SS: Train Journey (Part 5 Pg. 13) - Page 8

Originally posted by: t-bonegirl

This dose of romance was much needed after today's epi. Though I didn't watch it 😆

Shikha I really loved their romantic scene..thank you for updating this jaldi. Even if you wrap it up in the next part do write romantic OS's 😉 😳

Originally posted by: metoyou

OMG...Mein paagal ho rahi hoon...

Damn, damn, damn...Shikhaaa! What on earth is this?

Let me start with this: IN LOVE!!!

Pure pure pure form of romance, WOW!

This SS starts off on an emotional note; the way Aarav realizes his mother's love for him and how Nishi joins him. Then the beautiful family hug. I must say that even Aman's dialogue were very well written. This is how we want to see him in the show too, but alas...

Uske baad, this story begins and gives you one butterfly in the stomach after the other. Flirty Nachiket is what we all want to see and you gave it to us and how; grabbing her waist, biting her earlobe, kissing her neck and so much more. My God, I just fell in love with these two all over again 😳

Ragini took a bit of initiative which is rare but so much needed. Also the way she didn't want him to leave in the last part...oh my, they need more of this kind of romance.

You write pure beauty and magic! Can't express myself...

Please please please, do write more and more because I am totally fida on this. NeiRa's romance at its best...

Oh btw, so sorry for being so late with this... so stupid not to read and comment on this before.

I want NeiRa like this...NOW!

Originally posted by: Vidya_Bng

finally here! ...😉 Awesome Romance Shika Whoo! It sure is hot out here. Ya know?

Nothing's Sexier Than Neira Romance😉😛

Imagine When Nachi Baby was just a teenager with a head full of dream... 😛

One of the best SS's I've read...😳 Ek Huggy tho banthi hain

I know it's short, please no chappals I have to manofy someone... 😉

I'm almost finished with the continuation/next part and I'll have it up soon

Mini-Update (Part 4.5?)

Same day, 11:03 pm

Nishi cleared her throat loudly outside and knocked on the thin wall separating the berths. "Papa? Maa?"

Nachiket and Ragini heard her giggling outside. "Umm, aap dono ka hogaya toh...Agam ko sona hai!"

"Kya?! Nishi, mera naam kyun liya?! Dad ko pata hai that I like to stay up into the wee hours of the morning!" Agam whispered, lightly punching his sister's arm. "Stick to the plan!"

"Haan haan, baba, I'm--" Nishi stopped immediately as both Nachiket and Ragini exited, drawing the curtain open behind them. Ragini was much more successful this time in hiding her blush, despite the fact that Nachiket's hand had been caressing her cheekbone just moments ago. No no no! Stop it, Ragini! Don't think about that or you'll turn bright red again!

Too late. The kids noticed her cherry colored face and began laughing, making Ragini turn even more red. She casually styled her hair, hoping that bringing it to the front would help hide her cheeks, now glowing like embers. She stole a quick glance at Nachiket, who was leaning on the frame and laughing quietly at the scene in front of him. That didn't help at all. Nachiket, tum bhi na!

"Ok, ok, bas, bahut ho gaya," said RK, grinning. Much to Ragini's relief, the kids stepped aside and let RK pass, giving her a break from all this unwanted attention.

"Ye lo, Neil, here are the sleeping arrangements," RK said, handing him a slip of paper. He leaned in so both of them, but not the kids, could hear him. "Sorry, tum dono ko alag karna pada. You know, taaki kisi ko shak na ho jaye," he whispered, winking at the couple. "But iss train pe jo kuch bhi hua, uske baad toh...," he added, laughing at the return of Ragini's embarrassed smile.

Nachiket and Ragini exchanged looks. Ragini noticed a playful smile creeping onto Nachiket's face and--was that a wink?

She knew the night wasn't over for them just yet...