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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: NeiRaFreak
M Speechless ... Rachna ... U r seriously a killer... What a Masterpiece! 👏
Beautifully written enchanting and Spellbinding scenario ... M lost in imagining NeiRA

The way u expressed their feeling ... I just loved it... Ragini's character is what I hav always adored but Nachiket was a big shock 😲 and disaster 😭 ever since NB aired his FlashBack followed by his confused state... THANK U SO MUCH FOR REVIVING HIS CHARACTER ONCE AGAIN AND THAT TOO SO BEAUTIFULLY 🤗

Everything, every phrase, every dialogue knock me dead wid its beauty and serenity... but this sentence ...
"every time he got to know how she had killed a part of herself during this struggle, his heart had bled inside"
... it just took over my heart ... such a marvellous expression of feeling 👏

I luv u for dis seriously... Please write more n update dose who r underway too...

And yes... on a lighter note... this truly justify dem having four kids in four years 😉 n if dis be d pace how many do we expect more entering dere lives 😉

Gotta read both parts again now... 😳

Take care and Thanks once again 😊

😳 Thanks a lot. I wish we knew your name.You are being very kind and considerate, I just try.

Will surely try to update the pending ones and close them off as well, in some time.

As for kids, I don't want anymore in their lives 😆 This time around, they can spend all the time with themselves, and stay busy 😆😆😆 They have 5 anyway. 😉

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Thanks Sky thanks Sampa 😊

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Vidya_Bng
Rachna

This is how you want to see your Nachiket's Ragini !!!!

Your idiots... justified

Now I don't want creatives to even read this... i wanna keep this only for all of us.

Thank you for this, from the bottom of my heart

ek huggy tho definitely banthi hain 🤗

Hey Vidya, thanks Dear 🤗 This huge is exclusively for you.

I love the emoticons you use sometimes, they are so cute. 😃

BTW, why don't you want the Creatives to read all these? Though I really don't think they have either the time or inclination to do something like that.

Am glad, this story is over. And now, let NR stay enveloped in their dreams. 😳

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: verma.nisha151
@ poetic, awesome 😊.

Thanks Nisha. 😳

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-Spriha-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

That was so damn amazing and unique.

Godd i really love all of ur writings and this was another addition to that list. Must say u make Nachiket and Ragini feel more real.

Superrr! ;):)

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@metoyou

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: poetic

Arrey, you read it also? 😆 Must say that you are a fast reader.

Thank you for the comments. Though I didn't have any intentions of writing a 2nd part when we started, I thought why not end it in a proper way. The credit goes to Ragini for edging me to the end.

And no dil manage more now ... I need a break now. 😳

A big thanks to my partner too for pushing you to write a second part and again thank you for obliging 😛 My dil will always maange more but no worries, I can easily live on this for a few weeks tab tak you take that break 😉

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Ragini Joshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

HEAVEN! This is where you took me!

I am speechless Rachna di, kya bolu?! How come your thoughts are SO beautiful! That was such peace, so beautiful, so silent yet so expressive, so serene, so mesmerizing! The beautiful dawn, them at the beach, those thoughts..Awww! You take us into an another world. My NeiRa are so adorable in this😳

Thank you so much for accepting my request! This couldn't be continued better! I've already read thrice, rushing again to read. Just can't get enough of this. I am in my lalala land right now!

This is the real PEACE! A bear wala hug 🤗

Edited by RaginiluvsNR - 10 years ago

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: RaginiluvsNR
HEAVEN! This is where you took me!

I am speechless Rachna di, kya bolu?! How come your thoughts are SO beautiful! That was such peace, so beautiful, so silent yet so expressive, so serene, so mesmerizing! The beautiful dawn, them at the beach, those thoughts..Awww! You take us into an another world. My NeiRa are so adorable in this😳

Thank you so much for accepting my request! This couldn't be continued better! I've already read thrice, rushing again to read. Just can't get enough of this. I am in my lalala land right now!

This is the real PEACE! A bear wala hug 🤗

Thanks Ragini. You guys are so sweet. 😊

I know my NR are so sweet together. I wanted something where they would';t be disturbed by any GFNs. Or the children once. The children are going to be so demanding on Ragini now 😆, she is going to have a tough time balancing everything. And managing the biggest kid - Nachiket. 😳

A sweet sa 🤗 for you too.

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-Arsal-

@-Arsal-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: RonitPallaviNR
You killed me again, this explains 4 kids in 4 yrs
This was just perfect. I can imagine them in this. Rachna ur writing is just something else, it's so them! Loved it, thank u!

😆😆

Tbh, I never got my had around this . Both being educated and belonging to medical profession; yet went ahead and had four kids in the space of four years. Make no sense whatsoever.

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poetic

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Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: -Arsal-

😆😆

Tbh, I never got my had around this . Both being educated and belonging to medical profession; yet went ahead and had four kids in the space of four years. Make no sense whatsoever.

In reality, NR wouldn't have opted for so many kids. What was the hurry even if they wanted 2 + kids?

This is all NB's warped imagination.