Arhi FS: WRY!! Complete & A/N pg 149 (NEW) - Page 11

Originally posted by: KRISGEET

Hi N

Unresd my comment on Page 1.

Waiting eagerly for the next shot.

Hope the next shot will clear the circumstances of Khushi's arranged marriage with Arnav and how did they separate.

For Whose wedding is Arnav the Best Man and Khushi the Bridesmaid?

The groom may be Arnav's friend and the bride Khushi's. Are we talking about Akash and Payal here?

😊

Originally posted by: KRISGEET

Hi N

Loved the concept here. As promised you are back with a different flavour. I wouldn't have thought arranged marriage plus separation is the theme here.

So Arnav is a renowned pianist who had reached his zenith in his yesteryears (probably when he was still married to Khushi) and now he is finding it difficult to get audience for a concert. Loved that Sheetal seems to be a positive character.

Arnav Simmons & Khushi Gupta. An intercaste arranged marriage in Indian Scenario, hmm very interesting.

From the update it looks as if Arnav had seen and liked Khushi and his mom approached Khushi's father for her hand for Arnav? Was it a marriage of convenience for Khushi? Well her reply to her MIL that she didn't think she had to love him 'that way' looks interesting.

Was sad to know that Arnav had heard this convo between his mom and his wife. He probably got married as he had started to love Khushi but maybe Khushi was in it for the benefit of her loved ones. Did Arnav know this reason when he married Khushi?

So many questions in the first part!!!

Khushi is now 29 and Arnav 40. At what age did Khushi marry? Her dialogue with her MIL seems to be immediately after her wedding and at that time looks like she was much much younger. Did Khushi's reply sadden Arnav and did he start putting his heart in an impenetrable box that even Khushi's changing feelings couldn't give him courage to start accepting the fact that Khushi had started loving him?

Or was it someone or something else that threw a wedge in their wedded life?

Anyway Arnav's insecurities seem to have pushed Khushi further and both seem to be standing at two parallel shores with no idea when the twain shall meet.

Thanks for this lovely concept N. Only sad feeling is that this is not an SS but only a Five or a Six Shot.

Anyway we are ready to accept whatever you write for us.

All the Best! Waiting for the next shot when you are ready.

🤗

Originally posted by: LuvAmalfi

Thank you Ecri.. 😊 .. can't wait for more of this story .. especially the next update

Originally posted by: KRISGEET

Hi N

Unresd my comment on Page 1.

Waiting eagerly for the next shot.

Hope the next shot will clear the circumstances of Khushi's arranged marriage with Arnav and how did they separate.

For Whose wedding is Arnav the Best Man and Khushi the Bridesmaid?

The groom may be Arnav's friend and the bride Khushi's. Are we talking about Akash and Payal here?

😊

Originally posted by: Fe-en-Dios

I might just take you by surprise 😛

Originally posted by: Ecrivain

Me too.

I have a feeling that Khushi may have another man in her life. 😲

Originally posted by: Fe-en-Dios

Hi P

Thank you for the comment.

I said it might be a six shot, for all you know, it will be five or four 😊

Khushi's marriage age will be out in shot 2.

Originally posted by: Ecrivain

P Ji

You stole words from my mouth. I also feel its the wedding of their best friends. But does that mean that Arhi's best friends also have an age gap 😲

Originally posted by: KRISGEET

Oh your surprises are delightful

Originally posted by: KRISGEET

N you are being brutally tightlipped 😭😭😭