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This OS is based on spoilers regarding Nachiket in jail. I know some of the ladies in the forum would have loved to be locked up with him, but I did the next best thing and threw Ragini in there instead. I doubt the law would work this way, but the show makes up its own rules as it goes along anyway.

As always, feedback and constructive criticism is appreciated. Please excuse my terrible Hindi. Lastly, thanks to Tiana.Disney for showing what a mature conversation between N and R would look like in her terrific fic, A Place in My Heart, Always.

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This was not what he had in mind when he had hoped to see Ragini again soon.

But there she was, sulking against the prison bars in the same coral pink sari she had been wearing when he had carried her over to the sofa, limp and unresponsive in his arms.

She had entered the police station like a force of nature, and though he hadn't seen her face he imagined her furrowed eyebrows and chin jutting out in anger as the raised voices carried over to his holding cell. A part of him was secretly pleased she was using her sharp tongue on his behalf instead of against him - it was a welcome change from the arguments they had been having lately.

The next thing he knew, she was being escorted to his cell, her arm in the firm grip of the officer on duty and, to his horror, was shoved inside, the door closing behind her with a final clang.

He was incensed at the rough treatment but his protests went unnoticed and soon they found themselves alone in the dank space.

Nachiket rushed to her side, his fingers tracing the gash on her forehead. She closed her eyes at his touch and his name erupted in a sob from her lips. He took her in his arms as she sagged against him, relief replacing the adrenaline that had propelled her here.

"Ragini, I'm so sorry, tum theek to ho?" the words tumbled out of his mouth as he dropped a kiss on the top of her head.

"Main theek hoon, lekin tum yahaan-"

"Koi baat nahin, it will be OK."

"Oy hoy!" taunted the police officer who had so gleefully thrown them both in jail. Ragini and Nachiket jumped apart as their audience came into view. "Yahan kya ho raha hai? Maine to suna tha ke tumhara divorce hua hai?" he addressed Ragini.

"Tameez se baat karo," Nachiket warned, as Ragini's eyes shot daggers at him through the bars.

"Accha, madam, abhi abhi aapke mangetar ka phone aaya tha, bechare ko aap hi samjhana..." he smirked as a faint blush appeared on Ragini's cheeks and whistled as he walked away.

Nachiket eyed her suspiciously. "Ragini, uss kaminey Officer Mehta se kya baat hui thi?"

She averted her gaze. "I told him you were my husband and to release you...aur phir shayad ek do gaali bhi di thi, uski ma ki..vagera vagera."

He stared at her in shock and then laughed. An embarrassed smile tugged at her lips.

"Kya ho jata hai tumhe Ragini," he wondered half-seriously. "Kabhi toh jagherte bina baat bhi nahin ho pa thi, phir kabhi mere bina khana nahin khaati. Kabhi apne mangetar ke taraf se mujhe gaali dey thi ho, phir kabhi mujhe apne pati maan ke police ko gaali dey thi ho."

She looked up at him with anguish in her eyes that he knew all too well. "Pata hai," he said as he gently smoothed the bandage against her skin. "Iska jawab nahin hai tumhare paas. Kaash main tumhe dard ke jage sukh dey sakta tha."

She caught his wrist as his thumb trailed down to brush away her tears and his heart thumped painfully as her slender fingers fit perfectly in his. He could almost imagine the smooth metal was their wedding band, back where it belonged.

"Nachiket," she sighed, "Itne saalon baad bhi mein tumhe bhool nahin paye. Saare sukh dukh ek taraf, apni parivar ek taraf. Lekin..."

"Lekin?" He tried but failed to keep the hope out of his voice.

"Tumne Aarav ke baare mein mujhse jhoot bola tha..." her voice cracked. "Aur phir jab, we needed you..." Ragini paused, unwilling to break down in front of him again. "I needed you!"

Guilt clawed at his insides again. The voice in his head that had whispered during those long nights that he was abandoning his family was finally vindicated. "Ragini, I...I'm sorry. For everything. For Aarav, aur tumhe chod ke jaana." His apologies felt feeble in the face of her pain."Lekin maine socha tha ke shayad tum sahi thi, shayad yeh sab mere vajeh se hua tha, shayad Nishi aur Aarav ke zindagi mein mera koi haq nahin tha."

It was her turn to face the consequences of the words she had uttered in her grief and anger. "Tumne unko itni khushi di thi...itni khushi toh main 15 saal mein nahin dey paye..." He shook his head at her words. "You're their father. They need you."

"Aur tum?" he asked softly.

"I...love you," she whispered, looking down at their joined hands. "Lekin mujhe tum par bharosa nahin hai."

His elation at her confession quickly turned to sorrow. "Ragini, mein vaada karta hoon, you will trust me with your heart again - I will earn it."

She looked surprised at his words. "Nachiket," she laughed, though there was no mirth behind it. "Don't you see? I can't get my heart back even if I wanted to." She moved to the far corner of the cell and stared out past the metal bars, and he realized they were both trapped in more ways than one.

The door to the jail had a key. That was simple enough.

What would be the key to their happiness?

As Aman finally rushed in to console Ragini, Nachiket made another promise, this time to himself.

