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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone
You are simply genius! FAINTED

Oh noes! Hope you had N around to catch you 😉

And thank you so much 😳

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ronitfan
Nidhi..

This is really some beautiful beautiful writing..
Hats off to you, AGAIN! <3

That yearning to be with one another truly is so beautiful and so well expressed.. and that juxtaposed with their mental agony of not having trust/respect - gorgeous! <3

Thanks a lot for this :D

Sukhi, I'm so glad you liked it, truly. 😳 I still think your take was more realistic but since we won't see them be intimate on the show I figured why not go for it? 😛

Also you are a sweetheart for always bumping my stories up <3

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: loveleen3
Beautiful Beautiful Beautiful ! <3 <3
Absolutely loved it! 😃

Thank you loveleen!! Looking forward to more writing from you soon! 😛

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: angel81
beautifully written ...i like how n finally realizes the sacrifices r made... I wish they would show this instead of all the stupidly thy show

Thank you! 😊 I am not sure R will ever fully get her due but I have hope now that they will be back together. In order for it to truly work they will both have to learn to respect and trust the other, otherwise there's no point.

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Yes yes yes!

Nidhi, this is so beautiful! I just loved how Nachiket really began to understand Ragini and her troubles and make a genuine and conscious effort to help her overcome them. I just hope Ragini does the same 😊

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: neiralove
Yes yes yes!
Nidhi, this is so beautiful! I just loved how Nachiket really began to understand Ragini and her troubles and make a genuine and conscious effort to help her overcome them. I just hope Ragini does the same 😊

Thank you!!! Yes I agree she also needs to be more forgiving and not as quick to judge, but I think Nachiket needs to take the first step towards reconciliation. So happy you enjoyed it, thanks :)

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

Sukhi, I'm so glad you liked it, truly. 😳 I still think your take was more realistic but since we won't see them be intimate on the show I figured why not go for it? 😛

Also you are a sweetheart for always bumping my stories up <3

Oh you absolutely deserve it..

I'm a fan 😳

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@metoyou

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

This is a masterpiece!👏

Absolutely wonderful and beautifully written. It shows the correct and exact emotions of them after coming back together for the sake of the kids. Even they are aware that this new beginning will change their life for the better, but they have a long way to go...

The love still exist very much but they need to tackle the hurdles.

Seriously Nidhi, hats off to you for bringing this vulnerable and fragile side of NeiRa.

Thanks a ton and please keep writing more. We need such brilliant stuff!

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Filza.

@Filza.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

This is beautiful stuff! Thanks so much.

Loved it & throughly enjoyed.
Both the characters so very well explained.

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: metoyou
This is a masterpiece!👏

Absolutely wonderful and beautifully written. It shows the correct and exact emotions of them after coming back together for the sake of the kids. Even they are aware that this new beginning will change their life for the better, but they have a long way to go...

The love still exist very much but they need to tackle the hurdles.
Seriously Nidhi, hats off to you for bringing this vulnerable and fragile side of NeiRa.

Thanks a ton and please keep writing more. We need such brilliant stuff!

Thank you Narges!! 😳

Unfortunately they have damaged their relationship to the point where love is not enough, but hopefully as they learn to live together again they will be able to rebuild.

I'm so glad you thought this was true to their characters - thanks for all the encouragement 😃

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