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Sanam

@t-bonegirl

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks Sanam. This was in my mind for the past few weeks, and I needed to download it off my system. Otherwise, I was getting a bit irritated. Now I am at peace. 😊

Then we should thank your system 😉 😆

Btw, your FF? Please update it naa 😳

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: t-bonegirl

Then we should thank your system 😉 😆

Btw, your FF? Please update it naa 😳

I think I have lost the track, will try but can't promise.

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roneeta

@ronitfan

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: poetic

Thank you. 😃 Glad you liked it.

LOVED 😳

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Sanam

@t-bonegirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: poetic

I think I have lost the track, will try but can't promise.

Yes, please do try! 😊

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

NOOO! You didn't tell me that you were going to post!

I lost my track record of being the first to comment

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

*SIGH*

Nachiket finally admitting to being the big baby that he truly is! 😳 This was so adorable in every single possible way that I am stuck here typing mindlessly without a clue as to what I should say next.

Maybe I should start with a HUGE THANK YOU! 😳 🤗

Ok, ok slightly more composed. I just loved that Nachiket was the vulnerable one in this--it's something I've always wanted someone to write about 😳 It's always Ragini that's crying, or asking for support, or simply quietly bearing the burden that life has thrown on her shoulders; but Nachiket deals with similar problems too--no one gives my poor baby a chance to vent it all out! So thank you for giving him that, he really needs it 😊 ❤️

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sun29

@sun29

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

this is beautiful...so real,so sensible and yet so emotional and touching ..the vulnerable neil ragini...the big baby that he is craving for attention from ragini...and he loves it when she does that...

thanks for using rain ,thunder for such a beautiful touching scene...if only the makers take nachiket off his horse and make him a mere human ..the one we saw with badi naani ...

ragini has so much love, if only NB would allow her to express and explore the same ...

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TiaMaaaaa

@TianaWrites

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Do I really need to say how beautiful this is? Because I can't find the words to fit my feelings right now!

What a wonderful writer you are!!

When she hears his voice calling for her,

And she runs to soothe him,

She ceases to care for the world around her.

And all that matters to her is him.

❤️

When he slumps into hers arms,

She puts aside all her doubts and fear,

And wraps him around in her arms,

He holds on to her like she is the only one to him dear.

❤️

When he tries to pull away from her,

She realizes what has caused his fear,

Knows that that somewhere deep inside her,

She carries the same fear.

❤️

When she holds him tight,

And tells him all about her father,

And how he soothed her one scary night,

Like a little child he holds on to her.

❤️

When she tells him what her heart feels,

And his heart thanks hers,

She wishes that he tells her what he feels,

'I love you' he whispers.

❤️

This is what I felt while reading😳 I absolutely loved this❤️

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: neiralove
*SIGH*

Nachiket finally admitting to being the big baby that he truly is! 😳 This was so adorable in every single possible way that I am stuck here typing mindlessly without a clue as to what I should say next.

Maybe I should start with a HUGE THANK YOU! 😳 🤗

Ok, ok slightly more composed. I just loved that Nachiket was the vulnerable one in this--it's something I've always wanted someone to write about 😳 It's always Ragini that's crying, or asking for support, or simply quietly bearing the burden that life has thrown on her shoulders; but Nachiket deals with similar problems too--no one gives my poor baby a chance to vent it all out! So thank you for giving him that, he really needs it 😊 ❤️

Thanks a lot Shikha 😃 🤗

Why didn't I tell you beforehand? Because I wasn't aware that I was going to write anything of this sort. It was just a spur of the moment decision - I was tired and irritated like hell, and I wanted to write ... just write.

I am glad you liked this vulnerable side of Nachiket as well. He has lesser issues, i feel. But then, he is just a Big Baby. 😆

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sun29

this is beautiful...so real,so sensible and yet so emotional and touching ..the vulnerable neil ragini...the big baby that he is craving for attention from ragini...and he loves it when she does that...

thanks for using rain ,thunder for such a beautiful touching scene...if only the makers take nachiket off his horse and make him a mere human ..the one we saw with badi naani ...

ragini has so much love, if only NB would allow her to express and explore the same ...

Thanks Sun ... he is indeed a Big Baby 😆 And yes, after marriage, Ragini will have to dedicate a greater of her affections, time and care tot him, albeit indirectly.

On the other hand, he really needs to get down from his Almighty attitude which is spoiling his chances

And yes, NB needs to do justice to Ragini and show her compassionate side as well.