ArShi OS - Beyond this Chapter - Page 2

Wow, I was completely hooked from start to finish. Arnav’s confusion and struggle with his feelings felt so real, and I loved how Khushi brought in so much warmth and energy. The soulmate angle was such a nice touch. It made their connection feel so deep and fated. The way you built up the tension with Arnav’s turmoil and Khushi’s own feelings was just fantastic. Loved it Shiri.❤️

Originally posted by: kavya1994

Beautiful OS.

You've penned down Arnav's inner turmoil really well. Loved it

Thank you so much Kavya

Originally posted by: Savera84

Wow! It was beautifully written tale and you fully justified the prompt.

You have narrated Arnav's turmoil, Khushi's hesitance to accept her feelings because that can hurt Lavanya and Lavanya's happiness who is totally oblivious to Arnav and Khushi's feelings so well.

Loved reading the story.

Cheers..

So glad you enjoyed reading it Raji

Thank you

Originally posted by: minakrish

Wow, I was completely hooked from start to finish. Arnav’s confusion and struggle with his feelings felt so real, and I loved how Khushi brought in so much warmth and energy. The soulmate angle was such a nice touch. It made their connection feel so deep and fated. The way you built up the tension with Arnav’s turmoil and Khushi’s own feelings was just fantastic. Loved it Shiri.❤️

This means a lot Mrina! Thank you so much for reading. Glad you liked it

Res for now, will get back

Saw a story from you after so long yay

reserved

I loved it it's so well written beautiful! Thanks for the tag I enjoyed reading it..

Really a beautiful one 😍

Read something so good on Arshi after a very long time ❤️

Amazing story 👏

Really enjoyed reading this. Those flashes of Arnav and Khushi, could it be their past life? I do feel bad for Lavanya but I hope she finds her soulmate pretty soon.

Also is there another chapter to this?

Hey Shiri,

Thanks for writing this one.

Beautifully done - I could feel Arnav's turmoil through your writing. The visions that they had, and the slow realization (grandma's storytelling was a master touch) that they could be soulmates was very effectively portrayed.

One thing I have noticed about your writing - that I think is a change from before - is the economy in words to describe a situation. It's very effective and it goes down so well to a reader. When you can convey something in one word. never use 10! - Rule of thumb for any writer. The reader gets it. you don't need to emphasize the same thing over and over. So many published authors forget to do this, so I'm really glad you're employing this in your writing. Well done!