ARSHI FF: DEEPLY CONNECTED (Chap 9 - Pg 49)(02/08) - Page 24

Hey I did like the story

Came across your FF for the first time today. Loved all the nine chapters. A new concept. Quite intriguing. Poor Khushi.

Originally posted by: anjs

i really love your story and the inter-personal relations you have between the characters is really good and logical.

But in chapter 8 i felt Khushi let go a bit too easily...i mean she seems like a normal girl, who keep her anger atleast for sometime and here Arnav had jerked her so harshly that she got hurt and even fainted. So i would've expected her to stay miffed for a little while longer.

Also her searching for her in-laws in the stars so easily, seemed a bit weird. Given the fact that all her life she had her parents with her (shashi n garima). I mean the Khushi who always search for dead loved ones in the star, is the one who knows from her childhood that she is an orphan, who loves her biological parents so deeply and yearn for them, hence looks for them in the stars and also tech ARnav to look for his in them.

Its not wrong for this Khushi to do the same, albeit look for her in-laws, but it didn't connect with me. Mostly cause she comes across as a practical girl...the way she dealt with her ex and got married to Arnav, hence this thought.

Hope it doesnt come across as rude

First of all thank you so much for following the story so much.

I haven't really let go much. Yes Khushi did tone down when he forwarded his hand at the same time I haven't revealed what she spoke either. Her face was calm at least that's how she answered him but the actual conversation happened should be coming up soon.

And so glad you put up your comment so frankly. I hope you will be able to connect with the story in the next update much better.

You weren't rude and thank you so much.

Originally posted by: Junglebee

simply superb

Thank you 😳

Originally posted by: Lily30

Loved chapter 8👏

Loved Arnav Khushi conversation👏

First step, friendship😃

Eager for the next part😃

Thank you for the pm😃

Thank you so much. Friends maybe

Not sure.Will update soon 😆

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Arnav feeling guilty at Khushi's condition and he apologizes too making her shock then lifting her in his arms taking her down for lunch was really a huge step now at night it seems that maybe has changed both sitting at the poolside and Khushi talking about his parents but again he talks about her parents but now he took another step wanting them to be friends that is great indeed !

Thank you. More about the night in the next update 😳

Originally posted by: Nazzz16

Amazing update...

Glad to see arnav caring for khushi and even being friends with her...

Looking forward for next part !

Update soon !!

Thnxx for pm 😊

Thank you. Will update soon

You're welcome

Originally posted by: madhu1210

Nice update...

Arnav realised his mistake and apologised..

Anjali was angry witb Arnav but lie the wsy she try to make him understand..

Arnav hope can see khushi's love for his parents...

Wow friends.. nice

Please update soon

Thank you and whi knows what Khushi was talking to 😉.

Will update soon

Originally posted by: EchTee

Wow awesome story
Lovely concept
Arshi become friends
Akhir pyaar ki shuruwaat dosti se hoti hai
Looking forward for more
PM me pls

Thank you so much. Let's see 😛

Will be updating soon and will PM you 😳

Originally posted by: dolly477

very nice

Thanks 😳