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TiaMaaaaa

@TianaWrites

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

This was so Beautiful... Loved the flashback... If only they had shown something like this in the show. Loved the comparison between Aman and Nachiket. Wonderful😊

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: neiralove
Ok, proper feedback time 😆

Awww! Ragini color-coordinating her outfit, planning every last detail for her Nachiket, is so cute! And how she thinks about him in every waking minute, every action of hers is filled with his memories 😳 If only Aman could understand...

OMG Ragini curled up with Nachiket! Love you Sukhi di! ❤️

Aww.. your proper feedback just reminded me that I need to get out of the hangover of your birthday surprise OS and write something about that sizzling piece❤️

Thanks for liking it, dear.. everything she does really is connected to Nachiket.. how much she fights herself!

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Filza.
Aww
This is so nice! the angst..So heartfelt. Loved it.

Please bring him to her. He is all she needs.

& i loved the comparison. I really hope to see one like this in the show as well as Ragini's perspective. It has always been her making Aman the better one for her compared to N. I'd like to see something like this now that we have seen the differences between the two men even in the show as well.

Thanks for this beautiful piece!

Thanks a lot Filza 😳

I really wish she measures up Aman to Nachiket too.. he will fall short in so many measures!

Come on Ragini.. you know the truth...

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: loveleen3
This was beautiful! Loved it!
And I'm so damn sure the show's Ragini was also thinking something like this. That look on her face when Aman was removing her bangle. 😒

Thanks so much Loveless 😳

Yes.. the show's Ragini was so repulsed by his touch and his poor attempts at being romantic...

after all she belongs only to her Nachiket

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Tiana.Disney
This was so Beautiful... Loved the flashback... If only they had shown something like this in the show. Loved the comparison between Aman and Nachiket. Wonderful😊

Thanks and lot of love, Tiana 😳😳

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iamcurious

@iamcurious

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

So much for just one glimpse...one conversation...one moment...😳

If this isn't true love then what is? ❤️

Wonderful OS Sukhi. You write with so much heart it reflects here. Each word picked carefully to give you 'that' feel. Your thought / idea translates wonderfully. 👏

Aman was ignored as much as Ragini did. But Nachiket's presence even in his absence was the beauty. 😳

Loved it! ❤️

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: iamcurious
So much for just one glimpse...one conversation...one moment...😳

If this isn't true love then what is? ❤️

Wonderful OS Sukhi. You write with so much heart it reflects here. Each word picked carefully to give you 'that' feel. Your thought / idea translates wonderfully. 👏

Aman was ignored as much as Ragini did. But Nachiket's presence even in his absence was the beauty. 😳

Loved it! ❤️

Thanks so much dear! 😳😃

That moment affected me so much that I just had to write on what was going on in her mind when someone was trying to claim her as his and was trying to be all authoritative with her.. so glad you enjoyed reading it..

Yes.. ending and starting the day with the one you love.. what else does a person want? ❤️

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Sukhi, I am back! 🤗

Maine bahut nainsaafi kiya last night 🥺 but I was really wrung out mentally.

Can't thank you enough for this beautiful OS - short, succinct yet sensitive.

Nachiket was all over the piece, though he wasn't present there practically. A kind of writing which extends beyond the obvious. Not an easy thing to do.

The presence of Aman irks me, but I understand that he is here to stay, at least for the moment. The relationship b/w Ragini and Nachiket are so strained at the moment that it can only be sustained by a conspiracy by the Universe.

And till then, Nachiket stays Neil !

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roneeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: poetic
Sukhi, I am back! 🤗
Maine bahut nainsaafi kiya last night 🥺 but I was really wrung out mentally.

Can't thank you enough for this beautiful OS - short, succinct yet sensitive.

Nachiket was all over the piece, though he wasn't present there practically. A kind of writing which extends beyond the obvious. Not an easy thing to do.

The presence of Aman irks me, but I understand that he is here to stay, at least for the moment. The relationship b/w Ragini and Nachiket are so strained at the moment that it can only be sustained by a conspiracy by the Universe.

And till then, Nachiket stays Neil !

Awww Rachana 🤗

It's okay sweetie.. I can totally get the frustration and the low of ending the day in such a manner.. just wanted to cheer everyone up and I am glad you all enjoyed reading this one.. thanks for liking it!

Aman is a necessary evil.. or ab to he's going to turn completely psycho so it will be fun because there will be no sane reason why Ragini would then choose him over Nachiket. EVER.

Neil is going to be Nachiket before you know it 😳😃