He would find a way to break them out of the prison that held them back from each other. One brick at a time.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks SN for the Os. A total leap of faith, but it does work.
Ragini giving gaali to the Police is the best thing to happen
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thanks for the OS.i really liked their confession and as Rachana pointed out,Ragini giving gaali is the best.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ragini swearing!
hahahaha.. I could not have thought about that in my wildest dreams!
Nice touch to a really wonderful OS! <3

Those words are so true.. she loves him but does not have any faith in him left... no trust.. it is going to be so heartwrenching for him to finally realize that and act on it. Right now, he is still living in denial and anger.. he does not own up to his mistake!

Come on Nachiket..
you are better than this..

Thank you so much for this - it's a wonderful wonderful take on the situation <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ragini gaaliyan bhi deti hai? Wow, such a nice change in character 😉

This is a very nicely written. That one moment means a lot for both; she confessing her love but at the same time not being able to do anything about and he making sure that he would do anything to make her trust him again.

Well done and thanks for this!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful writing keep it up. Wishful thinking if anything like that will happen. Watch Ragini stay close to her truth serum and implicate Neil in the whole fiasco with out meaning too. She will not get off her high horse. As a women only she can hold the whole family together. Life is not equitable so she has to decide what side of the fence she wants to be on. The big question will be is she ready to compremise at this point in her life?
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Wow, Shy 👏 . This is beautiful and I love it 😊 . 'I needed you' by Ragini was so good... She really needed him but he ran away... And Ragini accepting that was just so great 😳 . I really want to see something like this in the show... This is just wow 👏 .

About my SS... Thank you so much Shy, for reading it and liking it 😳 . I hope you'll like the next parts too 😳 . Thank you... You mentioning it in your OS really means a lot 😳 .
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Fantastic! I love how being in jail is a metaphor for their relationship status and how Nachiket wants to break out physically and emotionally--very creative!
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Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks SN for the Os. A total leap of faith, but it does work.

Ragini giving gaali to the Police is the best thing to happen


Thanks poetic! You are right that it will probably never happen, but that is what FF is for 😛
At least we can dream...

Originally posted by: goldstar678

thanks for the OS.i really liked their confession and as Rachana pointed out,Ragini giving gaali is the best.


Thank you! I think Ragini has quite a protective streak, too bad we don't see it often on behalf of Neil. Thanks for reading. :)

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Ragini swearing!

hahahaha.. I could not have thought about that in my wildest dreams!
Nice touch to a really wonderful OS! <3

Those words are so true.. she loves him but does not have any faith in him left... no trust.. it is going to be so heartwrenching for him to finally realize that and act on it. Right now, he is still living in denial and anger.. he does not own up to his mistake!

Come on Nachiket..
you are better than this..

Thank you so much for this - it's a wonderful wonderful take on the situation <3


Thank you so very much! I blame Ragini's swearing on the bump to her head 😉
It would be great to have them address the actual reason for the breakup on the show, Nachiket's mistakes and Ragini's reaction, but instead we get old contrivances and misunderstandings. Thank goodness for this forum and its writers.


Originally posted by: metoyou

Ragini gaaliyan bhi deti hai? Wow, such a nice change in character 😉

This is a very nicely written. That one moment means a lot for both; she confessing her love but at the same time not being able to do anything about and he making sure that he would do anything to make her trust him again.

Well done and thanks for this!


Thank you - I think it is still fairly obvious she loves him, despite Dr. Aman etc - her confession doesn't actually change anything but can give N a reason to try again - if only! Thanks so much for reading and for the feedback.

Originally posted by: Changa

Wonderful writing keep it up. Wishful thinking if anything like that will happen. Watch Ragini stay close to her truth serum and implicate Neil in the whole fiasco with out meaning too. She will not get off her high horse. As a women only she can hold the whole family together. Life is not equitable so she has to decide what side of the fence she wants to be on. The big question will be is she ready to compremise at this point in her life?


Thank you Changa! I agree that somehow this will turn out badly for N and R - while she would never be ok with N in jail, especially if he hasn't actually done anything wrong, they're both so terrible at communicating with each other that I'm afraid it will spiral into a huge mess. Both have ridiculous egos.

Originally posted by: Tiana.Disney

Wow, Shy 👏 . This is beautiful and I love it 😊 . 'I needed you' by Ragini was so good... She really needed him but he ran away... And Ragini accepting that was just so great 😳 . I really want to see something like this in the show... This is just wow 👏 .

About my SS... Thank you so much Shy, for reading it and liking it 😳 . I hope you'll like the next parts too 😳 . Thank you... You mentioning it in your OS really means a lot 😳 .


Thank you Tiana! Your story has been great at showing that there is a way for N and R to reconcile if they are mature and put their family first - it was a great inspiration for a way out of this mess. 👏

Originally posted by: neiralove

Fantastic! I love how being in jail is a metaphor for their relationship status and how Nachiket wants to break out physically and emotionally--very creative!


Thank you! I do believe they need to move forward, preferably with each other, but are both unable to do so because of FEELINGS etc. Thus they're both trapped (and so are we!) until that's resolved. Thanks very much for reading and for the feedback.

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