Amaranthine Hope Part 8 P.18 (Jun 5) - Page 6

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Hinalll! Watsupp? Heyyy Surbhi!! Nothing much, hbu??

This was a very veryyy nicee update! Except being a short one :p Yeaa, sorry about that :$ Didn't realize itna chotu sa part likha hai maine 😆

But its okay, it was awesome anyways! Lol ppl fight with some sticks and guns but these two fight with their ego's! Idiots! Right? Itna ego bhi theek nahi hai

I really loved those silent moments when she came forward and he stepped back, he went into the room in hoping for her to come after him, those scenes were beautifully explained. 😳😳
The dialogues were justfied for both of them, she was explaining and he was disappointed, they were so hurt still didn't drop their ego. I'm glad you thought so!

I was a little hesitant with this part, but I'm glad it wasn't as out-of-character as I thought it may appear

This was awesome hinall, it had a direct link to the last part, everything going smooth, i only wished that it was longer but anything is okay for me until it has substance, and this part had.

Thank you soo much! :D I promise next part will be of decent size 😳

So don't worry, just start writing haha and yea that ekta kapoor joke was hillarious even i don't want you to become that XD

Can you imagine? 😆 It'd be so frustrating by the end hahaa

And yes one thing i wanna say, if in case you're just confused about the story, big length or so many parts doesn't appeal the readers, just story does and you're going the right way, just pen down what you think is right ad would do justice to it :)

Thanks a lot! Seriously! That means a lot to me!

I'm always wondering what readers will think, whether they'll like it or not. So this is very encouraging to read! 😳

Bahut likh liyaaa man, shit i bored you :X No way! Your comments never bore me! And I guarantee they never will in the future either 😃

Haha dekhaa tumhari update short thi par mere comment ki length wohi thi *smirk*

For real, your comment is longer than my update 😆

Just woke up dude haaha let me freshen up! Cyaaa :*

Thanks sooo much once again 😃😃😃 <3

Originally posted by: roshniki

very nice Sorry. <3

Originally posted by: ronitfan

OMG!

So nice!!

But as Rachna said, so so short..

I wanted more more more more more more .. sorry but I am really greedy for good writing.. heheheh

Thanks so much for writing..

good that Nachiket will not give in to her just because he knows the truth.. she needs to conquer her ego and find a way back to him now.. loving it! :)

Originally posted by: sampa79

Nice

update soon

Originally posted by: basket_101

Heyy!! Thaanks :D

😆 Yea I know this was really really short 😛

Emotional writing comes easy to me, but it is draining because I literally go through the whole thing in my head as each character so I can justify it well

So it takes forever, and after sad scenes, my mood goes down as well 😆

And yes, that's what I want to show. It's true that she has made a mistake with the lying.

We as the audience of the show know how hurt Nachiket was when he found out and believed that she had moved on. Now she needs to realize that she hurt him, and make up for it.

And then somewhere along there, even their past should reconcile.

So I have a plan of action for this to become a short story. Let's see how that goes

Pakka promise next part will be longer 😳

Originally posted by: frenzyy

Great update