FF - The Beginning at the End- Thetelleroftales - Page 4

chapter 4

Poor Aman is stuck in this drama playing out.

chapter 5

Nani wants to go meet Arnav and Khushi. That would be the right thing to do.

They already have kidnapping, cheating, murder attempts. What else now?

chapter 6

Finally. Anjali has all the facts in front of her.

absolutely love this! Anjali finally trusting her intuition is one of the thing I would have loved to see on the show but the this definitely helps fill in those voids! I love how you've fleshed out Aman as well!

Looking forward to the next chapters!

Thank you! I am glad you're liking it. I've planned this (like my previous one) as a 3 part story with 6 chapters in each part.
Part 2 begins soon...

Wow read all in one go! So nicely written. Kidnapping of ASR never got its due attention from Anjali in the TV series. I like this Anjali better. Thank you for this amazing narration!

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Thank you!

It always frustrated me how two-dimensional Anjali was in the show. It hurt my feminist sentiments to see a character like that.

I felt it was important to address the fact that Shyam got away with what he did because she let him back in her life, even after he was thrown out and against the explicit wishes of her Chotey.

Do consider reading my earlier story when you have time, especially the Anjali-Aman OS that can be considered as a sort of prequel to this story.

Just read your earlier story and it gives further depth and context to this one :) I like how you've reimagined scenarios and used dialogues from the show. The last line from the Aman Anjali OS stood out, " Just Anjali, no strings attached." She's an interesting character to explore. I agree with you about her being portrayed as two-dimensional in the show, particularly in the second half.

Thank you guys for your likes and comments.

Watch this space for more exploration of Anjali's character.

Part 2 will continue to overlap with my previous FF and Part 3 will take off where it ended. (Fingers crossed that I will be able to execute it as per my plan!)

Originally posted by: thetelleroftale

Thank you! I am glad you're liking it. I've planned this (like my previous one) as a 3 part story with 6 chapters in each part.
Part 2 begins soon...

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