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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: farheen75

As usual fabulous.

Thank u so much!

What Arnav said was simply unforgivable but I could expect him to retaliate like this especially after his outburst at the poolside. It was always extremely easy for him to vent his anger at khushi.

I know right... I can just simply imagine Arnav to keep on saying unforgivable things to Khushi.

I bet if the show was to go on, Arnav would have been the one to constantly doubting khushi. He loved her with all his heart but without respect and khushi didn't do anything to made him respect her. This is my biggest grudge against her character.

I completely agree with what you have to say here! I mean seriously, not only Khushi's character was butchered but likewise with ASR. He just wasn't a suspicious useless angry fellow. Arnav's anger always had a reason, a purpose. From avoiding falling in love to suppressing his feelings... then it kind of lost reason :P

The writers showed her becoming a doormat for everybody she loved, hence her appalling treatment from buaji calling her an orphan, Payal snubbing her after contract marriage, her Anna's refusal to let her enter the house.

Completely true!

The only person who loved her truly was her bauji, who stood by her and I really want you to explore this relationship in your story. I want him to confront Arnav regarding his treatment of khushi.

Ah, dearest papa's princess - our darling Khushi. Well that angle may or may not be there so please don't build expectations - but everyone will get a justified end :)

During the whole Sheetal fiasco, especially the basketball match, he never understood her feelings or insecurity. He never reached out to alleviate her fears, heck he never missed her when she left the court unnoticed. He casually strolled in the room asking her why didn't u make jalebis?

Sigh, so true. Just want to stop recalling that or that will leave me writing another angsty tale!

I absolutely hated it when he blasted her after anjilli's over the top drama about killing her baby and khushi packed her bags bcz she didn't want anjilli ji to suffer bcz of her. I wanted her to leave not bcz of anjilli but bcz of her own self respect and dignity. Sadly it didn't happen and what we had was that awful birthday track where khushi acted like a clown and afterwards Arnav's while aim was to bed her.

Khushi = clown. Arnav = sexually frustrated.

Why was the simmering heat between the two exchanged for a dimwit Khushi and a really confused Arnav?

I am so loving this mature take on their post marriage relationship, where khushi is not melting in his arms or their explosive chemistry is not the answer to all their problems.

Thank you so much! I feel gratified!

How can they have a smooth sailing when they don't even know each other as individuals. Arnav never bothered to understand her, it was always what he and his precious di went through after their parents death, but hey khushi also lost her parent and that too at a younger age than both these siblings. Arnav never asked her how she is coped with her loss.

I just loved what you pointed out - really :D

I hope you will explore all these areas in your story.

Wait and watch!

Love you for your wonderful comment <3


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lechuarshi

there u nailed it...

Thank you so much dear!

👏..she is a simple girl with a lots of dreams..but is very ready to compromise her dreams and happiness for her lover...
But Arnv here is total pig..😡😡,,he should realize his relationship wid khushi is not like his past flings were his gfs would take it and leave it...
he already know khushi and her self respect..she only sacrifices it for her loved ones...Arnv till today took her a granted. Very pathetic...A marriage will only work if both partners r willing...

As far as Arnav being a complete pig is concerned... I would ask you to wait till the next chapter :) And our poor little Khushi... *sigh* well first she will break, but only to emerge stronger than before <3 Count me on that!

Khushi understood him...she is just a teenager..it is his right to clear her doubt but still he only increasing her insecurity by staying in Sheetals company...

But i like it when she replied that...Shayad nahi...

Thank you so much!

NK loved khushi...NK was very smitten with Khushi...Arnav very well knew and understand NK liked khushi But Khushi chose him..she didnt know ..his big ego..
But he should also realize dat if khushi knew dat...she always have this choice infront of her...
Arnv knew NK is perfect for khushi.. Unlike him he will not hurt her Arnv...

