Arshi FS : Darkness and Light ~ Final Part up pg 9

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Sadh123

@Sadh123

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Beautiful ending. Glad that Arnav and Khushi are crossing a new threshold together to live a happy life.. this was a feel good read and I absolutely enjoyed reading it.. thanks for penning this down..

And happy birthday to your friend.. hope she has an awesome day!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

A very sweet story! Good job! :)

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Hey woow arsh are married. This is sooo nice. Arnav and khushi are the two sides of the same coin. Excellent. Superb.

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shakrobaaj

@shakrobaaj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Res.
Will un-res soon.

Edited:

Part 1,
very beautiful start,
Khushi and her nature to love all and spread happiness around her ..
aww so Arnav is pretending to stay away from someone with hazal colored eyes?
ufff but it's obvious he lost so much in his life and now afraid to connect himself with anybody.
The rain ...Arnav's knock knock at Gupta's door, Garima's worry for her daughter and she shared her worries with Arnav...👏👏

Part 2,
awww my my..so sweet..
Khushi and her sweet chirpy nature..how I love her bubbly-ness ..so cute like little baby ...
and what a hilarious tirade of hers about certain LG😳
what will happen when she will be face to face with him?
such a adorable update..
come on..i want to give you 🤗.

Part 3,
😆

all embarrassed eh?
even I laughed out loud when she told him how could she address him as Handsome Hunk? It's million dollar question for her but price worthy right ? She was the only person who is able to rise a laughter from his heart to his lips and gave his life a new light to live without worry at least for few hours. But I am sure he now knew he is connected to His Khushi and may be this connection will lead them towards the beautiful phase of Love.

You are a very sweet and beautiful writer.

Part 4,
Do I have to let you know How much I loved this part?
actually I loved this FS so much,
beautiful ending of this super sweet FS,
I loved the way both siblings called "Amma"...
and their beautiful friendship turned in to love...
simply awesome.
I loved it and would love to read more such sweet stories on our beloved Arshi.
Thanks a lot for sharing this sweet, adorable and beautiful story with us.

Edited by shakrobaaj - 9 years ago

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shakrobaaj

@shakrobaaj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Edited my comment .😊

Edited by shakrobaaj - 9 years ago

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MIT DEY

@mit0905

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

True love... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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mhd72

@mhd72

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

That was a beautiful and light read. You could manage to portray the differences in the personalities of ArShi in this stipulated piece very well. Liked it.

Much love,

Mili.