IPKKND FF: JALEBI by Jalebi Jane Thread 1: EPISODE 001-042

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orchids8888

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Posted: 9 years ago

#741

I am loving the theme of this story... Its fabulous...👏

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shruti

@shruti46

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Posted: 9 years ago

#742

Shyams prb is not simple as it looks.
Ahh pari you are so right.Hero is coming back .
Payal is packing must be something drastic happened.
Oh that Pen drive ..khushi forgot abt it ..

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rosalineak

@rosalineak

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Posted: 9 years ago

#743

Nice ...

Arnav is coming back,can't wait...

Pari is a sweetheart...

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bakwas_serial

@bakwas_serial

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Posted: 9 years ago

#744

What an intriguing tale you weave, he is a CBI officer, not a crook ? Next episode he has flipped the property several times :)

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Lily30

@Lily30

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Posted: 9 years ago

#745

Loved part 33, 34 and 35👏

Oh no Shyam is even more crooked😡

Arnav helping Khushi on the side😃

What's happened that Payal is packing?

Eager for the next part😃

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PariKC

@IdioTinTin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#746

Oh my, am so impressed. The due Arnav and Aman, what a brain they have. Obviously, running such an empire, no doubt at that. How easily Arnav and Aman assumed the real story by the information provided.

Can this story get any more interesting? Arnav is coming back the evening already.

Aashi seems to be a cute one "you're not the boss of me" - I guess he watches Malcolm in the Middle 😆

Anyway, happy that Khushi decided to approach Aman and take Arnav's help which am sure he will offer, or just do even without offering. But Shyam and CBI---oh my, what a twist! You're becoming Christopher Nolan of India Forums 😉

I wonder what happened to Payal so suddenly, maybe too overwhelmed at the thoughts of what could have happened to Pari today.

Too too too curious for more. Loved the updates 🤗

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#747

how could Shyam be a CBI Officer 😲

Pariis right..
Khushi should seek help from Aman..

I like Khushi- Pari's bonding..
They share everything with each other..help each other.. care for each other..😃

Lo ji..
ASR is coming back...
(ASR's bg music plays)😉

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#748

Originally posted by: sakha_sakhi
Hi JJ,
I like to address you JJ then Maya... Hope you don't mind...

Another great story... I liked this story also... I suppose this one also your earlier story... Can we have the entire story together at some place?... If so please write the Web address...

Coming to the update... Fabulous... Waiting for Arnav to get into the action...

I suppose Shyam has somedoubt about Khushi may do something about getting information about him... So he played this act of CBI officer or even if he is a CBI officer then the corrupt one...

Identity of Shyam is a good twist in the story... Eagerly waiting for extra update...

Yes, I quite like JJ :-)

And I'll announce the website when it is available.

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#749

Aman is ASR's one man army . Aman's character is shaped so well . He is very resourceful no wonder he ASR's right hand man .

With Chopra's investigation Arnav has managed to fill the gaps in the story . Rest will be revealed when he appears in person . Pari ki muh me ghee shakkar , she has accurately guessed ASR's next move . ASR is coming to rescue his damsel in distress .

Payal seems to have smelled the real danger , so she is packing , need not involve herself and her pyaari behna in trouble . The trouble maker Buaji is calling her not so favorite niece to handle her laadli payal 😲