ArHi OS - Of giggles & sighs | Expressions of Love

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Ocean of Happiness

Posted: 9 years ago

Rae, truly a gasp inducing OS, a wonderful Expression of Love.

The level of comfort and ease with each other just what one would like them to have after all these years. Khushi getting more confident of her femininity and Arnav loosening up as he lets go of the demons of the past.

I like how you've said he dons his ASR mask when he steps out. The smiling relaxed Arnav who lets his guard down is this way only with her.

Now if only those soft silky locks she loves running her hand through could be trimmed ever so slightly ...

Loved the banner :)

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Srijanee

@luvflicksgirl

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

Such a beautiful depiction of love and emotions... and needs...

Touched my heart

Loved it 👏

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shruti

@shruti46

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

AnjelTeen I m sure when u thought to write this ..You didnt imagined them in Shanti Van.;) Some HP , OP would have definatly interrupted them..

This is so beautifully written.As if it actually transpired ..

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

Wow, Rae.. Loved it! The blend of passion, familiarity, knowledge of one another, and comfort in each other's arms.. It was beautiful and believable.. I loved Khushi's adventurous avatar. Mrs. Sherni knows what she wants, and isn't afraid to ask for it! And I loved how they started with giggles and ended in sighs. Beautifully written..

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Jay

@Sharaa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Wonderfully penned...

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littlemissstar

@littlemissstar

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

That was sooo beautiful ..all the emotions were depicted sooo amazingly
Loved it totally
It was just perfect .. 😊
I wish you plan to repost a few of your works ..waiting for that eagerly

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Archana M H

@archana.mh17

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

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Unres- Firstly, I am sorry for such a late unres. While it was mostly because I had exams going on, the other reason was that I didn't really know what I could say that would do justice to this piece.

Can I just say this was easily one of the best written pieces integrating the physical & the emotional? It really was. You know you have a way with words. And, what you do with those words, weaving this story of these characters with such sensitivity & subtlety, leaves me speechless. I am so glad that intimacy on every level was touched upon here because physical is as important as the emotional. And, not many manage to write sex with ease. Yours truly sucks at it. This was perfect, AT. It had the right balance of lust, desire, longing, love. Tastefully raunchy. Does that make sense? I don't know, that is what I felt, though. It was beautiful. The connect between these two characters is so evident in their every interaction. Lovely. Absolutely lovely.

Nothing I say will be good enough for this OS but here it is because this OS demands that the readers comment. It is one such piece.

Thank you for giving your readers another wonderful story.

Edited by archana.mh17 - 9 years ago