Arshi - SS It's Time To Move On (completed)

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Shalini

@TwisterGirl

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Superb Jayeeta!

Loved how you brought closure to all the characters... especially Anjali.

I agree with you that she need to get a flavor of the real world out there to really move forward in her life. So happy for Priyanka too!

Good job 👏

Looking forward to more stories from you now 😉

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

very well written story...i know it was not about arshi but still its about their family..loved it

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shafqee80

@shafqee80

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

It was certainly a superb effort ...and u did justice to everyone ..

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Anjali is still not realizing that while seeking happiness for the family, she was forcing her decision on them. Let them take their own decision that is called true happiness.

because of her behavior Payal n Akash could not have a happy married life. Who knows had they been home, they wudve been alive.

Its good that she left for some retrospection.

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

It is good that Anjali has left home to find herself .Or else sooner or later she would have started hating Khushi . Anjali with her selfishness has destroyed three lives & hurt so many people whom she calls family . Priyanka has decided to love the baby selflessly which is a start for new beginning . May be someday she will find her true love .

Different concept , good one .

Liked it

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_Chaverah_

@_Chaverah_

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

That was one kick-a*se story!

Seriously, hun, you rocked it.

I mean, there was so much going on. So many views, perceptive, plots...Wow. I'm really really happy for the way you've blend this story. Congratulation, hun.

Having said that lemme applaud you for such realistic approaches you've included here. Agreed, it was more about the characters rather than ArShi, but still, it was endearing and captivating it its own way.

Commendable job, buddy.

Love&Hugs.

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ajeetha

@abivicky86

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

a great story which had everything would have loved to see it on screen

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Dorperle

@Dorperle

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

J😊

I really love this story of yours.

Despite the fact it isn't ARSHI one , and had very much less of them.
Still felt like you had filled all the gaps of the IPK by showing
these characters with their flaws and at the top what they needed to improve.
I am so happy for Priyanka and def Anjali needed this spirit to be on her feet...

LOVELY👏

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Savera84

@Savera84

Viewbie

+ 38

Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

I know it is short. Of course, that is why it is called SS.😊

Prefer to read more chapters, but, not complaining.

I can say it is short and sweet.

Anjali simply thinks what she is doing is for the betterment of others, without understanding what they really want. It is their life and they can decide how they want to lead their life, they do not need Anjali's interference.

Cheers...