids are fine aarav kept them up all night" he saw the worried look on her face "he is fine honestly" he kissed her "i will see u later"

Afternoon 2pm
Ragini was getting worried he had been gone a while and she had looked in the fridge there was enough food in there for both of them why did he lie? Meanwhile nachiket had been home and grabbed her present and picked aarav and aagham up and was on his way to pick nishi and ranbir up. She had rung him a few times but he wanted to suprise her.

4pm
Ragini was really worried now she had rung dimpy and maa both said they had not spoken to nachiket and he was still not answering his phone. Suddenly the door opened and nishi and ranbir ran in followed by nachiket with aarav and aagham. She hugged nishi and ranbir and kissed them they had only been away for day but she had missed them. She walked upto him and took aarav and aagham from him and sat down with them. He sat down next to her "did u like my suprise" "no" "no" "i was so worried i thought something had happened to you" "i am sorry" he kissed her sorry. Ranbir came "papa can we give mama her presents now please" "yes come on i will help u" ragini was just looking at them when they came back with about six bags. They sat down "put aarav and aagham down ragini" she put them in the travel cots. First ranbir gave her his present it was a mug with worlds best mom on it then nishi gave her present it was a silver necklace with the words mom on it with matching earrings she was crying the presents were beautiful. Nachiket gave her two more "these are from aarav and aagham" she opened them one was a two day break in a spa and the second present was her favourite perfume set. She kissed her kids and said thank you but she knew who had brought the presents she looked at him nishi said "papa where is your present to mama" "its here" he gave her box she opened it there was a beautiful eternity ring in it and engraved inside it was R & N FOREVER. She kissed him thank you.

Evening
They had dinner and the kids were watching cartoons when ragini asked nachiket "where are the kids going to sleep we don't have their cots or anything" "let me worry about that u get them ready for bed" ragini got them ready and nachiket came down and picked nishi up and held ranbir hand lets go papa will read u a bedtime story. Ragini looked at him with questioning eyes and followed him with the twins. They walked past their room into the other room and ragini was amazed it fully decorated as a kids room this is nishi and ranbirs room he put them to bed and tucked them in read them a story and kissed them goodnight ragini was watching this from the door. He got up and looked at her now the twins he walked to the other room and that too was decorated for kids and had two cots in it he looked at ragini she put them down in their cots and hugged him "you did all this" "yes just for you jaan and i bought this house aswell" she looked at him shocked "nachiket why" "what do u mean why u don't like it" "i do but" "so we get away from everything once in a while and the kids will love it here" "thank you its beautiful and thank you for all the presents they were wonderful" "what can i say my kids have the best taste" she smiled.

Bedroom
Ragini walked in and saw a box on the bed and opened it up she saw the same black silk lingere that he had got before and she did not wear then she picked it up and smiled and went to the bathroom. He was watching her from the door he smiled. She came out of the bathroom he was stood in front of the window on his phone he looked up and smiled at her he finished the call. She went and got into bed he smiled she was teasing him now he took his shirt and trousers off and climbed into bed she still had her back to him he went closer and and turned her around so she was looking at him "my ragini is looking beautiful" she just hugged him and kissed him on his neck then his jaw he looked at her "we will have to be quiet tonight" saying this he kissed her and made love to her.

Morning 8am
Nachiket was woken up with a thump he saw nishi and ranbir jump on the bed "morning papa" they both shouted he got up "morning" ragini walked in with the twins and sat down on the bed with them she put them on the bed and nishi ranbir were playing with them. She stood next to him and hugged him he kissed her forehead "thank you for a beautiful family" she cuddled closer "thank you for making me your ragini again" "you were never not my ragini" she smiled they stood there watching their kids playing.

The End.
Edited by shabz50 - 9 years ago
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Shabz, Shabz, Shabz,
Reading this made me feel so good. Ragini is insecure, and I don't blame her for being one, but Nachiket gets all the points when he removes her insecurity. This was beautiful! The family scenes were full of love and warmth! Thank you for writing this!😊
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Originally posted by: loveleen3

Shabz, Shabz, Shabz,

Reading this made me feel so good. Ragini is insecure, and I don't blame her for being one, but Nachiket gets all the points when he removes her insecurity. This was beautiful! The family scenes were full of love and warmth! Thank you for writing this!😊


Glad u liked it hope tiana likes it hope i did justice to her prompt
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Wow. Shabz. You again did it with the simplicity and the beautiful story telling.
Loved reading it. And it's such a welcome relief to imagine them in such a simple, domestic setting .

Will read again. Thanks
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Originally posted by: poetic

Wow. Shabz. You again did it with the simplicity and the beautiful story telling.

Loved reading it. And it's such a welcome relief to imagine them in such a simple, domestic setting .

Will read again. Thanks


Thank you for liking it i wrote this before the news
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Shabz,
I so enjoy these windows into their domestic life and how they deal with normal everyday issues that all couples go through. I will need to read it again but just wanted to thank you for writing this.
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Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Shabz,

I so enjoy these windows into their domestic life and how they deal with normal everyday issues that all couples go through. I will need to read it again but just wanted to thank you for writing this.



Thank you for liking
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG SHABZZZ
You were doubting THIS?!
This is so sizzling! So steamy and so romantic!!

Now all I can think of is neck kisses <3

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