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roneeta

@ronitfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: poetic
They are smouldering hot, but NB has reduced them to ashes. Let's pray that they rise like the Phoenix

NB can't do anything to them.. they'll always remain as hottt ❤️😳

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neiralove

@neiralove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ronitfan

The way he holds her hair in the second one ❤️

How she closes her eyes as he draws her close in the first one 😳

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Khushi.Verma
Swoon ! Rachna Di😳
Missing Narges

Thanks Khushi. So glad that you liked it.

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: neiralove

How she closes her eyes as he draws her close in the first one 😳

The fingers digging in her elbows 😳😳😳

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neiralove

@neiralove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

They fit together so perfectly, like two pieces of a hawt puzzle

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

*SIGH*

They don't let me concentrate. LOL.

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: neiralove
This was so short but so beautiful in its simplicity that I'm torn between asking you to make this a two shot and just letting it be (and having us all just bask in its marvelousness) 😳

Narges di is in for a sweet surprise when she gets back 😆

Thanks Shikha. This I will let it be. I think a second part will not be effective.

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iamcurious

@iamcurious

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Ouu...so much loveliness in few lines. I agree with Sukhi, you have this amazing skill to string in right words which makes it magical. I wonder why don't I recollect words like this when I write 😆...I guess, its the way you feel and think about them gives you words. And its SUPERRRB! 😳

I love it when they both tease each other. Its so sexy! :P

Ah! this line steals my heart "I'd rather give her all the time in the world to pick some future date to make love. I've waited all this time. I can wait a little longer." 😳❤️

God bless you!

Edited by iamcurious - 10 years ago