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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Me me me

FAINT

I want to cry now ... the is so beautiful. 😳

And the characters have been written with so much love. Even Asha ben has a stand over here, unlike in the Show.

I love the way how N and R over here connect to each other, without even having the privilege of seeing each other. There is so much understanding and trust in those moments that they have shared b/w them. Those moments of agony and sharing have actually forged such a beautiful bond between them.

And then, there is FATE ! Beautiful indeed . 😳

Thanks a lot dear. Hope to read the next update soon.

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@metoyou

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

And then me me me 😆

Okay me back!

Kya kahoon yaar... again such a brilliant update. The beauty of your talent is that you convey and say a lot with very less dialogues. Actions speak louder than words and you just prove that again and again. You have an unique writing style and that sets you apart from the rest!

This update in particular made me emotional. The emptiness in Ragini's character was so real and also the helplessness of mother and daughter. Rula diya yaar! Everything was described to perfection... 👍🏼

Can't wait to read how they take their pheras and step into world unknown to them...the beautiful and unexpected world of love 😳

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iamcurious

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: poetic
Me me me

FAINT

I want to cry now ...

I end up making you cry? What should I take this as? 😭

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: iamcurious

I end up making you cry? What should I take this as? 😭

You made me happy Sweetie. 😊😊 Loved the update. I have updated my comments in the original post. 😳😳

Thank you so much.

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iamcurious

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: metoyou
And then me me me 😆

And then me again? 😆

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iamcurious

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: poetic
Me me me

FAINT

I want to cry now ... the is so beautiful. 😳

And the characters have been written with so much love. Even Asha ben has a stand over here, unlike in the Show.

I love the way how N and R over here connect to each other, without even having the privilege of seeing each other. There is so much understanding and trust in those moments that they have shared b/w them. Those moments of agony and sharing have actually forged such a beautiful bond between them.

And then, there is FATE ! Beautiful indeed . 😳

Thanks a lot dear. Hope to read the next update soon.

@bold Perfectly put. Its so good to know that you are able to put across to your readers what your characters actually feel. If that is achieved it gives immense satisfaction. So thank you for reading it with so much interest. 😃

And there is fate for sure. Its magic is simple yet so incomprehensible. Isn't it?

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@metoyou

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: iamcurious

And then me again? 😆

Now you you you 😆

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Jia

@NeiRaFreak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Just BEAUTIFUL 😳 I was so lost in feeling the emotions that didn't realize the update is coming to an end 😭 Just loved reading it 😳

The connection between these two without even looking at each other is so serene and lady U have a way with words in expressing the inner feelings of every character involved in story, even AshaBen seems to have some purpose of being unlike serial ... I would love to readthe whole story again once its completed ... Its just like reading a beautiful novel 😳

Waiting for next update abhi se 😃

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poetic

@poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

BTW, seems that the OMG Promo in the rain was never shot. The leads didn't want to get wet.

NB seemed to have asked them 47 times already.

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Jia

@NeiRaFreak

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: poetic
BTW, seems that the OMG Promo in the rain was never shot. The leads didn't want to get wet.
NB seemed to have asked them 47 times already.

Yes n people are trending their request for one rain dance sequence to RR & PK ... But the best part is they DM me to ask my IF gang to request these two as we are influential 😆 😆

And I said with the current crappy track NeiRa romance is last thing that would apeal me 😉 😆

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