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Saraa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: Simi1711

Nope, baby doll!
I love you guys spamming my threads.. It makes me apple pie happy! 😆😳

Awww...

It makes me cheese cake happy to spam your threads instead of anyone else's because you are such a cutie pie and a good human being!😆😳😃

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Smitakshi Guha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: ..KittyKat..

Awww...

It makes me cheese cake happy to spam your threads instead of anyone else's because you are such a cutie pie and a good human being!😆😳😃

Oh em gee!

Ye thoda zyada hui gava! 😉😆

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SUCHISMITA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#213

woo-hoo

its almost time 🥳

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Saraa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: Simi1711

Oh em gee!
Ye thoda zyada hui gava! 😉😆

Arey hume nai pata hoga toh kise pata hoga! You are so supportive... your stories show that!

You are a fighter aren't these qualities of a cutie pie?😳

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Saraa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: Suchi_ASR
woo-hoo
its almost time 🥳

Yup, yup!

Its update time!😃😃

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SUCHISMITA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: ..KittyKat..

Yup, yup!

Its update time!😃😃

😃😆

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Smitakshi Guha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: ..KittyKat..

Arey hume nai pata hoga toh kise pata hoga! You are so supportive... your stories show that!
You are a fighter aren't these qualities of a cutie pie?😳

Aww!

Thanks lovely! 🤗

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Smitakshi Guha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#218

NOTE:

Phew!

So honest confession- It wasn't easy for me to write this chapter.😕

But I still did, and I don't know how well I did it.

So please do let me know what you feel about this update.😆😉😊

Secondly, two readers had PM'ed me asking whether the poems I put up in my chapters in this story are written by me as well.

The answer to that is Yes. The poems I put up (as and where necessary) in the chapters here are also a part of my creative writing. 😊

Third, kindly DON'T reserve your posts if you have no intention of coming back and un-reserving it. It really makes me feel bad.🤢

Lastly, I would only like to repeat that please make sure you read each and every update carefully, and also listen to the songs wherever they are placed in the updates. 😳

Thank you.

Loads of love,

Simi

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Saraa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#219

First of All, Sorry for updating this post after so long! I was ill! Ya right after my birthday!I had fever! 😭

And then, thank you for dedicating the post to me, it really means a lot.😳

And now going on with the story, the poems your write, my gracious god, are magnificent. They bring out the 'soul' of the story. They are written with such flawlessness which only a established poet could write. They are so beautiful to read.

I suggest that you make a poem only update or write a story in form of a poem like The Golden Gate by Vikram Seth, it will be a treat to relish. And I notice you even use the rhyming scheme in some paras but to put it through out the poem is to be done and it will become perfection.

I, personally, would love it.

The chemistry between the two souls is lavishly presently and I love it when you add quotes in between the parts. These quotes enhance the beauty of the chapter by a great extent.

There is still a little tension or hesitation on Khushi's part first which is showed on her part but with the subtlety you made her express it makes me awestruck.

Then there is Arnav who is trying his best to make her more comfortable with his gestures, like a man who has a priced possession in his hands and never wants to lose it.

And from the your stories, I reckon you are into Greeko-Roman mythology. You seem to love it, don't you?😊

Well, I love it too! 😳

The wishes of our heart.. The wishes that define... Us... The wishes are our everything...

It is a very apt statement for the story. Wishes of a heart- Khushi wishes that her Prince Charming will come along and sweep her off her feet but her heart has been broken, her wishes have been unheard and her heart has been broken. That's what defines the Khushi we see now.

And Arnav already defines his wish to be forever in Khushi's arms like this. But time cannot be paused, time is never constant, it flows like an waves in the ocean, wishes our Arnav askes cannot be heard too.

Arnav/Ocean- Well, has a deep meaning to it, Khushi in her dreams was drowning in a ocean, I can't think of a significance but it means something. I hope it does.😆

Arnav asks about Sehaj and Khushi blatantly replies, her strong belief that Sehaj exists. Her reality is vague to her. Arnav is still not part of her.

And the bracelet which she has been wearing for a long time must have had some significance, no wonder she wears it in every ball. She was very close to her father indeed. No wonder she agreed to marry Ryan. There must have been some reasons behind it too.

To resurrect her from this shallow life she was living in despite being such an intense soul.

To pull her out of her misery and suffering and show her that life didn't need to be spent in the confinements of four wells.

To bring her out of the perimeters of her imaginary world and prove it to her that if she wanted it, she could make her reality far better than her yesterday.

Khushi is an introvert and is very afraid to come out of the confinements of the four walls, she is not confident enough that other people will understand her emotions. therefore, she restricts herself to the 'perimeters of her imaginary world' where there is Sehaj who guides,understands and give compassion when needed (when her father was away from her for work) to her.

"Wounds of the heart can't be healed. Wounds that are on the outside are just mere reflections of the wounds inflicted within the mind."

Khushi cries not because of the wounds on the outside but the wounds made on the inside. She is hurt, very hurt as she can't tell her sorrows to anyone except Sehaj.

She was feeling very weak in the moment when she found her only solace in the man which her heart chose and hence she kissed him. But she needed him. He is her only medicine. He is the cure to her sorrows.

But alas, she has to face the reality in the end, Ryan Roy has to be her husband till all the things mend.

Love,

Saraa😳

Edited by ..KittyKat.. - 9 years ago

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Deepa Vasudev

@dv19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#220

Suspense suspense suspense..

Loved how he is and wants to care for her..

Figuring out what is the brutal suffering which she is enduring..

The way Iyou have written is completely poetical...

Wonderful...

Edited by dv19 - 9 years ago

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