That's true... we all knew that NK was the firangi male version of our loveable Khushi. But would NK really be the best guy for Khushi?*thinking mode*

Now khushi is firm wid her decision...Go girl...
he accused her once again..I am ASR..he is always right.. That should be break first...and it did break a little when she replied...She and Garima, His father nd Shyam, His momma and Anji in connection...

Khushi had been blessed to see things from every perspective :) Unlike Arnav...

He is again wid his Bathemazi..😡😡 and the blackmailing thing just gross..
Now that is my girl...Very true...If Akash let payal go upon listening to Arnavs words then there is no need for that marriage...

I was dying to write that line - trust me!

U turned it as a SS..I am happy...
😆😆

THANKS A TON


Originally posted by: MysticRiver

brilliantly written...very hard-hitting..please continue..


Thank you so much! Will continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ranogill

wow...what a argument ...and a hard hitting one..ways to go khushi...kaash in real ipk esa ho paata...now will arnav change his way or still he be on 'asr apni kismat khud likhta hai'... i loved what khushi said when asr threatened he will separate payal and aakash..'do it'... yes asr do it ..do the party with sheetal until dawn, do try separate payal and aakash..do everything but do not take your wife for granted ...awesome


Thank you so much girl! I loved your comment - really boosted me! Taking for granted - one of the most painful things that can ever happen to a relationship! I really hope you like the forthcoming chapters!

Originally posted by: nandrajogdivya

Awesome superb luv it my fav


Thanks you so much dear!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: farheen75

I didn't know u had uploaded more than 1 part, I read the other parts after commenting on the first part.

OMG, you are really sweet to be commenting again <3

Akash would have never said no to Arnav as he loved his brother way too much, but would khushi's sister, amma and buaji show this kind of love for her? I am certain that the answer to this question is a big No, so I am really looking forward to how u will take this story forward from here. The realistic reaction from the above mentioned ladies will be to force khushi back into Arnav's life, thereby making him more aloof from khushi or he might have some mercy on her by not taunting the life out of her now but save this incident for future reference.

Hmm... actually I simply have to admit that I fell in love with this new dimension you have showed. The family love displayed for either of the protagonists. Well, I so wish to write something dramatic but wouldn't want to escape from reality so the initial bit might disappoint you. And yes, pushing them back to Arnav's house is just so the ladies type.

Khushi leaving her parents house and starting a new life somewhere else is also not an option as Arnav won't let that happen plus the kind of person khushi is, she won't compromise on her sister and her child's life. It seems to me that in the show, khushi was a part of Payal's dowry. The due course of action in this situation is khushi will be forced to come back but I want her to fight her corner whilst living with Arnav. I want her to be reserved with everyone in the family, not going out of her way to facilitate them, giving Arnav a cold shoulder as well and make him grovel to her and to play her cards smartly to beat sheetal at her own game.

The only thing I'll say is that everyone will get their desserts for their actions.


Originally posted by: aanchu19

very apt replied by khushi. you cannot force your love upon anyone but the story tiltte suggests something else. I want to see how these two mend their relations.


Thanks, well the story title will reveal its meaning later into the plot :) For now... enjoy the ride!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: welcomebro

firstly👏 for you...i couldnot come out of your writing after 3rd chapter.you have done a great job.can you pm me because i dont want to lose this diamond writer's work...


Thank you so much dear! Sure I'll PM you!

Originally posted by: ChocolateArshi

Take a bow dost!!!Really I want to hug you:))For making my evng superb<3
Yaar how can you write so beautifully😆
I just loved it so much❤️
I really admired your way of writing...!!!
Keep writing and stay blessed:)
You are really really a blessed writer!!Trust me!
Wanna say more but I'm not best in commenting:(sorry!
Continue shhhooonnn;)


THANK YOU SO MUCH.


Okay, here's a hug from me 🤗

You're trifle too generous in ur comment 😳 Thank you so much for your words - means a lot!

