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Posted: 10 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: loveleen3

By the way, how do you update the topic name? 😕


Go to page 1 of your post n click edit button which is present their just below your post,then you can edit the main topic too n then click update post button.

Coming to the update, its such a simple scene but ur escription is amazing. These kids n the bonding you potrated is what the most lacking in the show.Ragini has no connection whatsoever in the show with even Suhani n Aagam which is such a disappointing aspect post leap.

Looking forward to the next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Awww Loveleen!
This was so cute! <3
Him being so direct and obvious in front of the kids and her taking her own sweet time to respond and to tell him she does not get flustered when he does that..

It is like nothing between them ever changed.. and they are just slipping back into their old selves seamlessly.. because that's who they always were.. this made me smile so much! LOVE!! <3

Do continue soon :)
Thanks for writing!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Very sweet story❤️ Please continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
This story is hot AND sweet! Love the family spending time together and Nachiket being his usual mischievous self :)
Thanks for sharing, please continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Here's the Part 3.
Hope you guys like it! :D Let me know.

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During the night

Ragini joined Nachiket on the bed. Nachiket was reading some Medical Journal and Ragini picked up her book from the side table.
15 minutes passed and neither of them had said a word.
"Seriously Nachiket, you are not going to talk to me now?" Ragini said, closing her book and looking at him. Nachiket responded by flipping a page of his magazine. Ragini took the magazine from his hand.
"You are getting jealous of your own kids! Pagal ho gae ho kya?"
Nachiket looked at her and said, "As a matter of fact, Yes. I am jealous of my kids. But that doesn't make me mad." He said and took the magazine back from Ragini's hands. "Also, you were supposed to make up for something. Remember?"
"I remember that very well and I was going to too, but now, I'll rather sleep. Tell me when you are done being a child so that we can have a conversation that makes sense." Ragini said and turned off the light to go to sleep.
"Theek h. So jao tum." Nachiket said and laid down himself.
Half an hour had passed and neither of them had slept. Ragini was fidgeting but Nachiket was not. Ragini, who was angry earlier, now found the situation quite amusing. She turned around to look at Nachiket. He was sleeping on his back with his right arm covering his face. Ragini scooted closer to him and planted her face on his shoulder and wrapped her arm around his chest.
"Now you want to make up?" Nachiket said with a smirk.

Ragini, smiling, wrapped her arms tighter around him and said, "Shut up and sleep."
Nachiket brought his left arm around her waist and brought her closer and in a more comfortable position.
Ragini's hands were making small circles on Nachiket's chest.
"Nachiket.. So rahe ho?"
"Nahi.. Kya hua.."
"Ranbir asked me to feed him after 15 years."
"Are you happy?" Nachiket asked.
"Very"
Nachiket kissed over her head and cuddled her closer.
"Ranbir is just like you." Nachiket said.
Ragini smiled. "I know", She said and looked at Nachiket, "He always was like me. And I missed him."
"He missed you too." Nachiket said and they both shared a comfortable silence.
"Ragini, lets go" Nachiket said and got up.
"Ab kahan?"
"Chalo na.. Mujhe neend nahi aa rahi"
"Par mujhe to aa rahi h.."
"Chup chaap chalo.. Warna main utha k le jaunga" Nachiket warned.

A mischievous smile played on Ragini's face as he said that.
"Kitne din ho gae tumne mujhe nahi uthaya.. Ab tum uthake leke jaoge main tabhi jaungi" Ragini said playfully, imitating Agham.
"Acha.. To Agham bhi bilkul tumpe gaya h" Nachiket said and picked up Ragini in his arms. She wrapped her arms around his neck.
"Ab hum kahan ja rahe h.. Ye to batado"
"Ab hum kitchen mein ja rahe h.."
"Okay. But may I know why?"
"Darling, you are making up to me now. First for halwa and then for the car" Nachiket said and kissed her cheek.
Ragini blushed and said, "I would have loved to make up for the halwa but unfortunately there is no halwa left. Bachon ne sab khatam kar dia. Let me make up for car only." Ragini said teasingly.

Nachiket had reached the front of fridge with Ragini in arms. He looked at her, gave her a small peck on the lips and said.
"I need both. And we can replace halwa with ice-cream. Open the fridge door now." Nachiket motioned towards the Refrigerator. Ragini opened the door, picked the ice-cream brick and shut the door. Then Nachiket moved her around the kitchen as they picked up a bowl and spoon.
"Done" Ragini said as she picked a few paper towels.
Nachiket turned around and moved towards their room and then he stopped at the door.
"Kya Hua?" Ragini asked.
Nachiket had got an idea and a very mischievous smile was playing on his face.
"We are going to terrace."
"Par kyun?"
"Kitne sawal puchti ho Ragini"

To be continued...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: poetic

This is so simple and lovely Loveleen. It's almost as if you can see this happening in front of you.

The halwa part was amazing.

Looking fwd to how Ragini takes a sweet revenge on Nachiket 😆


I have probably disappointed you with the latest update. 😛 Thank you for reading and taking out the time to comment. I really appreciate it. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: goldstar678


Go to page 1 of your post n click edit button which is present their just below your post,then you can edit the main topic too n then click update post button.

Coming to the update, its such a simple scene but ur escription is amazing. These kids n the bonding you potrated is what the most lacking in the show.Ragini has no connection whatsoever in the show with even Suhani n Aagam which is such a disappointing aspect post leap.

Looking forward to the next update.


Thank you so much! I figured out how to change the topic name. 😊 Felt digitally challenged for some time. 😆
Regarding Ragini, I don't think she doesn't have a connection with the kids on the show. Infact, I think, its the Nachiket-Nishi relationship that looks fake and awkward. Ragini- Agam-Suhani relationship is so comfortable that it doesn't seem they haven't been together their whole life.

I don't have any problem with the show's Ragini. I would have probably done/behaved the same had I been in such a situation. Its the situations that could have been better. Its fiction, they could have done so much! Sigh!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Awww Loveleen!

This was so cute! <3
Him being so direct and obvious in front of the kids and her taking her own sweet time to respond and to tell him she does not get flustered when he does that..

It is like nothing between them ever changed.. and they are just slipping back into their old selves seamlessly.. because that's who they always were.. this made me smile so much! LOVE!! <3

Do continue soon :)
Thanks for writing!


I am so glad you liked it! 😃 Your comments always make me happy! 😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Tiana.Disney

Very sweet story❤️ Please continue soon.


Thank you for reading. I hope you like the next part too. Let me know! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

This story is hot AND sweet! Love the family spending time together and Nachiket being his usual mischievous self :)

Thanks for sharing, please continue soon!


Hahaha.. I hadn't realize it had become both Hot and Sweet. When I'm writing, I just let them talk. And they never disappoint. Hope you like the next part too.

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