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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: neiralove
What did you just do to me?!

Ab kya kiya ?

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neiralove

@neiralove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: poetic

Ab kya kiya ?

I just took a shower and you made the room so damn HAWT that I'm sweating again 😆

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: neiralove

I just took a shower and you made the room so damn HAWT that I'm sweating again 😆

Pl take a shower again 😆

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

"I figure one actual love making session for every serious consideration I've ever given the idea, hmmm?"

Yes, I agree. 😳 😉

Let's just say that when you put up the teaser, I was fanning myself so that I wouldn't faint. And then you updated the rest and I couldn't handle all the HAWT HAWT heat. And now I'm struggling to finish giving you feedback because I know that you prefer that before I faint... 😳

This was mind-numbingly, fantastically gorgeous! ☺️ I know that you generally prefer writing the more mature and emotional scenes, but I'm so glad you ventured to the other side because now I'm begging you for more 😳 Please please please, do write something like this once in a while. It's a special treat for us 😳

Ok, I can't wait any longer.

FAINT

Edited by neiralove - 10 years ago

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TiaMaaaaa

@TianaWrites

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: neiralove
"I figure one actual love making session for every serious consideration I've ever given the idea, hmmm?"

Yes, I agree. 😳 😉

Let's just say that when you put up the teaser, I was fanning myself so that I wouldn't faint. And then you updated the rest and I couldn't handle all the HAWT HAWT heat. And now I'm struggling to finish giving you feedback because I know that you prefer that before I faint... 😳

This was mind-numbingly, fantastically gorgeous! ☺️ I know that you generally prefer writing the more mature and emotional scenes, but I'm so glad you ventured to the other side because now I'm begging you for more 😳 Please please please, do write something like this once in a while. It's a special treat for us 😳

Ok, I can't wait any longer.

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@Blue: Agree👍🏼Your emotional pieces are excellent but this is no less. Do write something like this once in a while😊 Pleeej

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

That gif is so cute ... Awww ! Thanks a lot.

I will try though once in a while. This is not easy for me, frankly.

And yes, I edited a lot. 😈

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

YAAAYYY!!! 🤗 ❤️

Calvin and Hobbes! 😆

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Ragini Joshi

@RaginiJoshi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

THIS THIS THIS! They were totally 'in the mood' 😆

The erotic nature here, so alive, so wild, and yet have such a good core. Needless to say, I love your descriptions, the way you describe the surrounding. It seems I am actually watching them😳

And what I absolutely liked is, you keep everything sacred. Nothing trashy. And yet you managed to reveal an exciting and wonderful adventure between a husband and wife, our Nachiket and Ragini. Just like the Songs Of Solomon.

I loved their conversations, each and every. And specially that part Friendship, respect and love😆

Romance between the lines. I appreciate the pureness of them. The super duper vignette.

Mogwai bohot zyada khush😃 Thank you Di🤗

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loveleen3

@loveleen3

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

You know those lists we girls make of what all things our guy should have? The image of the dream guy? My image of the dream guy changes with every book that I read. From Ron Weasley to Mr.Bingley, Augustus Waters to Rhett Butler, at some point of time or the other, I have dreamt of all. And right now, the image in my mind is of the Nachiket of your story. I have copied this story. I'm gonna show it to mine. I want him to flirt like this. I want him to do mental maths, for god's sake! :P

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roneeta

@ronitfan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Oh my GOSH!

Rachana,

I think I just became a teenager all over again!

It's like the feeling of being starstruck and not being able to think of anyone and anything at all.. this Nachiket that you've brought alive through your writing.. making his Ragini feel so desired and cherished and being absolutely shameless (why should he!) about how much he wants and needs her.. missed her all these years.. lovely!

And the recurring bits about the male psychology! hahahahah that was epic! Well done, Ma'am! :D I am sure those hormones are going to be set loose by Mr.Khanna very very soon now that Ragini is going to change her look and all for the wedding and surely, some changes after! <3

Thanks for this Rachana.. for this intense, breathtaking piece of work!

Love you!

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