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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: RaginiluvsNR

The sky was deep dark now. It lightened heavily and the rains got wilder and wilder. Suddenly the sky growled and a heavy lightning sound made Ragini jumped in fear.

"Nachiket!!" she shouted and hugged him tightly. Nachiket was spelled in her scent..today his every barrier broke..he gave in his passion and clunged to her petite structure.
Ragini clutched his jacket tightly.

"Tum thik ho na Ragini?" his worried voice as he hugged her even more tightly.

She did'nt respond. She could'nt hear his words amidst the growling of sky.

"Ragini.." this time a little louder voice.

This brought her back to reality. She opened her eyes and was starled to find herself in his arms. Suddenly she broke the hug and moved a step backwards..not looking at him.

"Nachiket..i am sorry! Wo main..main darr gayi thi to...I should'nt have done this." She said now looking at him.

"Ragini Patel...an independent woman who probably don't need any anyone...is afraid of lightning? I mean still? he said just to make an awkward moment lighter.

"Nachiket..stop it now! As if you are not scared of anything in this world. Tum kaho to yaad dilau?" her eyes glittering in mischief.

"Mujhe yaad hai..tumhe koi jarurat nahi hai yaad dilane ki...apna dekho! Ragini Patel..baarish se darti hai" he giggled as he said this.

"Nachiket..tum na..."

"Ragini!" he interrupted her in between " Tumhe chai ki khushboo aa rahi hai?"

"Ha Nachiket..aa rahi hai!" she said as tried to smell. They both looked back at the tea stall near the dhabha from where the smell was coming.

"To ab?" he asked looking back at her.





Ye Dil Mange More !!!!! I know i m being a little greedy ... But can't HELP myself...


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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Please forward this link to the creative Head of our show and someone post it at her twitter.

Thanks a lot to you both Neil and Ragini for this beautiful and wonderful ride that you both are taking us through your updates.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: RaginiluvsNR

The sky was deep dark now. It lightened heavily and the rains got wilder and wilder. Suddenly the sky growled and a heavy lightning sound made Ragini jumped in fear.

"Nachiket!!" she shouted and hugged him tightly. Nachiket was spelled in her scent..today his every barrier broke..he gave in his passion and clunged to her petite structure.
Ragini clutched his jacket tightly.

"Tum thik ho na Ragini?" his worried voice as he hugged her even more tightly.

She did'nt respond. She could'nt hear his words amidst the growling of sky.

"Ragini.." this time a little louder voice.

This brought her back to reality. She opened her eyes and was starled to find herself in his arms. Suddenly she broke the hug and moved a step backwards..not looking at him.

"Nachiket..i am sorry! Wo main..main darr gayi thi to...I should'nt have done this." She said now looking at him.

"Ragini Patel...an independent woman who probably don't need any anyone...is afraid of lightning? I mean still? he said just to make an awkward moment lighter.

"Nachiket..stop it now! As if you are not scared of anything in this world. Tum kaho to yaad dilau?" her eyes glittering in mischief.

"Mujhe yaad hai..tumhe koi jarurat nahi hai yaad dilane ki...apna dekho! Ragini Patel..baarish se darti hai" he giggled as he said this.

"Nachiket..tum na..."

"Ragini!" he interrupted her in between " Tumhe chai ki khushboo aa rahi hai?"

"Ha Nachiket..aa rahi hai!" she said as tried to smell. They both looked back at the tea stall near the dhabha from where the smell was coming.

"To ab?" he asked looking back at her.





OMG! Kya update hai! Tea stall..accha very nice idea 😉 Can't promise anything but looks like I can do something with that 😊 Too good Ragini, lovedit! Will be updating soon-ish 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Chapter 15

She did hear what Nachiket asked but not wanting to look him in the eyes, she kept staring at the tea stall.

Nachiket waited for her answer but Ragini did not say anything.

''Theek hai, koi baat nahin, agar tum nahin chahti toh I can understand...'' He said a bit disappointed. Nachiket himself was a bit confused about the disappointment in his voice. Why? Why did he want to have tea with her so badly? It was different when they were still together but now it does not seem right, or does it...

He heard Ragini's voice interrupting his thoughts.

''Chalo, chai peethe hai.''

Nachiket gave her a surprised look. ''Are you sure?''
''Haan, I am sure. Sirf ek chai hi toh hai'' She said confidently.

Both started to walk toward the tea stall in full silence. Ragini was lost in her thought.
Kyun mein Nachiket ke saath chai peena chahti ho? Kyun meri dimaag kehta hai ke yeh theek nahin lekin phir bhi dil kuch aur ke rahi hain... Yeh kya ajeeb si feeling hai? Aisa bhi toh nahin ke yeh mein pehli baar kar rahi hoon...

''Aaye saheb ji, aayi madam ji'' the chai waala greeted them.

''Bhai saheb, do chai de diye please'' Nachiket asked the chai waala politely.

''Aur saheb ki liye kam cheeni aur adrak (ginger)'' Ragini added quickly.

Nachiket looked at her. ''Tumhe abhi bhi yaad hai?''