Originally posted by: Anu567

Sree,

Superb continuation of the story. And a VM on one of my favourite songs from Khoobsoorat...lovely! Wish it hadn't had a rather sad end but to be expected with Preet! Loved the reversal of movement...everything moving back in the end, masterful technique! 👏

Happy V-day!

Best


Thanks a ton dear... well after all it was Preet and it was just about Arnav being the ASR... so couldn't think of it being a happy end *sniff* But thank you so much for appreciating both - my story and VM. All this means a ton lot for me - really!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Zeehana

It is not just Khushi crying, I also cried reading this update.

I hope Arnav can grow up and accept his flaws then deny them.
Loved Reading this chapter...Will love to read loads more


Oh dear, thank you so much for your comment - it overwhelms me! 😳

Originally posted by: radhika_BG

Great update... I am glad it happened... Emotional... Terrifying.. Thrilling... Intense... This is the face everyone of us always avoided bcz we Loved them so much to see them grew apart ..specially for this reason...!!!

But u made it happened...even though it was sad...I'd like to see how their relationship grows mature from this point...!!!
Loved your style... It is very unique...!!!!
Happy Valentine's day...!!!


Thank you so much dear! Got sooo boosted to write the next chapter. It's true, cause it's fiction we tend to avoid things which distress us but I couldn't help and write this... thanks for following this story and loving it!


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sanamsky

i love the way you write this amazing outstanding job


Thank u so much dear!

Originally posted by: anjs


ok...hope to see Arnav wooing Khushi some more...and also show Sheetal her place if she is really trying to snatch him from Khushi.


Well you'll certainly see a lot of the missing spine of Khushi's :)

Originally posted by: vibha92

god!!...brilliant concept!!!!...

superbly written!!!...
totally loving it!!...


Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: kkrnightriders

I am speechless after reading your updates.
All I can manage to say is that you are fabulous and exceptional writer. 👏
A very different take on ipk.
I'm happy that u converted it into SS.
Continue soon.


Thanks a ton for your comment - it really means a lot when you all appreciate my work.



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: WanieA

oh dear me.. thank u..thousand times...superb mind blowing updates and worth waiting...to be honest with u, i tried my best to understand the hindi dialog to the best i can..but please small big request.. can u translate it..i wont dwell on why arnav doing wats he is doing even when he knows its hurting khushi...now the ball is in his court to understand and came terms with his redemption...dun make khushi go back to buaji house, make her go somewhere else..like if she has a fren and can stay for some times. Distance makes the heart grow fonder but if there isn't any trust, understand and respect..its just a empty blank black spot...


Thank you so much for such and honest and wonderful comment! Don't worry, the next chapters will be extensively in English. Even most of the dialogues for your convenience :) True distance makes the heart grow fonder but at times tougher things are required - I really hope u love the next chapter.

Originally posted by: Fuzzbucket

oh dear! heart breaking and I just couldn't make myself comment on the 2 and 3rd chapter! some very hurtful things were said between them and i agree IPK was all about Arnav and Khushi :) get them back together soon;) thanks for the update.


I'm sorry dear if the things were too much... but from next chapter we're straight on Arnav and Khushi. Well yeah, it's always been about Arnav and Khushi :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kshubhangi

I congratulate you for an awesome story. I always love when a woman fights for herself. this is why I enjoyed IPKKND. but due its course it lost its charm. your plot gives what I want.
Arnav is broken due to his past that doesn't mean khushi is any different. its the way we cope pain and mold ourself. khushi learned being happy whereas Arnav became cynical.


Thank you so much! Just reawakening that spirit! You know the thing that I have highlighted in bold, am going to give a little take on that :)

Originally posted by: abivicky86

beautifully written you have dealt with this situation from a different perspective


Thank u so much!

Originally posted by: rosalineak

U r a great writer,nothing more to say...


I am deeply gratified!


Thank you so much! Really

Originally posted by: smat

Brilliant updates


Thanks!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Waiting!! 😳 Uffo kab aayegi,thoda jaldi...pljjj

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