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Posted: 9 years ago
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Horrible past. Cant waot for d revenge from arshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
can't wait to read more it's two small update plz next update soon can't wait to read about their entry in shantivan plz plz update soonnn
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice chap 2 n 3...
Karan too good.. Arnav was so right...he predicted it correctly..

Those Raizadas n jha agreed to everything..
They cant cook a proper meal..



The kids are so adorable..

Oh god Akash Anjali dadi acted so creepy...

Loved the way Arnav defended khushi n payal..

Eagerly looking forward for their entry in RM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Love the concept dear...just finished reading all three chapters.
Past is clear...I think only nani is the right person amongst so many wrong people. Loved the character sketch...specially their kids. Raizadas deserves this kind of treatment...wants to see their faces when they all come and stay with them.
Arnav still love his family...waiting for their arrival at Shantiniketan.
Beautiful storyline dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Beautiful update. So the Anjali, Akash, Mami, and Dadi are against Arnav and Khushi then how come Nani is with them.Eagerly waiting for the next update. Thank you for PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Loving this story... Had been following it at myeduniya... Didn't realize that you have posted it here...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful update
Loved it
Thanks for pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm Following this story in hinditvadda too.
Raizadas totally fell in arnav' trap. I thought Nani too to be involved with them but looks like she trusted Arnav. Now knowing the past I hate Akash and more than him his so called parents. They clearly know what all Arnav did for them. And Akash accuses Arnav to be a Malik than what about Anjali? These people deserve whatever Arnav planned for them.
Mind blowing plot. Update regularly.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69

Chapter 4

Arnav stood frozen and looked at his brother whom he had loved the most in this world, after his di.

He looked at his di, who said nothing, but nodded at Akash's words as if agreeing with it.

Khushi and Payal stood rooted hearing Akash's words. Never in their life did they imagine a day like this! Akash, a loving brother who follows his bada bhai spoke like THIS!

"AKASH SHUT UP!" NK who was witnessing all this couldn't tolerate it. "Don't forget that the luxuries we all are enjoying now are because of this person! Don't forget that AR is now number 1 due to this person! How could you insult him? This is ARNAV'S HOUSE BECAUSE HE RUNS THE HOUSE. HE TAKES CHARGE OF THE EXPENSES! HE IS IN CHARGE OF THE HOUSE! SO SHANTIVAN IS HIS!"

"WELL WE DON'T NEED HIS SUPPORT THEN," Anjali shouted, "JUST BECAUSE HE RUNS THE HOUSE, HE WON'T OWN IT. THIS IS AKASH'S HOUSE AND HE'LL DECIDE MATTERS!"

"Yes, and I decide, these Gupta sisters should get out of this house this instant before I call security and Jeejaaji would return!" Akash said.

Akash held Khushi's and Payal's hand and started to drag them out when Arnav stopped him.

"So Akash," Arnav said painfully, "This house is yours! The business is yours! But it's all enjoyed by me huh?"

"Yes! You reached this position because of my grandmother, parents and me!" Akash said, "All that's yours is rightfully MINE!"

"Fine! I'll return everything that is rightfully' yours!" Arnav said and dialled Mr. Roy, company lawyer.

Within minutes Mr. Roy came and Arnav signed each and every asset of his on Akash's name and gave the papers to him.

"Here are your rightful' things Akash. Now your parasite elder brother won't enjoy your assets!" Arnav said painfully while Khushi and Payal looked down and cried and NK stood looking at his Nannav painfully.

"Good! So now, I'll take decisions in this house!" Akash said, "SECURITY! KICK THESE GIRLS OUT!"

"STOP!" Arnav shouted at the security and then turned to Akash,

"I think I can take decisions for myself! So I decide! I'm leaving this house forever, along with my wife and sister-in-law!" Arnav said.

Looking at Payal who was clutching Khushi and crying, Arnav said, "I would have asked Payal to stay here since she is one month pregnant. But seeing the way you treated your wife, I think she will be safe with me!"

"Waise bhi, I don't need that piece of sh*t. Who knows if I'm the father of that child?" Akash said angrily while Payal looked at him in horror.

The next moment a slap landed on Akash's face. It was by none other than NK.

"MIND IT AKASH! ONE DAY YOU'LL REGRET ALL THIS! ONE DAY YOU'LL FALL AT PAYAL BHABHI'S FEET AND BEG FOR FORGIVENESS! ONE DAY, YOUR OWN CHILD WILL SPAT AT YOUR FACE! LET'S MEET ON THAT DAY, AKASH! WE'LL MEET ON THAT DAY!" NK shouted, "Nannav, I'm also coming. I cannot stay in this house with these disgusting people.

"Well who asked you to stay here?" Anjali shouted, "YOU'RE NOT A RAIZADA! YOU'RE A DISTANT RELATIVE OF MAMIJI, AN ORPHAN, AND YOU ACT AS IF YOU OWN THE HOUSE! GET OUT!"

"WELL THANK YOU FOR REMINDING ME THAT I'M AN ORPHAN! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR MAKING ME REALIZE THAT I'M NO ONE HERE!" NK shouted.

NK turned to Payal and asked, "Payal bhabhi...sorry Payal didi, do you still want to tie that mangalsutra around your neck in the name of this spineless man?"

Payal wiped her tears and looked at Akash in hatred. The next moment she broke off her mangalsutra and threw it on Akash's face.

"We'll meet someday Akash! And that day, you won't have anything in your hands. You'll be no less than a beggar! And I'm waiting for that day!" Payal shouted.

"YOU wh**e! GET OUT OF THIS HOUSE!" Mamiji shouted.

"WE'RE GOING!" Khushi shouted, who was till now silent, "BUT REMEMBER THIS RAIZADAS, YOU'LL WILL REGRET FOR THIS!"

