OS : Sentimental ... - Page 2

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Hayeee...

Rachana... mai mar jawaaa gud khaake!

This is for you dear..

Love love love this one from Ragini's perspective just as much as I liked the last one from his perspective.. how do you manage to write so well? There's such immense flow in your writing.. it just washes over the reader like a beautiful wave..

SIGH. I'm dreaming now <3

Love you!

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks Sukhs😳 and the gif is so lovable. 🤗

Glad you liked it. I wish both NR's characters were delved into in much greater details.

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

This is just so heartbreakingly beautiful.

I hear symphonies in his moods. Heartache and tragedy, light-hearted playfulness, repressed passion, ready to burst forth in all its glorious, vibrant colors and transcendent sounds - all are played out visibly in his eyes, as if they alone housed the orchestra and I - I am the conductor.

How he touches me so deeply, so thoroughly from across a crowded room is a testament to his simple eloquence, his lover's soul. He breaks my heart, with every indrawn breath.

The imagery in this is so gorgeous, the way his soul speaks to her, music only she can hear.

He breaks my heart.

The way this repeats throughout, broke my heart every single time.

And he puts it all back together, in the space of one kiss.

Sigh...

Originally posted by: ronitfan

I know you won't be on a break Rachana ;)

I know it!

Originally posted by: RaginiJoshi

Rachna Di..! Aur kitna pyaar karu<3 Such a wonderful heart you are!

This was so pure, true, emotional and love... My heart always goes out for Ragini..She fell in love with him when they were together, then fell deeper in lovo with him in the years they were apart. I am sure they love each other much more now...Often letting go in pure love is a lesson deeper than anyone would have learned had the couple stayed together.

I so want them to be together! At the end of the day it's about how much you can bear, how much you can endure. Being apart, they extinguish each other; being together..they harm each other...Oh-so lovely! *Sigh*

But this was absolutely beautiful! Thanks!

Originally posted by: metoyou

DAMN!

Each and every single time... you leave me in awe.

This was sheer brilliance. The kind of flow you have with words is something so unique and rare. You totally understand how to play with words. I could totally imagine and feel Ragini's pain... AMAZING!

How many times do I need to thank you? 😉