Arshi OS: The Talk *Note on Page 3* - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hamsa, girl you are rocking it!! This was so beautifully written and so aptly executed. I liked the title, it made me curious. Ha didnt the episode make us cry and writhe? You have very beautifully found a new angle to the whole talk! She is confident, I loved this Khushi. This makes me wish that the serial really had this. She still sees hope shining and I can sense that, Could we get a Part two? Of Arnav realising his faults, they (Arnav & Anjali) both fighting their demons and then bringing Khushi back...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I wished if you would have been the script writer, the show would have rocked and hit even more than now... 😊
Your convictions and imaginations are beyond words, I truly love being a part of your readers list... ❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing... hats off to writer for this..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome os.
Loved it.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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My dear buddies,

Thank you so much for liking this OS😃 To be honest, I did not expect this great response😳

This was one episode where I hated Khushi's Arnavji. Because I did expect this kind of reaction from The ASR.

The show was more focused on Khushi's pain. But I felt, the Khushi that we saw for all months before that particular episode would have latched on to Arnav's pain and would have wanted to make it better. Khushi was never a weak character. Yes, she cried when she was in pain but she had the will to bounce back every single time that Arnav hurt her. She had always tried to take away his pain rather than concentrating on hers.That is how I envisioned Khushi in this OS.

Yes she did come across as a confident person but what i had in mind was that she was driven by the pain that Arnav felt when Anjali pushed him out of her room and life. And if Khushi could do something to alleviate that pain she would do it. Running away from problems was not Khushi's style. She believed in taking all the problems head on right?

And Anjali, the way her character was portrayed in show is something I can never accept. A young girl, if she can bounce back from the pain of losing her parents and a broken marriage on the same day, she can bounce back from this too, can't she? Yes the pain of betrayal is something that is too difficult to come out of. But as far s I observed Anjali's character, she was not that dumb to not see any of the signs of Shyam's betrayal. I felt she needed a push to just come to terms with reality.

So that is the thought that was behind this OS.

I will reply to all your comments soon dearies.

Hamsa.😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woow...khushi hit a master stroke
Awesome dear...
Plz continue it...plzzz plzzz

Thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome :)
do write 2nd part where we see arnav repenting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Indeed this talk was very much needed. It gave Anjali a paty to think. Beautifully written. Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ranogill

i would have been happy if it would have happen like that..loved it

Thank you dear😊 We all really wanted a different way of exposing Shyam, isn't it?

Originally posted by: abivicky86

what an awesome os really hats off to you and truly said if ipk would have gone this way kushi s status would be high we would have seen a strong anjali

Thank you dear😊 Its true that Khushi's status would have been high. Anjali is a strong lady actually. I personally feel, she is much stronger than Khushi herself. Its not easy to bounce back from so many betrayals on one day (her first wedding). If she could do that and still be optimistic about life, then she can come out of this too. Don't ya think?

Originally posted by: kowsiRa

Nice that kushi has a talk with anjali and opems her nice,i hope u write a next shot in which we see arnav wooing kushi back

Thank you dear😊 As of now I don't have any plans to continue this OS. If the words flow right and if I am satisfied with that, I will continue. But as of now, no plans for that. I hope you understand

Originally posted by: asrkkgsrlover

I wnt arnav to woo khushi back...cause there is no such way they could live apart and happy and bright future no pls 😭

True that Arnav and Khushi cannot live apart and be happy but for now, I don't have plans to continue this dear. If the words flow right and if I am satisfied with that, I will continue. But as of now, no plans for that. I hope you understand
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SwrlngElephants

Hamsa! What do I say? I have no words. You did such a splendid job here, You gave a redeeming dimension to that whole scenario. I hated Arnav when he said all those vile things to Khushi just because he had no control over his anger.
Now I think they just dragged all the things in the drama. Shyam's truth would have been so much easier to be revealed had they took every point and proved it.
I loved the Khushi here. So Independenct and resolute.

I love the dialogues above. Khushi's pain actually made me curse Arnav. He hurt her then when he was hurting too with her.
The Talk is so justified here.
But I wish for a happy ending for them both.
Consider giving us an extension to this where Arnav will redeem himself.


Thank you so much Warda😊
That was one single episode where every single Arnav fan hated him to the core, wasn't it?😆
But then when we see it again, there seems to be a justification for his anger. Though I don't approve of his words. I could see the pain and the fear of losing his Di like his mother.
I am not yet sure if I would continue this OS dear. If the words flow right and if I am satisfied with that, I will continue. But as of now, no plans for that. I hope you understand

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