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MyheartbeatASR

@MyheartbeatASR

Beginner

Posted: 6 years ago

#691

Now this will be interesting what Arnav has in mind about her company and now this revelation. I thought khushi will wait sometime and eventually will get to know Arnav's intention. Great update 😊. Well written

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Gauri

@cheers2all

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#692

Finished reading all 12 parts in one go. The plot is very interesting and zara hatke. The last chapter ended on such a cliffhanger. How would Arnav react when he comes to know that the girl he was pining for, was right in front of him all the time? Waise, I always thought Arnav will be the one who will figure out that the girl is Khushi.

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#693

Amazing!!!

But y did u stop there!

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ScarletNiki

@ScarletNiki

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#694

This is a review long overdue! I started following Tangled from Chapter 10 when I chanced upon it on IF. I immensely enjoy reading your stories (also read the girl and the ghost)!! Your are a talented writer which shows in the effortless conversations and I can't wait to read how this unfolds.

Personally relate to Khushi's character being a workaholic. Never have my predictions for a story gone all so wrong😆 in a good way. I love that you avoid any unnecessary drama and make the story so real. Arnav's and Khushi's live amongst us in today's world. Terrific idea and super execution.👏

Thank you for taking time out of your schedule to give us updates! Please try and make the cliff hangers less nail biting, it is difficult not to build ten different scenarios only to find them all being false😆

Cheers!

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anayaraizada

@anayaraizada

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#695

Hey there

This ff is just sooo amazing

I just stumbled upon this last day

And thought to read it but was not in mood to read such stuff

But when I started I couldn't stop

This is a one amazing story

Now waiting for what happens next

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Vandie

@Vandie

Navigator

Posted: 6 years ago

#696

This is a wonderful fiction..

Why do u leave the story on a cliffhanger and disappear keeping us tangled😉??

Do update soon

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bhavis

@bhavis

Stunner

Posted: 6 years ago

#697

Book marking

Thank you Kizh and Kavi for recommending

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#698

Originally posted by: anjs
that was a twist... I thought Khushi will wait and somehow the truth of Arnav's presence in her company will come out before...

now that Arnav knows the truth, will he go back on his words and wont go for a relationship, knowing that he is gonna take over her company soon ??

Thanks so much!

Now that Arnav is aware, we'll have to see his immediate reaction as well as his future plans. ;)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#699

Originally posted by: StellaBella
Loved it... Waiting for Arnav's reaction...😉😛

Thank you!!

Next part will deal with his reaction ;)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#700

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
Omg...khushi had told him the truth...I never expected that...you know Wats the plus point of your writing... you always brings unexpected things... I thought of so many scenarios after the last update about how khushi is going to explain that kiss...But her saying the truth was which I never thought of because if it happens then wat's left to be tangled...But now after reading this i am getting it... Real tangled situation abb aane wala hai... now ball is on Arnav's court... How will he going to react on this... Now he got that khushi is the stranger which he is serious about... and his deal with sheetal... wat if khushi comes to know about it? He is going to be in trouble

1stly thanks so much, Ayushi for your constant support and detailed reviews. Reading it makes my day. :)

Really glad you are liking the unexpectedness. :D Story is almost over it's half way point so now things will start to untangle? (or maybe entangle some more ;) )

As you say, ball is in Arnav's court now. Let's see how he reacts/deals.