IPKKND FF: JALEBI by Jalebi Jane Thread 1: EPISODE 001-042

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Posted: 9 years ago

#771

Ur style of writing is superb... Keep going dear I'm absolutely loving it

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Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#772

That was sad ... desperate moment

went you lose everything

know there is no hope

only arnav can save them...

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smithasrk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#773

Sad update. They are now homeless. I hate buaji.

Woahhh.Paris kissed Aman????

Arnav teased Aman???????

Okkaaayyy...

But why do I have this weird feeling that both Khushi and Arnav are going to do something stupid?????????

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Anu567

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Posted: 9 years ago

#774

What an incredibly silly thing to do, Buaji! Haay re Nandakisore! 😭

Waiting for the next part already!

Best,

Anu

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Lily30

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Posted: 9 years ago

#775

Loved part 36👏

Oh no, they are in a mess, nothing to fall back on and on top Shyam is in position of authority, what will Khushi do now, what will her plan be?

Eager for the next part😃

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adiros

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Posted: 9 years ago

#776

each episode makes us realize how apt the title jelebi is

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canapoem

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Posted: 9 years ago

#777

Oh dear, poor Khushi and Payal have been completely robbed.

Buaji does not deserve any sympathy.

And Shyam turned out to be more cunning than I thought.

He is making sure all doors are closed for Khushi.

Lets see how Khushi fights back.

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Pari025

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Posted: 9 years ago

#778

Brilliant updates Maya. LG had his share of insolence from Ms. Gupta. Will he let her off the hook for this insolence. This chase is more thrilling than lovey, dovey stuff. You have built good supporting characters too.

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Jalebi Jane

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Posted: 9 years ago

#779

Originally posted by: _FeistySoul_
Wow. I caught up on all the latest chapters n wot a mess dey are in! Im feeling utterly terrible!! Wot are the crimes that bua has committed that she's shameful apart from the houses??! Did i miss something? :(
Also here i want to esp applaud Pari the fabulous friend. She has been that rational mind during the time of distress n handled things in an exceptional way. And i so loved the lil convo between Arnav n Aman after Pari's hasty departure. I admire them as a unit as much as i do with the women in here. Im super thoroughly enjoying this ride.
Looking forward to more n more updates in quick succession :D
( no pressure though! Im nt saying it M. ;) Blame my enthusiasm on it! :D)

Yes, Sister, you might have missed something.

Best to re-read the early episodes after Khushi receives a rishta from Shyam.

True, Pari is a super girl!

I adore her as much as I love Khushi.

And I like the Aman-Pari jodi.

They seem to turn up in all my stories :-)