OS : Forever Always ... - Page 5

Geezzz Rachu, i dnt knw how stupidly i missed such a Awesm Os!!! got bored, so thought read stories over here abt NeiRa, Thank god, at least NOW i read it.

i just loved it to the core, it is Beyond Romantic...u r an awesm Writer yaar...

Seriously i cld able to Imagine Ronit and Pallavi in this as NeiRa..it s naturally written and it is so Neil & Ragini. i cld imagine Ragini's smile seeing Neil sleeping, the intense and Love..Woww Awesm

Thanks a lot Hema. Glad you liked it.

Okay, they KISSED. :o I like the way you write things, gives a deep idea of story, how small moments play a vital role and it's imagineable. Loved it! Poet ji.

Originally posted by: *Dev.*

Okay, they KISSED. :o I like the way you write things, gives a deep idea of story, how small moments play a vital role and it's imagineable. Loved it! Poet ji.

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks a lot Dev. Finally, you read 😃

Now, you have the onerous task of reading all other stories as well. 😆 AT your own pace of course

Originally posted by: metoyou

Arre, I had already read this one and even liked it! But only one mistake, I forgot to leave a comment...

Well now the time has come to rectify my mistake 😛

I remember when I first read this OS, I was like... 😳 I absolutely loved it!

It was a perfect Valentine gift for the viewers and readers.

The last few lines just nailed it. I mean the feeling of the entire short piece was right there. I am talking about this one:

'Happy Valentine's Day, Nachiket', Ragini murmured softly. Her words died down as he covered her lips with his, and wished her back. In his own inimitable style.

Thanks for sharing this with us! Looking forward to more and more 😊

Originally posted by: Aimer_vous

Absolutely Loved it👏

I missed commenting here! Rachna its one of the lovelyy rachna you've ever made Loll
I loved it to extreme's! The cuties nachiket ragini so in love! Oh man don't give so much to us, it clearly leaves us to ask for more! I think its been long you've written anything on them rachna, come on surprise us with your ideas *EvilSmirk*
Haha i loved it and its so perfect to re read it again amidst sucha sexy weather, i hope u know what i mean.
Cya Take care, and if i missed to mention anywhere, you're an amazing writer! *ThumbsUp*

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

I missed commenting here! Rachna its one of the lovelyy rachna you've ever made Loll
I loved it to extreme's! The cuties nachiket ragini so in love! Oh man don't give so much to us, it clearly leaves us to ask for more! I think its been long you've written anything on them rachna, come on surprise us with your ideas *EvilSmirk*
Haha i loved it and its so perfect to re read it again amidst sucha sexy weather, i hope u know what i mean.
Cya Take care, and if i missed to mention anywhere, you're an amazing writer! *ThumbsUp*