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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

Now I am gonna bring in BDSM and green satin silk ... you wait !


Now THIS I cannot wait for 😳😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronitfan

OMMGGG Narges!!

That was just so sexy!! <3
Even you could not resist your twist on the prompt,eh? Ye dono hai hi aise.. it has has has HAS to result in something physical, because they've been holding it in for too long.. do you remember how Nachiket touched her all the time when they made their way back to each other the last time?

This time everything is on tenterhooks... this time their meeting will be even more passionate <3 This was such a lovely preview for that and a wonderful gift for Rachana.. and I agree with her, this needs a part two with Ragini giving it back to Nachiket for being so smug and so goddamn sexy!!!!! <3


Sukhi, you have NO idea how much of a challenge this was for me!
My God...I can dream Nachiket, I can drool over him but writing is too difficult yaar.

To be honest, the ending was the only I was sure about. Matlab, I did NOT want them to kiss.
Dude, he was all over her back then. He can't keep his eyes and hands off her.

Let's hope their meeting will be even more passionate, is has to!
No no no, please no second part...Can't handle yaar!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronitfan


Now THIS I cannot wait for 😳😃
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🤣 Sukhi, you got it actually.

I think they are okay with BD but not SM - that's way too sadistic 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronitfan


Now THIS I cannot wait for 😳😃


It's all yours Rachna...do whatever you want! Me waiting too! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please come back on earth... 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: metoyou


Sukhi, you have NO idea how much of a challenge this was for me!
My God...I can dream Nachiket, I can drool over him but writing is too difficult yaar.

To be honest, the ending was the only I was sure about. Matlab, I did NOT want them to kiss.
Dude, he was all over her back then. He can't keep his eyes and hands off her.

Let's hope their meeting will be even more passionate, is has to!
No no no, please no second part...Can't handle yaar!


narges, Ragini has to give it back to him - so please bring on Part 2. 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic


Agree..

They'll be so frikkin' hot with BD 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: metoyou


It's all yours Rachna...do whatever you want! Me waiting too! 😳


Not with this - this is yours. How come the Birthday gift is incomplete? 😆

The part I am talking about - I don't think IO have reached that level as yet, and I don't know much.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ronitfan


As long as it does not lead to Ragini MMS 😔

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: metoyou


Sukhi, you have NO idea how much of a challenge this was for me!
My God...I can dream Nachiket, I can drool over him but writing is too difficult yaar.

To be honest, the ending was the only I was sure about. Matlab, I did NOT want them to kiss.
Dude, he was all over her back then. He can't keep his eyes and hands off her.

Let's hope their meeting will be even more passionate, is has to!
No no no, please no second part...Can't handle yaar!


hahahaha I agree about the writing bit..
Thinking about him and them is so much fluid and so much easier 😳😳

I know you didn't want them to kiss but now you have to write something where Ragini has that type of a control over him for a change as well!

And about his bedroom eyes, don't even get me started 😳

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