ArShi SS: Yours... Forever... (Completed)Ch - 7 Pg-22 Thread#2::07/07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: arshiloversk

Once in a week only!! :O No please don't do is much of Aatyachar on me. You have finshed drafting na post it regularly na. Matlab atleast on alternate days. Please... It's your Pumpkin's request pretty please!!

Pumpkin I've completed drafting the story doesn't mean I'll be able to post it on alternate days... Yaar I get only Wednesday and Friday as time to stay home and study... Other times I'm in my classes so I even have to do self study as well as update and PM the readers... So I can only update each week or else twice a week... Depends upon my schedule Didu...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Kiddo_Star

Pumpkin I've completed drafting the story doesn't mean I'll be able to post it on alternate days... Yaar I get only Wednesday and Friday as time to stay home and study... Other times I'm in my classes so I even have to do self study as well as update and PM the readers... So I can only update each week or else twice a week... Depends upon my schedule Didu...

Yeah studies come first. No problem I will handle my suspense, you take your time and update. And yeah don't stress more. We can wait for stories don't worry about them.

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1029751

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: arshiloversk

Yeah studies come first. No problem I will handle my suspense, you take your time and update. And yeah don't stress more. We can wait for stories don't worry about them.

Thank you so much for understanding Pumpkin... Love you...

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pree2605

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Great prologue..

But who died??

Loved the start..

Thnxx fr pm

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ameena671

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

wow amazing prologue loved it can't wait for the updates thank you for pm.

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KAJAL

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

A nice title, a captivating yet emotional prologue and a gripping concept... Well, its all that you need to start a wonderful fiction and I'm glad that you have them all.
I'm certain that the special someone rather lady love whom Arnav is referring to isn't Khushi and what I could conclude from the last three lines is that Khushi will be the new ray of hope and bliss in Arnav's distraught life.
Khushi will be filling the void in Arnav's life though the path will be painstaking for her. And I being the hungery reader is waiting to read how you'll unfold the story and bring Arnav and Khushi as ArShi.
Having said that, I would humbly request you to post the first chapter as soon as possible.
Thanks a lot for the PM.

Post the first chapter soonish please!

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1029751

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: -Kryptic.Keya-
A nice title, a captivating yet emotional prologue and a gripping concept... Well, its all that you need to start a wonderful fiction and I'm glad that you have them all.
I'm certain that the special someone rather lady love whom Arnav is referring to isn't Khushi and what I could conclude from the last three lines is that Khushi will be the new ray of hope and bliss in Arnav's distraught life.
Khushi will be filling the void in Arnav's life though the path will be painstaking for her. And I being the hungery reader is waiting to read how you'll unfold the story and bring Arnav and Khushi as ArShi.
Having said that, I would humbly request you to post the first chapter as soon as possible.
Thanks a lot for the PM.

Post the first chapter soonish please!

Thank you so so so much didu... I hope that this fiction does go hit... It's from my heart... I'd been wanting to write this SS since quite a time and now it's time that I get...

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1029751

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Sneak Peak to Part - 1

They were on the old highway which usually was less used, when suddenly her eyes widened. Arnav seeing her scared form looked ahead to see a speeding truck coming towards them. Both of them were too horrified to think anything. The road was very narrow and hence not at all a chance to give way to the truck at such a high speed with which it was approaching. She turned the wheels towards the left trying to avoid the accident but alas! It was too late.

The truck was too fast and it was too late to turn the wheels. Even while trying to turn the car, the truck hit the car making it fly and drop hard on the road as it rolled a bit and then finally turned into ashes.

Arnav groaned in pain with his eyes still closed. He heard the car rolling and felt the heat of the flames. He so wanted to open his eyes when he heard her whimper but he was too hurt to open his eyes.

On the other side of the road she laid flat on her stomach. She groaned in extreme pain as she opened her eyes hearing Arnav's painful groans. She needed to be with him. He is in pain. She can't leave him like that.

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I know... I know I'm too bad but I love it😆[

Love,

Kiddo

Edited by Kiddo_Star - 9 years ago