ArShi SS/3 shot : Like Every Night (Last Part Pg 6) *Complete*

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tashi26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Very beautifully written...eagerly waiting for next part

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Rimi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Wow!! Something very new...amazing!! Plz update soon

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nisha_mehta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Very different

Hope that arnav will rescue his khushi and himself before he were to lose her and their relationship completely

Continue soon

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

waiting eagerly for the next update..

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PreenaRak

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Hey it's different n interesting. Waiting for nxt part

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mhd72

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

A very different concept, in terms of visualizing Khushi and Arnav in such a set up. But this is a glimpse of many a deals coming through in the real world. Though people try to be all hush-hush about it.

The last couple of lines, where Khushi wishes secretly for Arnav to stop her from going for any more deals is very telling in terms of Khushi's mental and emotional rollercoaster. Those last few lines reiterate the fact, that irrespective of the world trying to treat her as a piece of flesh, despite of being The ASR's wife, she is a pure and selfless person at heart; her soul is untouched by the horrible world she has to encounter.

Continue soon.

Much love,

Mili.

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dair10arshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

This is marvelous! I can't wait to read the next part!!!! The whole new take on ipkknd... I wish Arnav says something! Poor khushi she has taken it on herself!

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Nivedita137

@Nivedita137

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Hi!

Firstly, I'd just like to say kudos to you for portraying Arnav Khushi in a different light, while keeping the essence of their characters.

Arnav worked hard to get AR to soaring heights, so it is only imaginable that a whole world of fear engulfs him with news of his company sinking. Khushi being the selfless soul that she is, turns her fears into strengths of steel.

But in the process, she is stripped of her innocence, as fear of the inability to ward of advances from men that only becomes bolder by the day, grows within; the feeling of being violated settles along with heavy weariness. Arnav isn't oblivious to her distress isn't he? I hope he takes a step soon to put her fears to rest and bring the old Khushi back; a step before it's too late.

Excellent writing! Waiting for the Third part. :)