OS: First Rains - Page 2

Originally posted by: ronitfan

OMG

This stopped my heart for a good 2 seconds..

this is gold. Pure gold.

<3

How do you write SO WELL!? You have the perfect words - always!

Bravo!!

And thanks for such a magical Nachiket Ragini treat ..

sensational!!

Originally posted by: poetic

Re read it. This OS definitely deserves a read again and again.

Beautifully written. The way the element of monsoon has been woven into their lives - both in the past and present, is worthy of an applause. 👏

Thank you Rachna. ITs always a pleasure to read your comments. 😃

The intricacies of relationships have a way of becoming very petty or meaningless in front of the mighty Nature. That's how important nature is in our lives. the moment we cut off Nature, we become unbalanced human beings, or rather our lives become dis balanced.

The way THE rains cleansed every unwanted emotions in their lives is magical.

So agree to the part in bold. Nature is such an integral part of our lives. We don't realise but such significant roles they play in making and breaking us. Here rains did just that. 25 years back it brought them closer and after so many years again the rains brought them back this time washing or cleansing like you said all unwanted emotions.

And THAT Kiss ...

It sealed the deal 😉

Thank you so much. really hoping that you keep us transfixed in these difficult times.
I long to do and shall try even if it includes few readers, I love it if I can share the joy. 😳

Originally posted by: NeiRaFreak

And whenever you write it has to be mesmerizing 😳 Awesome OS and indeed beautifully written ... Both the flashback moment and the current track you joined so so amazingly and that connection with nature 😳 Just loved reading it ... Thank you for this treat in this mosam 😊

Originally posted by: NeiRa_Love

Such an awesome,mesmerizing read! I'm awestruck!

The way u described dose few moments was breathtaking!

This was really soothing in d present scenario of the show! Mausam bahut karab hai&U made it awesome!

Some one plz share dis with NB for the rain scene,if it is destined to happen! This wud be so perfect!

Originally posted by: iamcurious

Thank you Sukhi :*

As to how do you write? Darling I learnt from veterans like you, Rachna, Narges and Ragini (Joyride has been read half...will finish soon) 😳

We all can come together and create this treat better 😆

Originally posted by: iamcurious

Yay! Glad you like it too. We have people here with excellent imagination. If only that was put to good use. Nevertheless, reading it can atleast help us to wipe out the tracks we never wanted to see 😆

I love reading FFs and OSs here. So much talent! 😊

Originally posted by: d3c3nt

Its just beautiful, want to keep re-reading it.