Silent appeal-- don't knock

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Next time I come to your door
I will knock for sure
Her words were like a sharp jab
No tears to comfort and dab
All these years and miles
Had played havoc with his smiles
And left him desolate and dry
Because his heart would so often try
And succeed to escape
And dwell in the old memory space
Leaving him to deal all alone
With the echoes of his moans
For he wanted her closer than close
And now she says she is going to pause
Even when she is at his door
And knock for sure
Little does she know that he has kept
Every road,path,alley right and left
Widow,door, skylight which would
If she just followed could
Lead her straight into his home and hearth
And she need not knock
He is still waiting like a rock
With will and heart
In the hope of a new start
So Ragini please don't knock




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very beautiful . Wow 👏
Can you also write something for ragini where Nachiuket learn to trust her for once and not get carried away by what others have to say?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: poetic

Very beautiful . Wow 👏

Can you also write something for ragini where Nachiuket learn to trust her for once and not get carried away by what others have to say?

I will try I have to be in a mood for it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumiko

I will try I have to be in a mood for it


Sure anytime 😃

But agree, the dialogue that from next time she would knock on his door and enter kind of created an upheaval for Nachiket.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was absolutely beautiful..
Have not watched the episode yet but I can imagine the hurt on his face and the stabbing in his heart when she said those words to him! <3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful...the words say it all the way Neil is feeling..too good!!👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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such beautiful words..apt for what nachiket is going through right now...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting!! quite poetic 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sumikooo dahlinnn
U here
Hugs hugs hugs
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was really beautiful. Loved it:)

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