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AngelsFlyAlone

@AngelsFlyAlone

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Sukhi diii how do u manage to spellbind us every single time? Sheer magic... So mesmerizing

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Sukhi,

I think I read this three times before I felt like I could finally comment...

It was so beautiful to see not just Nachiket bonding with his little princess but to see it through Ragini's eyes...that is a special moment for them as a family and you captured it so wonderfully.

My favorite part:

Pressing his lips to her ears, he hoarsely whispered 'You are the most beautiful woman on this planet" and Ragini just melted in a puddle of tears. Grabbing the nape of his hair, she wrapped herself around him, willing him to just gather her in his arms as she tried hard to contain her sobs.

Kudos to you for showing her emotionally labile after the pregnancy and having N there to support and understand. Such a gorgeous moment, I feel like I was there.

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: shabz50
Wow loved it beautiful written and sooo cute nachiket with his angel.

Thanks a lot Shabz - glad you liked it! 😳

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: goldstar678
I dont know what and how to comment.Just speechless.
Fathers always have more close bonding with daughter than the son.The flashback of your siggy and the one they showed yesterday (which they showed in the begining0 when he was operating her are very cute.

Aww thanks a lot Pavan..

really want to see all these tender moments on the show one day 😊

Edited by ronitfan - 10 years ago

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...
This OS was sweet and cute and beautiful just like a new born baby. Loved it😳
Nachiket and Nishi bonding was so so so lovely. Him adoring the baby was sweet😳

She was beautiful, inside out
So sweet of Nachiket to realize this😳

And my favourite line in the entire OS:

She may no longer be the most beautiful girl in his life, but she would always be the woman he worshipped.
So true😳

Loved it so much😳

That was my favourite line when I wrote it too, so thank you so much Tiana..

glad we all think alike 😳

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sushmaArshi
This one is just wow...I don't no wt to say...just beautiful...

Thanks so much dear :)

Your comment is enough!

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: hamna19khan
Nachi's love towards his new born is described beautifully..
Just wanna read it again and again

Aww thanks a lot Hamna..

Glad you liked my attempt at recreating a moment that could have happened 😳

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Sukhi...I am back with my detailed comment.

This was really something else. Matlab, many of us have written about NeiRa's romance, be it before or after marriage but rarely we see such good attempts about NeiRa as parents. And you have succeeded!

A father-daughter relationship is precious and it makes me emotional to read how beautifully you have described Nachiket's first feel and touch with Nishi. A little bundle of joy can melt the heart of such a big guy...lovely.

The touch of romance was just perfect...😳

Thank you 🤗