[COMPLETE] ArShi SS: The 10 Days Challenge (Moved to Blog) - Page 54

Originally posted by: Anu567

Simi,

This was such a super sweet college romance. I so loved it. Waited to finish it before writing to tell you that although this topic has been pretty much done to death, there are a few that leave a lasting impression. Your story is one of them, so take a bow, girl. The characters are so life like and likeable, and that right there, along with your skillful weaving of the story is a crucial reason why it succeeds. Amazing characters and took me right back to my college days, when cultural events and competitions were the only preoccupations we ever had to deal with. Thank you for that! Your Khushi and Arnav...what can one even say about them...such amazing maturity at such a young age...simply fab. Loved Lavanya, Payal, Akash, Aman...even Professor Montgomery! Write another awesome one soon?!

Best,

Take a bow!!!

After such a long time found something so well written with no over the top scenes neither dragging away from the plot

You have a charm my lady!
Hoping to read more of your work.

Originally posted by: Afsha29

Take a bow!!!

After such a long time found something so well written with no over the top scenes neither dragging away from the plot

You have a charm my lady!
Hoping to read more of your work.

I really enjoy stories in which ArHi meet in their youth but are meant to be together forever.

I read upto chapter3..wow..amazing..while reading the first part I thought they'll fall in love in the end of the story but but omg they're already in love.. 😃 and the no touch condition , the love-lav mistake,his intelligence way of touching..yes..intelligent boy:) are so good..

In third chapter wow possessive partners they are, I guess nk and lav are just like this by nature..our over possessive pair are just by themselves...and his speech. .it's really good..he cleverly passed the msg to Khushi..

Originally posted by: gprs

I read upto chapter3..wow..amazing..while reading the first part I thought they'll fall in love in the end of the story but but omg they're already in love.. 😃 and the no touch condition , the love-lav mistake,his intelligence way of touching..yes..intelligent boy:) are so good..

In third chapter wow possessive partners they are, I guess nk and lav are just like this by nature..our over possessive pair are just by themselves...and his speech. .it's really good..he cleverly passed the msg to Khushi..

Hey..simply beautiful..Mark Antony..wow..only he can deal with her..how could she even think about the challenge after the beautiful moment..but he did..ha..ha..
ohh..lav saw them..but I didn't expect such a cruel thing from her..I just expect her to simple girl with crush..thank God the dance went well..I was so eager to read their moments..but here came another surprise ..noo.no..shock..khushi fell down.. I expected arnav to catch her followed by a rabba ve...

but expectation is not at All good .because the truth is better here...though she got hurt in the accident I loved the hospital scenes...I just loved it..so sweet..his love for her increased just like my love for this story..finally the dance ..just..wow..

you written beautifully

Originally posted by: gprs

Hey..simply beautiful..Mark Antony..wow..only he can deal with her..how could she even think about the challenge after the beautiful moment..but he did..ha..ha..
ohh..lav saw them..but I didn't expect such a cruel thing from her..I just expect her to simple girl with crush..thank God the dance went well..I was so eager to read their moments..but here came another surprise ..noo.no..shock..khushi fell down.. I expected arnav to catch her followed by a rabba ve...

but expectation is not at All good .because the truth is better here...though she got hurt in the accident I loved the hospital scenes...I just loved it..so sweet..his love for her increased just like my love for this story..finally the dance ..just..wow..

you written beautifully

The seventh part is filled with fun..enjoyed reading it..while in Arnav's case he as usual nailed it..I know I'm being partial to him here..but I just loved his replies ..cool..and Khushi faced the usual expected questions from one and felt bad..though they are youngsters here this particular scene reminds me the original Arshi in the show handling their loved ones..

Finally they're out in open...it's really cool..you know..
his words about taking care of her without any helpless feelings are touchy and lovely..and lav spoiled it..for the first time he shouted at her yet he done that only because of his concern na..so it's acceptable..gonna see how will they make it up..


Omg..is it not lav, then who..it couldn't be payal too..then???
I'm happy for Khushi..her friend and sister are finally patched up with her..NK seems to be a goodhearted one..in future I hope for NK-Lav..jealousy..stupid jealousy yet it's so sweet to watch them..

Sapna!!!!!you're really good at writing and these ideas..I never imagined her..what a cunning girl..Your words as Arnav's father words are inteed true..this girl couldn't take happenings in a good manner..she's envy of Khushi instead of improving herself..arshi is damn cute..I just wanna pull their cheeks...now going to read to know Arnav's payback..

Originally posted by: gprs

The seventh part is filled with fun..enjoyed reading it..while in Arnav's case he as usual nailed it..I know I'm being partial to him here..but I just loved his replies ..cool..and Khushi faced the usual expected questions from one and felt bad..though they are youngsters here this particular scene reminds me the original Arshi in the show handling their loved ones..

Finally they're out in open...it's really cool..you know..
his words about taking care of her without any helpless feelings are touchy and lovely..and lav spoiled it..for the first time he shouted at her yet he done that only because of his concern na..so it's acceptable..gonna see how will they make it up..


Omg..is it not lav, then who..it couldn't be payal too..then???
I'm happy for Khushi..her friend and sister are finally patched up with her..NK seems to be a goodhearted one..in future I hope for NK-Lav..jealousy..stupid jealousy yet it's so sweet to watch them..

Sapna!!!!!you're really good at writing and these ideas..I never imagined her..what a cunning girl..Your words as Arnav's father words are inteed true..this girl couldn't take happenings in a good manner..she's envy of Khushi instead of improving herself..arshi is damn cute..I just wanna pull their cheeks...now going to read to know Arnav's payback..