Drabble l Forever - Page 3

Jaate hue kehte ho, qayamat ko milenge,

Kya khoob, qayamat ka hai goyaa koii din aur

-Ghalib

From the sashaying of soft breeze, to the floating gulmohar petals, to the flutter of pages of his book - you created a hauntingly beautiful atmosphere. She is calm, because he hasn't left her at all, the ghost of his presence is in the very air she breathes. And then the prophecy and promise of eternal love sets into motion, and she departs on her own journey to where their hamesha lies - together.

Beautifully penned, Ruchi!

Thank you,dear Writer! For making us believe in forever .

Originally posted by: tinken

Thank you,dear Writer! For making us believe in forever .

Thank you my dear for believing in my reflections of a forever :)

Originally posted by: Whats-in-a-name

Jaate hue kehte ho, qayamat ko milenge,

Kya khoob, qayamat ka hai goyaa koii din aur

-Ghalib

From the sashaying of soft breeze, to the floating gulmohar petals, to the flutter of pages of his book - you created a hauntingly beautiful atmosphere. She is calm, because he hasn't left her at all, the ghost of his presence is in the very air she breathes. And then the prophecy and promise of eternal love sets into motion, and she departs on her own journey to where their hamesha lies - together.

Beautifully penned, Ruchi!

Thank you so, so much. You have beautifully enhanced what I said with the profoundness of your words <3

How perfect is this Ghalib sher... we give form and stamp time on qayamat as well, don't we?!

With today being the anniversary of our pasandeeda show,

us kī yaad aa.ī hai sāñso zarā āhista chalo

dhaḌkanoñ se bhī ibādat meñ ḳhalal paḌtā hai

- Rahat Indori

Originally posted by: Arshi67

Thank you so, so much. You have beautifully enhanced what I said with the profoundness of your words <3

How perfect is this Ghalib sher... we give form and stamp time on qayamat as well, don't we?!

With today being the anniversary of our pasandeeda show,

us kī yaad aa.ī hai sāñso zarā āhista chalo

dhaḌkanoñ se bhī ibādat meñ ḳhalal paḌtā hai

- Rahat Indori

Today's the anniversary! Gosh, I didn't realize that. What a beautiful sher to dedicate! Here's a little borrowed something from my side-

Tumhari yaad ke jab zaqm bharne lagte hain,

Kisi bahaane tumhe yaad karne lagte hain

- Faiz

Hamesha ❤️

Originally posted by: Whats-in-a-name

Today's the anniversary! Gosh, I didn't realize that. What a beautiful sher to dedicate! Here's a little borrowed something from my side-

Tumhari yaad ke jab zaqm bharne lagte hain,

Kisi bahaane tumhe yaad karne lagte hain

- Faiz

Hamesha ❤️

Our pasandeeda poet always says it best!

9 years and my state is...

apnī hālat kā ḳhud ehsās nahīñ hai mujh ko

maiñ ne auroñ se sunā hai ki 'paagal' huuñ maiñ

- Aasi Uldani (what he almost said :D)

Oh my heart! Beautiful words giving me such an immense feeling of sadness!

Brilliantly written as always!

-V

Sad ending!!

Thought not that much as they are together even after death.

A nicely penned down drabble.

Continue writing such amazing stories...

With Love

Kirti

Originally posted by: BookWormV

Oh my heart! Beautiful words giving me such an immense feeling of sadness!

Brilliantly written as always!

-V

Thank you so much, V!

Originally posted by: kd_Arshi

Sad ending!!

Thought not that much as they are together even after death.

A nicely penned down drabble.

Continue writing such amazing stories...

With Love

Kirti

Thank you for your kind words, Kirti :)