''Kuch cheeze hum chakkar bhi nahin bhoola pate'' She said sadly but actually who was she kidding too. How can she forget every habit of his when he is still on her mind even after 15 years of separation.

''Ab log waha baithye, mein abhi gharma gharam chai banata hoon'' The chai waala pointed to the little bench.

Both sat on the bench, again that little awkwardness between them. There was no thunder now, in fact there was hardly any rain now. Just a few drops here and there. Ragini was still wearing his blazer and was still feeling a bit cold.

Nachiket noticed this. ''Are you fine? Have that cup of tea and you will feel warmer''

''Haan...shayad'' Ragini replied a bit absentmindedly.

Whatever was happening now was somehow weird to them yet it felt good. Back in the days, they used to do these kind of stuff a lot. Whenever their hectic schedule would permit, they would go out for a long drive and enjoy these little moments of happiness. Whenever she felt cold, he would put his arms around her, hold her close to himself, hug her tightly. Back then that was the only warmth she needed...
Edited by metoyou - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Dear readers!

Just wanted to let you know something:

I am not a native Hindi speaker. So if you find any grammar and/or spelling mistakes, please bear with me. I am trying my best to write the best Hindi I can, but sometimes I might goof up.

If you want you can send me a PM with the correct spelling and grammar. No spamming please! 😆

Thanks and enjoy reading!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: metoyou

She did hear what Nachiket asked but not wanting to look him in the eyes, she kept staring at the tea stall.

Nachiket waited for her answer but Ragini did not say anything.

''Theek hai, koi baat nahin, agar tum nahin chahti toh I can understand...'' He said a bit disappointed. Nachiket himself was a bit confused about the disappointment in his voice.Why? Why did he want to have tea with her so badly? It was different when they were still together but now it does not seem right, or does it...

He heard Ragini's voice interrupting his thoughts.

''Chalo, chai peethe hai.''

Nachiket gave her a surprised look. ''Are you sure?''
''Haan, I am sure. Sirf ek chai hi toh hai'' She said confidently.

Both started to walk toward the tea stall in full silence. Ragini was lost in her thought.
Kyun mein Nachiket ke saath chai peena chahti ho? Kyun meri dimaag kehta hai ke yeh theek nahin lekin phir bhi dil kuch aur ke rahi hain... Yeh kya ajeeb si feeling hai? Aisa bhi toh nahin ke yeh mein pehli baar kar rahi hoon...

''Aaye saheb ji, aayi madam ji'' the chai waala greeted them.

''Bhai saheb, do chai de diye please'' Nachiket asked the chai waala politely.

''Aar saheb ki liye kam chini aur adrak (ginger)'' Ragini added quickly.

Nachiket looked at her. ''Tumhe abhi bhi yaad hai?''

''Kuch cheeze hum chakkar bhi nahin bhoola pate'' She said sadly but actually who was she kidding too. How can she forget every habit of his when he is still on her mind even after 15 years of separation.

''Ab log waha baithye, mein abhi gharma gharam chai banata hoon'' The chai waala pointed to the little bench.

Both sat on the bench, again that little awkwardness between them. There was no thunder now, in fact there was hardly any rain now. Just a few drops here and there. Ragini was still wearing his blazer and was still feeling a bit cold.

Nachiket noticed this. ''Are you fine? Have that cup of tea and you will feel warmer''

''Haan...shayad'' Ragini replied a bit absentmindedly.

Whatever was happening now was somehow weird to them yet it felt good. Back in the days, they used to do these kind of stuff a lot. Whenever their hectic schedule would permit, they would go out for a long drive and enjoy these little moments of happiness. Whenever she felt cold, he would put his arms around her, hold her close to himself, hug her tightly. Back then that was the only warmth she needed...



Excellent update once again! You have understood Neira and their character totally. And thats the reason for such fabulous piece by you...kudos to you 👏
Edited by RaginiluvsNR - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: metoyou

<font color="#0000ff">Dear readers!</font>


<font color="#0000ff">Just wanted to let you know something:</font>

<font color="#0000ff">I am not a native Hindi speaker. So if you find any grammar and/or spelling mistakes, please bear with me. I am trying my best to write the best Hindi I can, but sometimes I might goof up.</font>

<font color="#0000ff">If you want you can send me a PM with the correct spelling and grammar. No spamming please!😆</font>

<font color="#0000ff">Thanks and enjoy reading!</font>



AT LEAST I didn't find anything wrong till date😆.. you're going excellent!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Ragini, you are being way too generous with all that praising. This is a team effort and without you this was not even possible, trust me!
If I give good updates then it is all because of you! Thank you so much!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Arrey chaloo rakho aap dono.
My Hindi is bad, that's why I abdicated 😆

But I am so enjoying this
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: metoyou

<font color="#0000ff">Ragini, you are being way too generous with all that praising. This is a team effort and without you this was not even possible, trust me!</font>

<font color="#0000ff">If I give good updates then it is all because of you! Thank you so much!</font>



And same goes here! Thank you too!

By the way..you are my Nachiket on the forum...so lets fight little now..sweet nok jhok wali ha😆

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