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Bharati27

@Bharati27

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#491

Whenever this two fights it always goes to the extreme level.

It is very sad to see after new found love, both of them have to part away like this way.

Is it end of Dawn?

Thank you for Beautiful update.

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SharuAG

@SharuAG

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#492

I have agree with Khushi. He does not have the right to do that to her. Take advantage of her. He is trying ro run away from the truth. And when someone remindahim the truth he has to gut to attack her.

I want Khushi to go her home...

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 6 years ago

#493

Edited by AquaSandhya - 5 years ago

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vedika275

@vedika275

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

#494

This update broke my heart in more pieces than I can even count. Trust me, you write beautifully and you deserve so much appreciation for penning something so heartbreakingly beautiful.

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Cutipieash

@Cutipieash

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#495

Khushi's tears were heart wrenching one as she felt Humiliated for what Arnav has done to her and she couldn't stop herself too as well as stop Arnav.

Like she decided that its better to move on than pursue it further and getting more and more Bruises and Scars that she don't know wheather she will be able to take it or not.

Arnav was restless. He was very much guilty of what he did to Khushi as well as the pain was there too residing in his heart. When he got to know from Nani that Khushi is going back he just couldn't escape from the heart break knowing that Khushi has made a place inside his heart but also knows that he wouldn't be able to give her what she wants.

Nobody can escape from what heart desires. Arnav came there finally to make amends for his behaviour and apologies to her as well as to see off in a hope in residing in both of their hearts to meet again but to stubborn to show each other or tell each other. Arnav dud warn Khushi to stay away but Arnav will you be able to follow the mantra or would take a decision by having girlfriend to forget Khushi.

It was a emotional update.

Thanks for the pm.

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shirana

@faz28

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#496

It was a very emotional update, would love to know how the story unfolds. Never thought Arnav would come to the station and aplogise.

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avchowdhury

@avchowdhury

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#497

Wow ! Just loved this update

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kizh72

@kizh72

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#498

The beauty of first love, first heartbreak...

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z0DQxI3KM7o[/YOUTUBE]

Cr: YT/Uploader

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GuruDeep246

@GuruDeep246

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#499

It's a heart wrenching chapter..so beautifully portrayed the emotions ..Sandhya take a bow dear..u r a one talented writer..will comment again after regaining normalcy..this update made me numb..

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Gauri

@cheers2all

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#500

My favorite part of this update? Ofcourse, the last few minutes in the train coupe. His disheveled appearance, his guilt when he saw her bruises, his apology, her appreciating his apology and the reluctant lingering of handshake. It was all so touching & beautifully written. Arnav seems to be in a helpless situation. I feel there is more to it than his going to US. His parting words would probably cause more pain to Khushi than his behavior the night before.

Also, Arnav's apology was quite unexpected. I thought the heroine would leave with a heavy heart, while the hero wallows in guilt and regret. But he showed up!! And offered a heartfelt apology. AND he got a Cadbury's Dairy Milk...yet again...and an Extra large one this time. How can anyone not melt? (I have a serious thing for Cadbury's dairy milk! )

PS - I love the way you write. It almost has a poetic touch to it - "His eyes seemed to acquire tangible qualities; they touched her everywhere at once" 👏

Edited by cheers2all - 6 years ago