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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hawww...Why?

Why this punishment?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: iamcurious

Hawww...Why?

Why this punishment?


never mind
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Roothe hue ho kyu...milke judaa ho kyu? Kuch kaho kuch sunooo...aise baithe ho kyu?

Tellooo naaa Rachna. Please *puppy face*
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey rachna dear 🤗
I cant find word to describe your writting skills and amazingnes of this OS👏

It was a master peace
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Rachanaaa wassup! Why the ellipsis as a title?
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Originally posted by: NeiRaFreak

Meee 😃 First after a looong time 🥳

UnRes

Rachna Rachna Rachna 🤗 you are simply Superb lady 👏


These two are adorable and this OS and their convo Sigh! So heart touching and elegant. Though I haven't watched any single episode but THIS just THIS is what I want to see, at least the conversation part please... and yes how o how you do this? You understand them so well more than they themselves I guess and that puts life in your stories too 😊

Just loved it...What an exquisite writer you are 😳

Going to read this again 😃


Thanks Jia 🤗
Welcome back Sweetie, hope you get well soon. Miss you lots.
As for the story, the conversation is the only part I liked. I don't think our R would give in when the contract marriage is still looming over them.

anyway, am glad that you liked it.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: metoyou

Dear sweet mother of God...


Reading this at midnight is not making my sleep any easier. For heaven's sake, this is has to be one of the most beautiful love making moments I have ever read. Purity at its best!👏

To be honest, I am really lost for words how to praise this because no word can do justice to this kind of pure magic.

The transitions of a somehow confused Ragini to the Ragnin who gave herself completely was so natural. She was fragile and vulnerable. She was still wearing that mask of the tough one but finally had to take it of in front of him. He knows her inside out...

The way she opened up finally and let her worry, confusion, frustration, pain and love was so poignant and real.
A perfect blend of love, passion, yearnings and lust. Ragini saying ''make love to me'' - Mrs. Khanna in true sense.

If I fail to praise this exceptionally beautiful piece then how on earth am I going to praise you?
I seriously don't know how you do it every time, but I guess it's time to stop thinking about that because it will remain an unsolved mystery. You are incredibly good with words and you use them so perfectly, it really enhances the feeling of the story. You are a talent, bas ⭐️

THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU...

🤗


Thanks Narges 😃. Sometimes a few words are more than enough. Glad you enjoyed this.
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Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Rachna,

This is soo soo wonderful...I am in awe of how you weaved together such a beautiful scene that was raw and honest and romantic all at the same time.

Love? Yes, I was in love with my husband but I definitely could not admit as much to anybody else. Though I had admitted the very truth to him through my glances, my touch, my behaviour - in every possible way, but the words. He had admitted the same. But were we ready for a physical relationship? I chuckled internally thinking that sixteen years was a long time to wait.

My chuckle awakened him and he snuggled closer, his arm tightening around my middle, pulling me back to himself and then pressing my back into his chest. His nose was buried in my hair and he nuzzled my neck, planting little kisses on my hairline.


from this point forward...


"I know you'd never hurt me, Nachiket. And I need to let you know that ... I need you too."

Huge huge step for our R...


He sighed and pulled the covers over us as our skin cooled. Once we settled, he caught my eyes again. "I've always been in love with you Ragini," he admitted.

Of course we know that and he knows that, but the fact that they are finally being honest about their feelings lets her finally heal I think after all those years of pain and doubt.

How they came together physically was beautiful of course, but just the whole thing of how they found their way back to each other again...wow.

Thanks for this Rachna. ❤️


Thanks Nidhi.

Glad you liked it. 😃 I didn't actually, this is so uncharacteristic of R. I have messed up that bit. But I guess, it happens.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks Dear Santosh b😃
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Originally posted by: iamcurious

Thats some conversation and action 😆

LOVED it!

What do I even comment after having read something this wonderful AGAIN!

Cheers and long live 😆


Thanks a lot Bhumi 😃

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