Originally posted by: ash41900
wao absolutely amazing ... lovely keep writing
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Originally posted by: ash41900
wao absolutely amazing ... lovely keep writing
Wow Hinal. Thanks for this beauty.
And the good news is we get some more parts I think πThe story is beautiful, and you have written it so beautifully.It's what we want to see in the Show, but I doubt.And I so want Nachiket to shut Pam up once and for all.eagerly waiting for the next part.
Originally posted by: alia.kapoor
it was good pls continue!!!!!!!
amazing, do continue
Originally posted by: surbhimathur
Hinalll! Geez i just read it and its W.O.W. Seriously you have written it so beautifully man. Where were you till now?? I can't even mention my favourite parts, upar se neeche tak perfection tha dude!
But undisputedly the best part was nachiket firing pam π
Then he made ragini confess π³ only he can do that! And he got those words to hear!
You played so wonderfully with the words, its just so goood!
Thankyou for writing it π€
Update the last part soon :)
Originally posted by: -Spriha-
Too good Hinal...!
Absolutely amazing...really want the misunderstandings cleared in the show as well.Loved the way u handled this situation...π aaanndd loved reading it!Update sooonnn!!
Originally posted by: basket_101
Heyy!!Awwh, it was my pleasure π³Thank you soo much! :DI've had a brutal month, but now I have time as I only have a couple of papers and exams to worry about :)I'm still confused as to how exactly I want the next bit to turn out, so it may take a few days.But I shall try my best to pen it down quick!Thank you once again π
Originally posted by: basket_101
Hey Surbhi!!Awwwh thank you so so so much <3That's such a huuuge compliment πππ Trust me when I say I had the most fun writing that scene πI'm really glad to know you liked it that much :DThank you for the idea though!! π³π³Will try to pen the next bit very soon πThank you once again π€