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neiralove

@neiralove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#281

Jia Di! Great to see you online! 😊 And congratulations on becoming a Goldie! 😳

Edited by neiralove - 10 years ago

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Sanam

@t-bonegirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#282

Jia, congrats. Finally a Goldie 😃 ❤️

Rachna, 😆 😆 I won't mind reading your updates in Hindi or English. Bengali bhi seekh lungi for that matter 😆 And if you direct tou you would find me on the hospital bed. *Faint* you know 😆

All the characters have been left around to hang to their deaths in the show. But I really like Ashaben's as character. This one character had so much potential. It was because of her character that I started writing actually 😆 And thanks once again to you for continuing 😃 Please jaldi update karna ab! 😃

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poetic

@poetic

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: t-bonegirl
Jia, congrats. Finally a Goldie 😃 ❤️

Rachna, 😆 😆 I won't mind reading your updates in Hindi or English. Bengali bhi seekh lungi for that matter 😆 And if you direct tou you would find me on the hospital bed. *Faint* you know 😆

All the characters have been left around to hang to their deaths in the show. But I really like Ashaben's as character. This one character had so much potential. It was because of her character that I started writing actually 😆 And thanks once again to you for continuing 😃 Please jaldi update karna ab! 😃

Sure Sanam.

😆

I sincerely hope that they keep Asha Ben as plucky as now - it's because of her lie that these two idiots are together

Will update soon. Have the next update in mind, only problem, type karna padega

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Sanam

@t-bonegirl

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: poetic

Sure Sanam.

😆

I sincerely hope that they keep Asha Ben as plucky as now - it's because of her lie that these two idiots are together

Will update soon. Have the next update in mind, only problem, type karna padega

Don't forget Ragini is ready to type for you 😉 Bas don't stop writing 😃

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ShyNomad

@ShyNomad

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks Nidhi 😊

While I started this story with a different mind set, things have changed radically, including my thought process. It's almost lie -

Jaatey they Japan, pahuch gaye Chin, samajh gaye na?v😆

Lesson learnt - when you have a SS running, forget about OS and complete the SS. 😳

Will complete this off as soon as possible, before it is possibly gutted. For ever.😉

I know exactly what you mean - sometimes I change my mind within a chapter itself 😛

Considering the OS's you have gifted us with in the meantime, I would say the lesson is you should write what comes to heart when you need to and forget about all the other stuff. The inspiration will come.

This update brought tears to my eyes - seriously I am a sucker for parent/child reunions - but the way you wrote it was just beautiful, taking Ragini from her lowest point to having her family complete again which is all she's ever wanted. Sounds just like N to run off without telling her anything 😳

I will be sad to see this end but happy that you're getting closure by finishing it off.

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neiralove

@neiralove

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#286

Rachna Di! 🤗

I loved every word of this, from start to finish. I especially enjoyed Nachiket and Ragini's little interaction in the car; that's how they should be acting--like true parents. And that argument between them was so well-written and so mature. 😊

My absolute favorite line:

For he knew one thing, he could never go back to existing again, all alone without his Ragini.

Because this is so true; once you start living, you can never just exist again. Once you find a reason to smile, you forget how to deal with pain. And perhaps that's the saddest thing: realizing that you have to go back to that pain after tasting your long lost happiness. So I'm really glad that Nachiket and Ragini didn't have to go through that here. ❤️

And no matter what Nishi says, we know that she does love her mother; she's missed her every second of every day. And now they all have their perfect little family back.

I'm a little sad that you're going to be wrapping this wonderful story up, but I'm also excited that you're updating it. Thank you for this fantastic treat! 😳

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Mansur Khan

@MansurKhan56

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#287

Rachna Di i just read the update, it is so wonderful👏👏👏

It is so perfect and beautifully scripted😃. Can we see such things in the show, i guess nope

Thank you for writing this... I could spend days reading these kind of stories on IF rather than watching the show

I am gonna read the first five updates aaram se within some time😊, Feedback to banta hai for all teh updates😊😛

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Santosh

@Santosh99

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Posted: 10 years ago

#288

Thank you so much di for updating. This was beautiful! Reading you is always pleasure!

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: t-bonegirl

Don't forget Ragini is ready to type for you 😉 Bas don't stop writing 😃

ha ha, where is my Mogwai? 😆 She needs to start typing

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: ShyNomad

I know exactly what you mean - sometimes I change my mind within a chapter itself 😛

Considering the OS's you have gifted us with in the meantime, I would say the lesson is you should write what comes to heart when you need to and forget about all the other stuff. The inspiration will come.

This update brought tears to my eyes - seriously I am a sucker for parent/child reunions - but the way you wrote it was just beautiful, taking Ragini from her lowest point to having her family complete again which is all she's ever wanted. Sounds just like N to run off without telling her anything 😳

I will be sad to see this end but happy that you're getting closure by finishing it off.

Thanks Nidhi. 😃 I am glad I decided to update this story, This will of course give me a much needed closure.

N did run away again, but it's nice that he came back to her, only after resolving the issues.