OS: if only you knew. (NeiRa & RaMan)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: abcd89
lovely😒

Thanks 😃

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exoLarmy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: poetic
This is so warmly written.
I am liking the characterisations a lot. Pl do write sooner 👍🏼

Aww thank you, i didn't think you guys would like this Os this much after all it was kind of rushed as i was itching to pen down some of the things that were coming to me. 😃

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exoLarmy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: columbia

No please dont wait. You must continue. I dont want to feel like I should not have been honest. I love your writing especially it has a certain gripping quality to it. You are right, when I went back and read it was that they are egostical and you gave a 'war' zone for that ego, which is fab in its own way. Please do continue, in fact, you have thought it through which in itself makes you a better writer than the show's writer 👏

I want to continue too but right now i have to study for my exams (january mocks) and hopefully after that i'll continue. And (@bold) Please don't feel like that. I swear i appreciated your honest feedback it was helpful and it will definitely help me write the second part 2 (fingers crossed).

@blue : Thank you for the lovely comments but actually this was kind of rushed and i don't think i thought the story through (but i know i will for part 2) however structure wise i wanted to give the POVs of each character so you can understand them better.😆😳 I am glad you liked it, it means a lot to me as a writer. 🤗