IPKKND FF: JALEBI by Jalebi Jane Thread 1: EPISODE 001-042

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archiesview

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Posted: 9 years ago

#701

I love this story! The way you write is hilarious. Every morning i wait for your updates.

Khushi, Payal, Pari and Aman are all so well written.

Missing Arnav now. Hope he comes back soon.

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shruti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#702

29 & 30Money rules thats so true .Why arnav assume worst of khushi in every circumstance .

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shruti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#703

Aman back to being lover boy again .Os it so easy to tell if someone is in love or not ? like khushi did..

Khushi didnt checked Waste basket .it looked like typical Indian tv serial scene .Thing u r finding is ftont of your eyes yet hero/heroine fails to locate .😆

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PariKC

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Posted: 9 years ago

#704

Oh, just like Khushi I was almost in panick that something may have happened but good that Pari returned safely on time.

It's for sure that if Aman knows the matter, he can surely help Khushi lots but of course, then the matter will be known to Arnav too then. What would be his reaction at the truth?

Wonderful update, mindblowing writing as always

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lara3110

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Posted: 9 years ago

#705

That was awesome update. Aman is going to help them, to sort out the problem...👏

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Filmyshilmy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#706

awesome update.

khushi was frantic. anyone would be if they lose something on which their future depends at this moment. even i looked around everywhere for that memory stick. such magical is your description of the situation.

i have a feeling that both Mr Raizada and Mr Behl are irrevocably in love with the girls but its the way of showing concern and care which is different.and Khushi being khushi cannot but be elated with joy to understand Mr Behl's deep rooted love for her friend Pari.

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mansi0606

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Posted: 9 years ago

#707

Good Aman came to know Pari was with KHushi and now Khuahi knows Aman's feelings it wont take time for her to play cupid now.

Mr.Behl did get it right about their mission and how chivalrous of him to offer help. I believe he would have done it even without Arnav's orders.

Now wait for Ms. Khan to unfold the information she gathered.

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rosalineak

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Posted: 9 years ago

#708

Can't wait to read the revelations about the snake...

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Anu567

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Posted: 9 years ago

#709

Interesting episode this one, Maya, glad our heroine decided on the spur of the minute to step up and confide in Aman. Yes, they certainly need a voice of reason between them, and who better than ASR's dependable, eminently reliable and patient Man Friday - Aman Behl is right in indicating to her that he might have resources that could help the. Pari is thankfully safe and Aman after calmly ensuring she is fine, leaves them to catch up. Ah, the waste paper basket...come one, Miss Gupta, you cannot fail to notice it!! 😆

Waiting, waiting, waiting!

Best,

Anu

Edited by Anu567 - 9 years ago