"JUST GET OUT!" Akash shouted, "And ASR, remove the Raizada from your name because you're not one!"

Arnav laughed and said, "I'll never remove it Akash. Why should I remove it? You didn't give me that name. My late nanaji did. Proudly he had given me his name! RAIZADA! And till my death, I'll be a Raizada!"

With that he held his wife's and sister-in-law's hand and walked out with his brother NK following him.

"Payal!"

Arnav's voice jerked her from flashbacks.

She looked at the person who sat by her side and patted her shoulder. Wiping her tears, he said, "Don't shed your precious tears for that spineless man!"

Payal sniffed and nodded.

She hugged him and said, "How bhai? How could they do this? I loved him and he...he said that he don't want our child...because he is not sure if this is his child or not! How could he?"

Arnav patted her back and said, "They'll have to pay for our every tears Payal! We'll make them pay!"

"The day has arrived guys!" NK who came there and witnessed it said, "They are going to pay!"

Khushi and Lavanya also came there and nodded.

"What about Shashi uncle, Garima aunty and Buaji?" La asked and Payal said, "They said they'll come day after tomorrow!"

"Anyway guys!" Khushi said, "It's time to make an entry at RM!"

Everyone nodded and asked the kids to get into the car.

Before entering the car Payal said to others, "I'm worried for Adi. He hates him! He hates that family! I hope he does not say something offensive and those foxes hurt him!"

"No one is going to hurt Adi!" Lavanya said, "And if he is insulting them, then let him! Each offensive word of his shows how much hurt he is!"

"We cannot control him Payal!" Arnav said, "At the age of 8 he learnt that his father insulted his mother. His father insulted his parenting. And you cannot ask him to be nice with them because all he have for them is hatred!"

"We'll see what happens but don't worry jiji, NO ONE, I mean it, NO ONE WILL HURT OUR ADI OR OUR KIDS!" Khushi assured her and everyone looked at Adi who was sitting grim inside the car while the other three kids were jumping and hopping on him.

"So everything set?" Karan asked at HP who nodded.

He turned to Raizadas and asked, "Are you well settled?" And they nodded.

Karan nodded at all and left to the study room of Raizada house to place some files while Raizadas sat in the living room.

"Di, Ma...please make sure that you all behave well with them!" Akash said.

Mami and Anjali nodded and Shyam said, "Ha, Akash is right. Any wrong move from our part will spoil our impression on them!"

It was then they heard the main door being opened.

"Arrey, they didn't ring the bell?" Anjali asked.

"It's their house. Why would they ring bell?" Akash asked.

They got up from the sofa and were about to move towards the door when something hit Anjali.

"Aah!" Anjali was about to fall when Dadi caught her.

"Soli (Sorry)..." A baby voice said and they all looked at the cause of Anjali's falling.

They saw a small baby girl dressed in a beautiful white dress with a choco-bar stick on her hand. Anjali looked at the girl and then at her saree and gasped seeing that her baby pink designer saree is now brown in colour!

"YOU...HOW DARE YOU? DO YOU KNOW THIS PRICE OF THIS SAREE?" Anjali shouted.

"WHO IS YOUR MOTHER? LET ME SEE HER!" Mami shouted.

"Yeh kaise parvirish diya hai iski ma ne?" dadi said angrily.

"Soli..." baby said in an almost-to-cry voice.

"WHO ARE YOU?" Akash shouted.

"Akash stop it! It's a baby!" Nani said.

"Kya baby Nani? Can't you see my saree?" Anjali shouted, "Iski to main..." she said and lifted her hand and lowered to the baby's height to beat her when she felt someone holding it.

Everyone looked at the boy who came in between Anjali and the baby holding Anjali's hand tightly.

"Adi baiya!" Sonu cried and clinged on his legs.

Adi left Anjali's hand and said dangerously, "Dare you touch my sister and I'll chop down your hand!"

Raizadas stood rooted hearing the kid's words and as they were recovering two voices came.

"Bhaiyya, slap this lady! How dare she make our Sonu cry?" Ruhi said lifting Sonu in her arms and consoling the crying baby.

"Hey you witch," Ruhaan said to Anjali, "Say sorry to my sister or else I'm gonna paint your face!" He said and lifted his paint spray!

"You good for nothing..." Anjali began and the next moment Ruhaan pressed the spray paint and Anjali's face was coloured to black.

"APOLOGIZE TO MY SISTER NOW!" Adi shouted.

Anjali started rubbing her eyes as some paint went in and everyone gathered around her and Akash said, "Sorry, sorry, I apologize from her part. Sorry...please keep that paint away!"

Ruhaan huffed and kept the paint spray inside his little bag.

"What's going on here?" Karan came down.

"Karan uncle!" The kids ran to him.

"Hey!" Karan said and bent down and hugged everyone. He lifted Sonu and asked, "Why is Sonu darling crying?"

"This witch made her cry!" Adi said pointing to a black' Anjali!

"THIS GOOD FOR NOTHING KIDS! WHO ARE THEY? I'M GONNA KILL THEM" Akash shouted and raised his hand to slap Adi when a loud voice boomed in Shantivan

"DON'T YOU DARE TOUCH MY SON!"

Everyone turned to the entrance and stood rooted seeing a furious Payal.




PRECAP


"WHY ARE YOU HERE YOU wh**e?" Anjali shouted.

"BAS!" Karan shouted, "HOW DARE YOU SHOUT AT HER? IT'S BECAUSE OF HER MERCY THAT YOU'RE STANDING HERE!"

"What?" Anjali asked confused.

"This house is hers!" Karan said shocking everyone.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb .update soon 😳
Edited by -Roshini- - 9 years ago

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