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Originally posted by: lechuarshi

To my beloved Arnav and khushi

Aww! Thank you for that lovely quote, Lechu! 😳

Originally posted by: Anu567

Sin,

My comments on part two.

Lovely. Are you going to play it exactly as IPK did? Or are we looking at an alternate view at some point. The story is exactly as it would have been if the original storyline was crafted in words, right? Not saying what is the point at all. It definitely helps us relive the drama so many years on. But, a twist in the tale? Could make it melodrama! Haha! Waiting to see what you do with it.

Love,

Anu

Anu, so impatient! Tch, tch! 😆

Melodrama is here in Part-3 and Part-4 is the hardest thing I've ever written (still writing!).

Hope you like my version of this track.

Originally posted by: TanBan

I started reading it even before you sent me the PM because I know that when I see something from you, it is going to be good. So I was very happy when I started reading it. I just hope that the strength of character that you have shown till date in other stories will be shown here too and we will not get that wishy-washy Arnav who doubts on everything and everybody. I just hope that their marriage scenario plays out differently. Please, don't let Shyam ruin this even in the fiction world, yet again. 😊

Oh! That's such an awesome thing to say! Thank you! 😳 🤗

I'm nervous now coz you'll probably be disappointed with the turn of events here. This is my version of Arnav's redemption as we got such a lame one in the show. I didn't want to take away from the original, but wanted to see what I can do with the story after Arnav mistrusts Khushi.

Strength of character...I guess I can never write Khushi exactly like in the show. Her lack of education and bad English aside, I think she's a smart girl...beautiful, independent, loving and street smart. That'll stay intact here too, hopefully!

Thanks for always liking and commenting on my stories. It really does mean the world to me! 😊

Love,
Sin.

Originally posted by: Bibliobibulus

Part 3 - see, this is more like it! Khushi has a shaatir dimaag of her own. Why would Arnav write anything in Hindi? Sigh.. Sin, thanks for taking a botched story line and injecting some sense into it.. Loved the update!

P, thanks!! 😳 🤗

There are so many loopholes in so many scenes, episodes, tracks! When I re-watch the show, it frustrates me no end! I can't imagine how writers can't remember their own work...or maybe they kept switching writers...I don;t know. Anyway, not that my stories don't have loopholes in them. 😆

Hope you like the future updates too. It's going to get very rough from here on forward! 😔

Originally posted by: MoonBow.

Woo.. So things are going on a different track.

What is he gonna do now?

And i am cursing Arnav so much. But in the show i so sympathized with him..Oh god! 😆

Oh, he's going to get much, much worse here!

This is more of a redemption story. I hope you're in for a rough ride. 😳

Originally posted by: pravallika

Wow!! Loved this storyline. . Instead of threatening her to get married to him, he is asking her to stay back for her sister's sake... and asking her to meet him on the pool side..good idea to stop her than hurting everyone in the process of forcing her for marriage. .. is he going to confront kushi about her affair with shyam? ?? Does he ask her to get married to him to prove her innocence? ?? 😕

Waiting limon

Excellent song selection ❤️ .. very apt for the situation 👏 ⭐️

Thanks P! 😃

I don't think I ever agreed with him getting married to her forcefully like that in the show, though I really enjoyed the track to be honest. I'm a sucker for the angry, irrational ASR who hurts Khushi but hurts himself more in the process. I just think it's just such a far fetched idea in reality.

I hope you like the future updates too. Will post the next part tomorrow.

Originally posted by: canapoem

Instead of forcing her to marry, this was a better solution.

Arnav is torn between heart and mind.

His heart wants to believe Khushi but mind says she is a two timer.

What a frustrated situation for Arnav.

Lets see when Khushi comes to the poolside, will he confront her? Will she tell him the truth?

And will Arnav even trust her?

Nice song selection.

Oh, don't be so sure Kavi. It's going to get real bad from here on forward.

Believe me, Arnav will confront her and Khushi will tell him her side. Isn't that the logical way to go about this? Now whether Arnav trusts her or not...that's still up in the air! 😊

It's very important to me that you approve of the songs I have chosen. I went with 'Tadap tadap ke' in the 2nd part. I just couldn't write around any of the songs you gave me...all excellent for the situation of course. Having chosen the songs first and then writing around them is proving to be quite a herculean task. 😳

wow...u r updating the parts quickly. so the flow of emotions are being maintained in the readers too.

Atnav is hurt beacuse he thinks khushi is after shyam and for that he hurt her like that till the blood came out???

And he claims to live her and being betrayed? Thats how much he live and trust her? How much he knows her that he didnt tale ling to tag her as characterless?

Khushi is right time for some answers and glad that she figured that it was shyam eho wrote that message and asked her to come to terrace.

Originally posted by: rk2127

Atnav is hurt beacuse he thinks khushi is after shyam and for that he hurt her like that till the blood came out???

And he claims to live her and being betrayed? Thats how much he live and trust her? How much he knows her that he didnt tale ling to tag her as characterless?

Khushi is right time for some answers and glad that she figured that it was shyam eho wrote that message and asked her to come to terrace.

That's our ASR for you...his love and his hate are extremes, isn't it? His anger, his irrationality, his ego...uff!

He needs to grovel and beg and redeem himself coz he's going to be even more worse!

Thanks for always liking and commenting. 😃