Hey Ritu, I was very happy to see an update finally and that too, this long!!
First of all, hope you are feeling better now. Get well soon, dear,
So much happened here...it was nice to see that Garima is not so bad after all. It is nice that Khushi will have some mother figure in her life.
Shyam going off with Kelly did prove to be a blessing-in-disguise for Khushi. I love Ira's character a lot. She is so sweet and has been such a refreshing respite for Khushi always.
Arnav is so thick-headed. He doesn't know that all these strong feelings that he has for Khushi is nothing but love. I guess it will take him a really long time to realize that.
Arnav is such a cynic...I am sorry if I forgot some part of this story where it explains why he is so cynical about women and relationships. It's been long and I should go back and read through few of the earlier chapters.
Cynic or not, but he is definitely a very poor judge of character. He is so ready to believe the worst about Khushi. But when it comes to Lavanya, he is so blind. He may not exactly be in love with Lavanya, but he definitely likes her and considers her to be a good person and someone he may be ok marrying in future. Thank you so much for not making Arnav sleep with Lavanya or anybody else. But I didn't like the while romantic dinner part, how Arnav was happy and relaxed with Lavanya, showed her around the house, praised her cooking and even danced romantically with her. 😡
Everybody around Arnav can see Khushi for who she is, but the one person she loves, believes the worst of her. Poor girl.
Nora and Daniel are so sweet. I am sure they finding out about Khushi's loss of innocence has some significance. Please make Arnav realize her innocence soon and make him grovel for forgiveness...I think there is still some more time for that though because of the title of this story. Now, will come the Blackmail part.
Dr Rathore seems to come with his own story. Is he going to play a significant role in the story?
I like the name Rathore because of the BoV story. 😊
Maybe, you should also have SurAj in this story.
Lavanya seems to be a weird character. Why would she be so attracted to all things spooky? I am sure you have not put this In the story just as a filler. This part of her character will definitely have some bearing In future. Maybe, she will imprison Khushi there sometime. I feel sorry for Lavanya that she took up a lowly job to be close to Arnav. And that is the only reason Arnav would stay away from her.😆
It was so very predictable of Arnav to react the way he did when he saw Khushi with Dr Rathore.
BTW! Is there something going on with Khushi with her dizzy spells? Is she pregnant? If I recall, Arnav had used protection...let's wait and see.
Arnav is such a hypocrite...😡😡. He spent the first 2 weeks partying, flirting and trying to sleep with girls...he decided to start a new chapter with Lavanya, had a relaxed and romantic dinner with her and would have most likely slept with her that day if not for Tanu's sudden visit...but he has the nerve to question Khushi about having coffee with Dr Rathore. Even if what he believes about Khushi is correct, what right does he have to judge her for having coffee when he himself had done much, much more since she last saw him.
As expected, Khushi did not fall over herself and agree to his demand. But looks like he has planned something else as Plan B... maybe, he will create trouble for her at work and will take advantage of her mamaji's health situation to blackmail her...
Please get well soon and update the next part soon...one question...is this also a completed story that you are reposting?
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