COMPLETE|ArShi SS:If I Were You Just For A Day (Sheetal Track)| - Page 2

Originally posted by: Kiddo_Star

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Wow!!! First of all THANK YOU!!!

Thank you so so sooo much Didu for giving us another wonderful and memorable story of yours.

Sheetal's track- serial take out... My favorite... I love all the stories of serial take out and I'm adding one to the top of the list I guess...

Khushi voiced out... Wow! Thank God she isn't suppressing any longer... And Arnav he should know how ignorant he had become.

Update soon didu.. Can't wait to know more..

Love you.. Muahhh..

Love,

Yours,

Munchkin

Originally posted by: Simi1711

Thank you sooo much for the motivation, as always munchkin!

Let's see how much justice I m able to do to the thoughts that I have envisioned for this one.

Love you! 🤗

Originally posted by: lechuarshi

i still hate the one who write those entire sheetal track and then stupid mrs india track...i stopped watching it because they were showing khushi as some clown...stupid girl...unworthy or even worse they made us viewers to agree that sophisticated Harvard Ex of Arnav knew every little details of him..which she..his wife didnt even heard or known...😡😡.

i was lyk...where the hell is our khushi..the real one...who accepted each challenges of ASR in office..who had the guts to reply back to him..who slapped the resignation letter aftr giving a good speech about his arrogance...Who searched and rescued her kidnapped husband from the clutched of snake with her sheer intelligence and bravery...a woman with backbone and self respect...😕😕..

...I laughed at the way stupid writer characterized ASR as some fun loving guy...who enjoyed his college life and smiled and laughed a lot with his ex...

like really...then what happened after that...he broke up with her...suddenly become some hard shell..who stopped smiling..laughing or whatever..arrogant, ruthless..etc etc...

they failed entirely there...I can guarantee as ardent viewer of ipk and watching the way character of ASR to arnav.. that Arnav must be some lonely, brooding guy..whose only focus at that time was to complete his education..and later his dreams to achieve money and fame through hard work...After his parents tragic death..his mainly aim was to provide his di a good sheltered life...help his mothers family in return for accepting him and his di in their life..

so chuck out the smiling laughing ASR who enjoyed CLg life...

sheetal and Arnav dated in clg..not a big deal...But changing a person entirely..arghhh...

enogh of my blabbering😆😆...voh kya hai...I hate SHIT ALL and everything related to it in Show...

These long comments r my real frustrations..😆...

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actual comment abhi shuru hua...😆😆

And simi I love u for writing something based on that track...

U r writing = I trust U completely🤗 ...

ja Khushi Ja...SHIT all ki band baja...(and give this Kick on her ass😡..)

everyone take her as granted...even arnav😡😡..and that stupid family always mouthed the one and only mantra lyk..Arav is just lyk Arnav...he is junior Arnav...and so on and on...😡😡...poor khushi..

even nani..who didnt lyk modern Lavanya for her modern ways and always spoke about tradition and cultures..accept ultra modern Sheetal even after knowing her single mother status...

i want to confess something...actually i really didnt see the Basketball scene in ipk...or most of the scene after it😉...except Karvachouth one...😆😆

ye le bitiya...simi

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Originally posted by: Simi1711

Everything you wrote above was simply BANG ON my darling!

I try to retain the original individuality of my characters whenever I draft an OS/TS on them, when I m taking a stance from the show-tracks.

I will try my level best to do justice to what I have envisioned on this track here. And personally, I had resented the whole basketball sequence and many other aspects during the Sheetal track.

Especially the fact that the CVs had simply ruined the fundamental dynamics of Khushi and Arnav's characters.

So *fingers crossed* for me heading with this SS.

Because more than anyone, I don't want to disappoint myself while writing this SS.