FF Nachiket Ragini Le Jayenge - [Updated] Chap 5 [Page 35] - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

299

Views

24.2k

Users

27

Likes

293

Frequent Posters

t-bonegirl thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: metoyou



Update toh karoongi for sure! Lekin I want to read your filmy stuff too so I'm keeping an eye on this one for sure!


Wiese tumlog ka Joyride bhi kam filmy nai hai 😆
neiralove thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#32
A big thank you to everyone who has read and commented! We are super grateful for your support and we love you all! ❤️ 🤗 😊
MansurKhan56 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Sanam Sanam Sanam, Shabz Shabz Shabz & Shikha Shikha Shikha😆😆😆

440 volts ka Shockerwaa dediya mujhe😆😛

Creative thoughts are overflowing in all ya'll minds😆😆😆

Feedback Time:

And suddenly the wind blows adding more to Nachiket's lovestruck experience and blow Ragini's dupatta away. He feels a song being played in the background,


Ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga
Jaise khilta gulaab
Jaise shaayar ka khwaab
Jaise ujli kiran...

Song selection is awesome & Filmy. Too good mazaa agaya😆😆😆

She is mesmerized by his beauty, his masculine features. Their eyes lock for a moment then they realize they are in the park. Nachiket holds the dupatta out to her. The girl takes it and Nachiket notices her cheeks turning red. His heart skips a beat.

This is fantastic. Hats off👏👏👏

She turns to leave, not truly wanting to. She feels his eyes on her as she walks away slowly, wishing with all her might that he stops her.

Just then he grabs her wrist and her heart stops for a minute she slowly turns and he asks her looking directly into her eyes,

This is awesomely written😛😉

"May I know the name of this lovely lady?" This last line cracked me up😛😆😉


Nachiket is such a sexy name." The words were out before she could control them.

"Ragini looks down and bites her lip.

Nachiket is taken aback but then he smiles.

"I know." He winks at her again and she feels more embarrassed" This is awesome and Super.

After going through the story of new Neira, all i can say is both are ultimate opportunist😆😆 & i am grinning totally😃😃

A Suprise for u! Me & my partner who is invisible these days are coming up with our version of Neira😃😃

NB Ko hatao!😆 Sanam, Shabz & Neiralove ko lao as CV's😛😉 Romance & Comedy milega fans ko wo bhi dil bharkar😆😆

Let's trend this WeWantSanamShabz&ShikhainIKNMP😃

Fatafat update kar dijiye Itna karaye na intezaar!!!😃





t-bonegirl thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#34
MAK! 😃

After going through the story of new Neira, all i can say is both are ultimate opportunist😆😆 & i am grinning totally😃😃

Hahaha, right both are ultimate opportunists 😆 😆


Thank you MAK for the detailed comment in my style 😆


Nai..for comedy, you're the best! 😃


Arey waah..kaun hai partner? I can't wait!! Jaldi karo naa 😃

Edited by t-bonegirl - 10 years ago
ronitfan thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Waiting for your update, Sanam! :D
t-bonegirl thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Waiting for your update, Sanam! :D


Sukhi! 😃 I'm updating this one tomorrow pakka! 😉😃
MansurKhan56 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: t-bonegirl

MAK! 😃


After going through the story of new Neira, all i can say is both are ultimate opportunist😆😆 & i am grinning totally😃😃

Hahaha, right both are ultimate opportunists 😆 😆


Thank you MAK for the detailed comment in my style 😆


Nai..for comedy, you're the best! 😃


Arey waah..kaun hai partner? I can't wait!! Jaldi karo naa 😃


Sanam I am not the best in anything😆😆

Infact you guys are the best in everything😉😊. Be it Romance, Comedy & Serious Convos😛😛

Yes I often copy people😆😆 so gave comment in your style😆

Mera invisible partner doing some antics, but mana lunga😃

My version of Neira is planning stage since weeks😆😆. So thoda kare intezaar😃

I am eager for tomorrow update😳😳 In fact looking at the ticking clock😆😆

Tomorrow Jaldi aao plz itna karao na hum sab ko intezaar😆


Edited by MAK56 - 10 years ago
AngelsFlyAlone thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#38
OMG this was so cute n filmy! Luvd every bit of this! Pls write more Sanam diii
ShyNomad thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#39
I would love to see a filmy version of Nachiket and Ragini instead of all the sad drama we always get...fantastic start!
Her dupatta in his face

Great work all three of you, Shabz, Shikha, and Sanam!
Santosh99 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Aww what a creativity the filminess suits them so well. Quick update.

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".